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not praying,
November 1998
a short story
by Janet Ference
Meg and Avis,
not praying,
November 1998
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“When was the last time you did anything like pray?” It was a belligerent question.
Avis could hear the punch in her own voice. It wasn’t a question at all. She’d flown in on a
Avis had left her cameras in the rental car. She needed one right now.
“June said pray.” Meg emphasized each word with a hammered nod of her head.
“You pray.” Avis wanted to go for the door, but she didn’t. She walked to a corner
They’d been in the hospital chapel about half an hour. In that time, she’d missed
shots of two arresting subjects. When they first entered the room, there had been an elderly
gentleman in the front row. He was wearing an old brown pin-stripe suit that must have fit
him once before he’d become so gaunt. His long wisps of white hair were perfectly parted
and combed. He was praying with his eyes closed, so deep in repose he might have been
asleep, but his back and neck were erect, and his chin was tipped up toward his Maker. He
wouldn’t have noticed her capturing his image. It would have been a striking photograph.
The other soul would have been more difficult to steal. A woman had opened the door,
almost let it shush shut without entering, but then caught it and slipped past it into the
room. She did one complete circuit of the perimeter of the place, as though she was looking
for something or someone. Her eyes traveled up and down the walls, across the empty seats,
lit briefly on the elderly man, swept past Avis and Meg, and stared long at the square little
podium. She looked to the ceiling. She examined the floor. Having completed her slow
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circle, the woman stopped and pulled a rosary from her pocket, kissed it with open eyes and
square shoulders, hooked it on the back of a chair near the door, and then she left. When
she did, Avis noticed the crucifix on that rosary was the only cross in the room. It would
have taken several shots in succession to get a clear picture of the woman’s mystery, but the
keeper of the whole bunch would have been the image of her light brown hand, just as it
lifted from the red rosary on the polished blond wood of the chair. Even a photo of the
rosary itself, mutely hanging there, whether abandoned or placed wasn’t clear, would have
Now they were alone. The man had left not long after the woman. When he did, all
the light had followed him out the door. Avis had spent a moment looking for a switch, until
“You reckon they’ll get it all?” Meg said, breaking the long silence.
No. Avis reckoned no such thing. It was aggressive Stage IV metastatic breast cancer,
and it had spread to June’s lung, and that meant it was in her bloodstream and who knows
“You should have been here to hear that doctor go on about it.”
Avis walked over, intending to sit by her sister. “You know I would have been if I
Avis stopped short and sat two seats away from her.
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“You did not. You waited till you talked to the man yourself.”
It was true. Meg had called Avis at nearly midnight Wednesday night, and she
sounded crazy. First off, she had said June had cancer. The next thing she said was they had
to go and see on Thursday. She couldn’t be sure. Then she went on about a pot of soup
falling off the railing and how it must have made an awful mess on the walkway below and
how she hadn’t even thought to go down and clean that up and how the people down there
were going to wake up and go out the door and step in it and how she just couldn’t deal with
that right then. Meg had refused to put June on the phone that night, even though Avis had
insisted. Avis was sure that June would have made more sense than Meg did, and maybe then
As it was, Avis had bided her time overnight and into the next day, waiting for news,
certain Meg was just in one of her panics and things would be okay. When Meg had finally
called Avis again about mid-day on Thursday, she was in a fine state.
Meg had said it was true. June had cancer, and it was bad. She said the doctor was
going to operate immediately. Avis had been unable to comprehend that. Meg’s words had
hit her ear like no more than the whorl of a screech owl hooting up a tree.
“You told me to call him. You said I’d better hear it for myself,” Avis said. Meg had
“June didn’t sleep all night. That man said, surgery, and she said, now, and he said,
tomorrow, and I said, no. June just nodded her head. She nodded her head the rest of the
day and half the night. Like a bobble-head doll. I wanted to slap her silly.”
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“I’m sure he’s a very good surgeon,” Avis said. If his scalpel cut like his tongue, it
would be clean and precise and thorough. When he had said his piece, surgery, maybe
radiation, probably chemotherapy down the road, he had repeated, Stage IV, and he had said,
do you understand, and Avis had said, yes. At the time, she was sitting on the tile floor of
her little kitchen in Soho, with the cat crawling over her ankles, and a cup of coffee out of
reach on the counter, and she was nodding her head, just like June. She clearly remembered
Avis didn’t understand, though, not even now in this god-awful hospital chapel. She
knew what Stage IV meant. She got ‘metastatic,’ ‘aggressive,’ ‘lung.’ It was the how of it that
was beyond her. She knew cancer could move quickly. She’d heard women talk. Sometimes it
was like this. What was not possible was that it was June.
“Okay, now.” Meg was knitting her hands together so tightly the knuckles were bared
“I need another cup of coffee.” Avis was on her feet, turning toward the door.
“You sit yourself down, Avis Bigsby.” It was their Mama’s voice Meg used.
Avis sat down and let her eyes lose focus. ‘Now I lay me down to sleep,’ sing-songed
itself in the hollow of her throat where unspoken words are formed.
There was a long silence. In a silence that long in a place like this, six people could
have died.
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“We should go check in again,” Avis said. Not daring to turn away from her sister, she
closed her eyes to picture the door behind her. In the darkroom of her mind, she saw the
rosary on the back of the chair instead, its red glass beads and its dying Jesus hanging there.
Meg said, “They know where to find us. They said it would be hours. They got us on
A social worker had been attending to people in the family waiting room for surgery.
When Meg had said ‘chapel,’ the silly woman had bowed her own damn head for a moment.
Then she scribbled not ‘Chapel,’ but ‘Chaplain,’ next to their names. ‘June Blackstone, breast
It occurred to Avis that a chaplain might indeed appear at any moment. It seemed
unlikely in this most secular of settings, but the very possibility made her legs squirm. “I
Avis wasn’t having it this time. What good had prayers ever done their Mama? Avis
stood up and looked down at her big sister. “You want to say some kind of prayer, go ahead
Meg looked up, and her eyes were damp, and Avis tried, but she couldn’t look away.
“Do you believe in God?” Meg asked. It was a genuine question. Avis could tell.
“I do. And he’s no friend of mine. I think God hates us Bigsby girls.”
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“What kind of a prayer would they say in her church?” Avis asked. June went to some
“Okay. Our Father who art in heaven,” Avis started. Avis was sure their father was
Meg said, “I hadn’t been to no kind of church in the longest kind of time. June goes
every Sunday. Don’t seem right she’s the one to go and get so sick.”
Avis knew Meg had dabbled in one and another kinds of churches over the years,
when her believer boyfriends could get her to go, and of course Meg had long followed all
that twelve-step higher power business, even when she wasn’t on the wagon.
“No,” said Avis, and there was nothing more to say about that.
“You remember that grand old Presbyterian church up here to Greenville, the one
where Mama took us when we weren’t but little things?” Meg asked.
Avis remembered long dusty drives, sitting still in the back seat of Mr. Clark’s 1940
royal blue 4-door Ford with its round lines and white wall tires, each in their Sunday-best
Easter dresses, June in the middle to put a stop to the least hint of a squabble, the back of
the front seat so high they couldn’t even see their Mama driving, the windows shut against
the dust of the back roads, and the air in the car so thick she’d have to pretend she was
underwater and hold her breath the whole way there. It gave her a headache every Sunday.
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“How on earth did Mama ever get Mr. Clark to loan her that car? It was a beauty. I
always wondered. I think I’ve got pictures of that car somewhere,” Avis said.
“You didn’t know? She cleaned his house every Sunday, before dawn. She’d be back
“Oh, he didn’t know. Dead drunk. Never missed her. Till Mr. Clark’s sister came
visiting from Pensacola, walked in on Mama scrubbing the tub, so the story goes. Didn’t take
but a minute before all of Hickok was up in arms. Way people talk, you know. You
remember. Daddy put Mama in the hospital that time, broken collar bone, busted spleen, her
“Don’t know. Cleaning is all I heard. But Mr. Clark was a widow man, and he had him
“Mama?”
Meg looked at Avis like she was still four years old. “You think she was a saint?”
“Why did she need to carry us clear to Greenville, anyway?” Avis asked. Avis could
still see that highfalutin Presbyterian church with its tall white pillars like a movie mansion
and its pecan trees shading the parking lot. Mama would drive to the edge of the lot every
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time to park almost out of sight, and the car would come to a stop to the cracking of
pecans. After church the car would be surrounded by squirrels and bold black and blue birds,
and Mama would wave her arms as she strode into them, sending them flocking into the
trees.
On the inside, that huge church had stained glass windows as tall as the pillars out
front. They filled the walls on both sides, and from where her family sat in the last pew, Avis
could stare at those pictures, and the hard candy colors of arced light they shone on the
“You really don’t know? You must know. Don’t be stupid. June’s in a bad way. Don’t
act the fool,” Meg said. “We got to say a prayer. What did they used to say there?”
Avis thought of all those well-heeled people who didn’t speak to their Mama, and the
sermons about how they ought to be helping the poor. “I don’t remember any prayers in that
Avis stood up and she would have slapped Meg, but Meg had her face in both her
hands, her arms pressed tight to her chest. She was a fortress.
Avis tried to comprehend that. They had never been welcome there. Even at four, she
knew that. Were there cousins there, aunts and uncles? What was the matter with them? It
was a church, for Christ’s sake. She didn’t say all that. Meg was crying.
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“That was her Mama and Daddy. In the front pew. The ones who tried to pretend
they weren’t staring at us when they filed out the door. June told me. Can you imagine?”
No, Avis could not imagine. She was trying. She knew who Meg meant. They were
the bosses of the church or something. They acted like they owned the place. They always
stared at Avis and her sisters, and it made Avis feel like a bug. “The lady in the little white
crown-like hats with the bit of veil over her eyes all the time?”
“Wasn’t she just like a queen? I touched her hand once when she went by. I thought
she’d faint. The old man swept her up and helped her out the door.”
“Meg, you’ve taken leave of your senses. Mama’s parents were dead. Before we were
even born. She didn’t have any people. We were her people. We were all she had.” Avis
wasn’t sure of many things in this world, but she was sure of this. Her Mama had been an
orphan.
“No. They disowned her. When she married Daddy. She was pregnant with June. It
“It’s true. June overheard the preacher once, take Mama aside, tell her to stop
torturing herself. June told me exactly what he said. ‘Your parents don’t want you here, Mrs.
Bigsby.’ Plain as that. And he nodded his head at that dragon lady. Mama didn’t stop, though.
We went the next Sunday, same as always. Mama told that preacher that Jesus wanted her
there.”
“Lord have mercy,” Avis said. It was something her Mama would say.
“Lord have mercy,” Meg said, and again it was Mama’s voice.
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Meg was standing, wobbling like she was drunk. “Let’s get out of here,” she said.
“Thank you, Jesus,” Avis said, almost clapping. She meant it as a joke.
Meg slowly turned and stared at her. “Lord have mercy,” she said again. Then she
Avis gave her a hand, an arm, and a shoulder, and they headed for the door, hobbling
As they went past it, Avis glanced at the rosary again. Meg followed her eye and
reached out and took it, snatching it like a kid stealing candy. She did the oddest thing then.
She pulled her collar out and dropped the rosary into her bra. Avis hadn’t seen anybody do
that in forever. Meg didn’t have a bit of cleavage, so the damn thing showed, poking through
When Avis slipped out behind her sister, the door swung shut on her ass, spanking
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