Forever is a Promise (Renesmee and Jacob Story) Chapter five: Scent.
Characters: Renesmee “Nessie” Carlie Cullen Jacob “Jake” Black Austin Metchle (New mystery character!!) Nahuel (Pronounced: Nahwell) Bella Cullen Edward Cullen (Note: This chapter... Well here comes the wolf pack!! BTW this chapter is kinda boring but has a little suspense in it… So yeah :D Read and comment. Written by Akshara Srri. R.K 8888888888
Recap: Renesmee’s POV But all his stares gave another meaning… Curiosity. Adoring…? Does he like me?
“Renesmee!” Someone called me. I cleared my thoughts. I tilted my head to see Alice. “Come ‘ere’” She said. I walked towards her. I looked behind me to see if Austin was still there. He was nowhere to be found. Even his car was not found in the parking lot. What was wrong with him? “Come on!” Alice said impatiently. I followed her. She stopped where my family stood. –Awkward silence“How much did he tell you?” Mom asked me. I looked at her “He told me everything. Everything he had ever known” I answered. “Renesmee I’m sorry” Mom apologized “I shouldn’t have hid things like this from you. It’s my entire fault”
“Mom, actually I am so sorry… I was really rude and I didn’t even know how the words came out of my mouth just like that” I said, ashamed of myself. “I’m sorry dad” I apologized to my dad “It’s okay sweetheart… We did a wrong thing too” Dad said. I nodded. “Guess the rest of the conversation lies with the dog” Rosalie provoked a comment. “Wha-“ Before I could say that, I saw a tall creature coming towards us. Jacob. “Hey Nessie” He breathed. “I guess I was right... Anyways we were leaving bye” Said Aunt Rose and left the place. The others waved us goodbye and went towards their cars. It was only me and Jacob. “I am driving you home” He said “Kay” I whispered. We walked towards his rabbit. I made myself comfortable in it. Jacob started the engine. I was lost in my thoughts. Austin was such a mystery. Everything about him made me really curious. His weird purple eyes, pale and cold hard skin. I gasped. Was he a… Vampire? No he couldn’t be… If he was one, my family would have found it earlier. “Nessie!” “Nessie!” Called Jacob and shook me “What’s wrong?” He asked. Of course, he would have sensed my fear. “Nothing… Just thinking about my day” I lied. Renesmee! You’re getting good at lying.
“Really?... What did you do today at school?” He asked me, like how a father asks his child. I decided to explain about everything that happened today, except Austin. For some reason, I did not want Jacob to find out about him. “Do you have any homework to do today, Ness?” Jacob asked. “mmh.. No, because it’s my first day” I answered. He nodded. “Why?” I asked curiously “Nothing… I was just planning to take you to La Push and meet the pack. My way of congratulating you, because you went to School for the first time” He said glancing at me and at the same time concentrating on the road. “That’s not nothing Jacob… I would love to come to La Push… It’s been like forever since I met the pack” I said. It was true. Those guys were like my brothers. Or a sister might I add. And their girlfriends were like my best friends. Emily, Kim, Rachel and I got together pretty well. We used to hang out a lot when I was young. But now, I kinda lost touch with them all. “Good because the girls would literally kill me if I don’t bring you there” He added with a laugh. I snorted. I sighed “First of all, I have to ask my dad” 88888888888888 I was really thankful that my dad permitted me to go to La Push. He trusted me with Jacob. That was good. Jacob pulled over at Billy’s house to grab some food for the pack and also for him.
“Is Billy home?” I asked Jacob, while we walked towards his small red house. “Yeah… I think he is” He said, peeking through the window to make sure if Billy was there. Billy Black, Jacob’s father was a good man. He treated the Cullens good despite of the differences. He loved me like a daughter, which made me feel good. I had always been with Jacob’s father when I was a child. But now, I am sure that he would get a different view of me. “Dad!” Jacob called his father. “In the living room, son” I heard Billy answer. Jacob gestured me to walk in and I did “Hey Billy!” I said. Billy turned his attention from the television to me. He wheeled towards me. “Ah, Nessie!... I almost didn’t recognize you dear… God look how beautiful you are!” He complimented. I blushed. Billy was growing old. He did have some health problems. I could see the weakness in his face. He had bags under his eyes and an old wrinkled face with some alternate strands of white hair in his jet black hair. “Do you want something to eat?” Billy asked me. Before I could even answer, Jacob yelled from the kitchen… “No dad, we’re fine… We were just leaving” He came out with some snacks in his hands “Ready to go, Nessie?” He asked me. “Yeah” I answered “Bye Billy” I said “Bye dad” Jacob said and we headed outside. “Where are we going now?” I asked him
“To Emily’s. The guys and the girls are there” He said and started the car. Well! I hope going to La Push will distract me from things! 888888888
Ness and I were heading to La Push. The reason why I was bringing Nessie to La Push was that I felt like I was getting separated from my future girlfriend. I wanted to be with her. I needed to be with her. And I thought that High School was separating me and Ness. So I decided to come up with a reason and tried to get Nessie alone with me for at least a day. Well tomorrow was Saturday but…Still it hurt me to be away from Nessie. The pain was unexplainable. Well now that I am alone with Nessie… I want this to go well. To be honest, it was not going well. My palms gripped the steering wheel tight and I had sweaty palms! My heart started beating crazy around her! “Well… I don’t like this one” Nessie said suddenly. I didn’t know what exactly she was talking about until she tried to reach her hand towards the car’s stereo. She didn’t like country songs, I get it. I wanted to make it easier for her, so I also tried to reach the stereo to change the song. Our hands touched. It sent a shock through my spine as soon as our skin came in contact. She must have noticed it. Her beautiful chocolate brown eyes found my eyes. I sat there, like an idiot and stared at her for a while.
I thought I heard a car coming in the front. I quickly turned my attention towards the steering wheel and pulled over to a corner. I heard the man in the other car yelling at us. “Woah!” She said as she took deep breaths. “Are you okay?” I knew that I sounded like an idiot but whatever that just happened now, was my fault. I shouldn’t have stared at her like that. What to do? She was a queen of distraction! Once we both relaxed, I started the car again. I still remember the expression on her face when we looked at each other. Did she feel it too? Did she feel what I felt towards her too? Love? Well, I hope she did….. 888888888888
Soon, we reached Emily’s. Sam, Paul, Jared, Brady, Collin, Quil and Leah were there chatting with each other. The rest of the imprints were not there. I am guessing they would be taking a walk in the beach. Luke and Cole, who recently joined Sam’s pack, were also there. The pack was getting larger nowadays! Nessie and I got out of the car. She landed her feet on the ground gracefully. “Hey kiddo!” Yelled Paul, getting everyone’s attention towards us. Nessie blushed. God! How much I loved that blush! “Hey” Nessie said shyly. I fist bumped with Paul. Paul and I, surprisingly got together pretty well. Besides the ‘You-
imprinted-on-my-sis-and-you-stole-my-food’ thing… We were fine. Everyone in the pack greeted Nessie happily, even Leah. They thought of her as family, which made me happy. “You’ve grown a freaking lot!” exclaimed Jared. I shot him a glare and he looked down. “I know” Nessie whispered quietly. I noticed everybody’s looks, they were happy to see her; But I didn’t like the way Luke stared at her. Like he had never seen a girl before. Though he was a new member of the pack, he knew about this ‘imprinting’ thing. He must learn to control himself before I phase and rip him off into shreds! “Is that lollipop?” We all heard a voice behind me. Ness and I turned back to find Emily, Kim and Rachel. “Emily, Kim, Rachel!” Nessie exclaimed happily but lowly. ‘Lollipop’ was Nessie’s nickname from the imprints, because they loved her pink cheeks and her sweet blush. The imprints would also call me ‘Chocolate’. I didn’t know why they called me like that until Rachel explained to me that chocolates and lollipops are a great combination… Whatever. Nessie hugged each one of them. “I missed you!” She said to them “We missed you too, lollipop!” They said in unison. “You still haven’t stopped calling me that!” complained Nessie, which made them laugh. “You don’t know how much these girls were threatening poor Jakey to get you down here. Too whiney” Paul said to Nessie, earning a growl from me. I still don’t know what my sister liked it in Paul. He was always ordering everybody, speaks dirty than the rest of the pack and an arrogant wolf; whereas Rachel was kind-hearted and a down to earth person. I guess imprinting can also attract exact opposites!
“Where’s Claire?” Nessie asked, changing the subject. “She went to her playschool… She’ll return soon” Quil said confidently and more to himself. He missed her and couldn’t stay away from her. Poor Quil! “Oh” Nessie said. “Come on!... We have lots to talk about” Said Kim and caught Nessie by the hand. Please, don’t go away from my sight My heart begged. But my thoughts were interrupted by an agonized howl which erupted through the forest. Everyone tensed and the imprints gasped. Embry was in trouble! Seth came running from the forest. He was sweating badly “Help!.... Embry and I were trying to track down a vampire… But it attacked him” He said, which made the whole pack run into the forest to phase. I looked at Nessie apologetically. A stupid bloodsucking leech just ruined the time I could spend with my Nessie. Damn it! I cursed in my thoughts. “Seth… I have to go phase… Take Nessie home!” I demanded. He hesitated for a moment, because he did not want us to hunt down the vampire alone but then he listened to me. I ran to the forest as fast as I could. I could feel Nessie’s worried gaze on the back of me. But I had to go and save my brother. I heard the sound of an engine and Seth and Nessie were not there. I phased into a wolf, leaving my clothes get ripped in the process. Jacob… Paul and I will take care of Embry… You and your pack go try to hunt the leech Sam’s deep voice entered my mind. We took different directions. I ran towards the scent. It was heading towards the west. I could smell it.
I was nearing it. And that was when I got a glimpse of the leech’s face. It had weird purple eyelids. Like it had worn a blue lens over its natural crimson red eyes. The vampire was jumping from tree to tree. I almost caught the hem of his shirt and tried to bring him down… But he tried to go towards another direction. I followed him. He was nearing the cliff and so was I. That was when he jumped into the water, leaving me clueless with no trace of him. I was still watching the water, expecting for that leech to come out. But, I could not smell him because of the water. With dissatisfaction, I headed back into the woods. Whatever this stupid creature was… It was freaky! Not like the other vampires we have hunted so far. This creature must have come here for a cause. For someone. For the Cullens maybe. But I promised myself that I wouldn’t even let it lay a finger on my Nessie. That freaking leech will never touch her. If only, it was out there for her….. TO BE CONTINUED…..
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Sneak peek of Chapter five: Alice stiffened suddenly “I see something” She said. What the heck? Edward gasped slightly obviously after reading Alice’s mind. “Can you tell me what the hell is going on in here?” exclaimed Bella. The rest of the Cullens, including me, looked at Edward for an answer. “Renee… She’s coming to Forks to visit us” The Cullens gasped.