Sam McPadden Professor Jan Rieman English 1103 November 18, 2010

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For this piece I used a lot of background knowledge from a mission trip that I took the summer of 2010. I learned a ton about the current lives of Native American people and took a lot of interest in the reservation in general. I really like the structure of this paper and did a lot of planning to contribute to it. I feel that I may have gone off task at parts but I feel that what I say will impact someone.

The Removing of The Indian We know hardly anything about the country that we live in. In general, our own lives are too difficult to overlook. Relatively, we have everything easy; what seem like huge problems to us are very small elsewhere. What is very hard to believe is that there are people who are living in our borders who live life nothing like the ³typical´ American. The Sioux tribe in South Dakota lives every day with their natural amenities dwindling including their native language and literature. Many people don¶t know that there are tons of languages native to the US not including English. One of the most incredible of these is called Lakota. It is the language spoken by the Sioux people of the Pine Ridge Indian Reservation in South Dakota. What is so wonderful and different about the language is how each word really speaks to the earth. Every word or phrase tells a story which explains a phenomenon (Gahagan). This
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McPadden 2 really shows you what type of people the Lakota actually are. They find pleasure in the natural things around them and they worship what they are given for free, or at least those who know it do. To the people who speak Lakota, it means something very special. Language in general is something which defines a group of people, no matter what it is. The linguistic diversity among the different tribes of the US is what creates the cultural diversity among them as well (Biava 46). A tribe¶s certain language is the clearest way to show the differences among them. Tribes use their language to show their culture through prayers, stories, values, philosophy, and beliefs. All of these things differ throughout groups, thus the importance of diversity of language. So, what really separates Lakota from English? The difference in words in general is a big part but the real separation comes in usages. The Lakota people see Language as a tool for speaking. They are the masters of the ³oral literacy´ and use spoken word more than any other type (White-Kaulaity 560). Speaking is most important for telling stories from memory, which entails the majority of their literacy. Stories are how they keep track of history of their ancestors and the world and also how they account for different phenomenon¶s that arise in nature. You may be wondering what is stopping them from reading and writing. English speakers take some pride in stories as well but WE have a strong written language. There are many reasons the Lakota people and many other Indian tribes only have accounts of their language in spoken form. Literacy other than speaking is seen as negative. ³Native American culture demands that people be involved in activities with tangible, practical,
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McPadden 3 and visible results. Reading and writing are not considered to be such activities´ (WhiteKaulaity 561). Writing is actually considered a very static and dry activity that they are not interested in (Biava 48). These two activities are not appealing and have never really been used unless necessary. Native Americans see them more as tasks than a ctivities. The spoken word is sacred to the Lakota for a few cultural reasons as well. In general among Native Americans, the elders in the tribe are held in very high statute. It is one of the most disrespectful things for a younger person to bring shame upon them. When an elder is speaking, you must not speak or make eye contact because it is seen as confrontational. It is also disrespectful to ask questions because the elder will voluntarily tell you what they want you to know. Obviously, elders are respected, thus, they are the only ones who are allowed to hold the knowledge of literacy. This system creates a strong need for the younger people to rely on and trust someone older. The written language is only known by the elders because it establishes a certain amount of control. There is security and secrecy in limited knowledge of written word and much fear is felt towards giving that control up to outsiders (Biava 48). Language is sacred to culture and writing it down is seen diminishing that sacredness. Hatred towards reading and writing among Lakota roots from the history of Native Americans and English settlers. Native Americans have a very negative impression of white people as a whole. During the time of The Cold War, Americans had very bold ideas of assimilation. They wanted all Native Americans to speak English in order to help communication and make the country what they considered the be more united. Many Native American children were sent to Catholic boarding schools and had
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McPadden 4 the ³Indian beat out of them´ (Biava 46). In these boarding schools whites forced them to write everything down in English. If they disobeyed, they would be abused. Because of this, the Native Americans still view writing as detachment from the outside world which is a principal that is very different from those of their language (Biava 48). Children were afraid to speak their own language in fear of punishments so many abandoned it. There were few that rebelled and remember it, some still living on the res ervation. Last year, I got the pleasure of speaking to an elder who went through this experience. Fortunately, this man was one of the few living elders who still knows the Lakota language, making him a living library (Gahagan). Because of the mistreatment, many Native Americans abandoned their language completely and lost interest in it. They were afraid to be Lakota. Currently, the last generation of fluent speakers ends in people who are in their forties and fifties (BlueArm 164). This statistic needs to be changed. The Lakota language is in endangerment and there is very little being done to stop this. Many people are unaware of the conditions experienced on an Indian reservation. The majority of people picture tepees, colorful headdresses and close family bonds. Indians are known to be free, living by the land, having battles and killing buffalo. Perhaps this was what was experienced years ago but not today. The Pine Ridge Indian Reservation in South Dakota was a place that I could never have imagined. I have never seen such poverty all around as I did in Eagle Butte, SD. The most noticeable problems were the lack of resources. The reservation is the size of Connecticut located four hours away from many normal conveniences such as Home Depot, a vet an d a fully functioning
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McPadden 5 hospital. The biggest establishments in the area include a Dollar Tree and Dairy Queen. Children have free time to do anything they please, but they are directed towards acts such as burglary and gangs. Another shocking aspect of the reservation was the amount of stray animals around. They were clearly mistreated with their matted hair, begging for food, closely resembling small skeletons. Some people say that the very obvious neglecting of the Native American animals mirrors the way that the Native American people neglect the children. They are often starving, abused, and forgotten about. Children are born every day into a family that doesn¶t want them and can¶t afford them.. The unemployment rate is far higher than anywhere in the US and so people must find ways to occupy their time to get their minds away from troubles: television and gangs. The teen and child suicide rate is startlingly high and only increasing. Because of the very depressive nature of the situations people are in, literacy tends to be the last thing on their minds. Having spent time with young children, I can say that they are just like any typical US citizens. Most don¶t realize their lives are terrible and so they are very eager to just enjoy life. As the kids get older though, they start to get into bad situations with violence and drugs because they see it is what the older people do. It is a terrible cycle but can it be fixed? Can literacy and language help The Pine Ridge Indian Reservation go back to it¶s roots? Many solutions have been suggested but there still seem to be no huge changes. A former English teacher on the Indian Reservation, Marlinda White-Kaulity thinks that reading and writing need to be taught in order to be loved. She thinks that if they are introduced to a child at a young age, they will be prevalent in people¶s lives forever

McPadden 6 (White-Kaulity 562). It can be assumed that the children¶s love for literature will keep them out of some trouble but what about the Lakota language being taught again? In a survey, ³over 80% of respondents agreed or strongly agreed with issues that support language preservation efforts´ but there is no effort being taken to support this (BlueArm 162). White-Kaulity thinks ³we can¶t have a clear vision if we always have tears in our eyes about our past´ (562). This isn¶t suggesting that Native Americans should forget about their past troubles. Instead they should embrace their culture, against many American¶s wishes and make their language once again, prevalent in their lives. It seems very simple, but the actual steps to this intended solution are much more difficult than assumed. As I mentioned before, the entire reservation is poverty-stricken. Any suggestions to bring language back involve money. For example hiring well-trained teachers, changing road signs, making a reference book, etc. A Lakota woman comes to the following conclusion: ³Lakota people must first try to overcome many things before they can reclaim the language- poverty and drugs, alcohol, violence, suicide, and a loss of identity for a younger generation caught in between two worlds´ (Gahagan). It seems as though there are too many problems in a land that for many reasons, is too unstructured to add a language change into the mix. There is no single solution to this massive problem besides creating a time machine, but that could be very dangerous to the fate of the world. Instead, we need to help. It is our duty as Americans to erase the stigma that our ancestors left for us. Our small problems in life don¶t compare to a six year-old Native American attempting suicide because he can¶t find comfort in his life and is afraid to return home. We need to
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McPadden 7 get Lakota back to South Dakota. Children find comfort in books and literacy fosters family bonds. An interest in these things will not only keep kids out of trouble, but also wanting to learn more. So next time you get a flat tire or break your cell phone think about this: there are people in our own country who haven¶t showered in weeks and have absolutely no food to put on the table. These problems stem from their lack of identity because of the dissolving of their cultural framework: Language. All problems are relative, but they can in no way be compared.

Sam, You certainly offer some important reminders here about how privileged we all are. It can be easy to forget that. I¶m glad you¶ve been able to have these experiences. You show great passion for your topic and what you¶d like to see happen. The biggest area to pay attention to for revision in this paper is coherence. I¶d really like to see more linking between all of your idea (both within paragraphs and within the paper as a whole). It might be helpful to make an outline of what you¶ve got here and then make an outline for what you hope to do and see how the two compare. If you choose this for your portfolio, I¶m happy to go over this with you in person to talk about it.

Thanks for all of your help! After reading the paper again I did realize that if I for one main idea, the paper will be much stronger. I am going to use this paper as my process piece so this talk back will really be important. I plan on doing just what you said though. I want to make a rubric and really be open to making big changes about the essay as a

whole. I am going to really focus on the structure of each paragraph because I realize that I really did move too far away from doing that. At some parts I think that it also still seems as though I am rambling. I also think that if I want to make my point stronger I should compare the Indian literacy process of learning to ours. In editing, I am going to take the advice that you have given and work with it. Overall, I realize that to make the paper more interesting, I need to think of one clear point. I think that this is what I am lacking most in this paper.

Works Cited Biava, Christina. ³Native American Languages and Literacy: Issues of Orthograph y Choice and Bilingual Education.´ Kansas Working Papers in Linguistics. 15:2 (1990) : 45-59. ERIC. Web. 1 November 2010. BlueArm, Marion. ³Assessing Lakota Language Teaching Issues on the Cheyenne River Reservation.´ Indigenous Languages across the Community. (2002) : 2-17. ERIC. Web. 1 November 2010. Gahagan, Kayla. ³Indian Reservation Works to Save Lakota Language.´ Indian Country Today. N.P., 30 April 2010. Web. 29 October 2010. White-Kaulaity, Marlinda. ³Reflections on Native American Reading; A Seed, A Tool, and A Weapon.´ Journal of Adolescent and Adult Literacy 50:7 International Reading Association (2007) : 560-569. ERIC. Web. 26 October 2010.

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