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\Vanessa s Final Story: Sequence: Michala, Katlen, Eli, Grace, Denise, Abby, Renate.

Prologue: Once upon a time, seven girls were joined by a beautiful big mama nate. All of them had special qualities that made them all so unique. However, the youngest girl Vanessa still was very unsure of what her strength was. So she hoped that by her 16 Birthday she would find something to set her apart from the rest. One day Vanessa and all the girls decided to hit the Magnolia s in SOHO in the city. To get to the other stores they would to take a train, but something went terribly wrong. Vanessa accidently got on the 9/3 Train instead of the train to spring street with the rest of the group. She had no idea what to do because her train wasn t heading in the right way and she was separated from everyone. Then, the lights started flickering and out popped a girl with a butt like Kim Kardashian s. The evil A-Big-butt spoke to Vanessa, don t be foolish, you don t make the cut! The other girls have qualities that you will never possess. MUAHAHA. Good luck finding your way back home! Chapter: 1: Michala, FIERCE Vanessa stepped down from the train platform and found herself on a stage, blinded by spoitlights. She shielded her eyes, confused, and suddenly realized her head bobbing and hips swaying to the bass that shook her stomach. As she stepped forward, she looked for some indication of where she was, but instead found herself wobbling slightly in the stilettos and sequined dress that replaced her travel clothes. When she looked back up into the darkness, she saw an empty catwalk, glowing white in the black. The music flared up into a wild salsa beat, and Vanessa evolved into a fiery Latin dancing queen, flashing her sequins in the strobe lights and stalking down the runway. Right in the middle of her twirl at the end, someone caught her eye. No, it wasn t the Prince Eric lookalike. It was A. *GRUNT* Whatthenub, she s stalking me, thought Vanessa in frustration. While other spectators held up compliments and cheers, A s was a simple black X. Rejected Rejected I just got rejected. Vanessa ran back to the platform, ready to get back on the train and away from A, but instead ran into a blonde girl giving instructions to a pair of leather jeggings and some cheetah print heels Princess Rapunzel the designer of V s clothes. She looked at Vanessa, wonderstruck by her beauty. Geeeez girl, nobody ever made my clothes look THAT GOOD. Dayuuuumm. Wait til you see what these shoes just picked out for you! I think we ve found your WonderJeans. An ensemble hanging nearby struck an angelic chord. Vanessa followed the Princess back to the closet, where clothes chattered back and forth, scattered everywhere, ruining the Princess s careful planning. Aw nuts, they re

at it again, said Rapunzel, I ll never be able to fix this. I give up. V perked up at the possibility, I ll do it! I put together outfits like it s my JOOOOBBBB She whizzed around, throwing clothes on hangers and creating masterpieces. Her outfits were fierce and fancy getups worthy of, well, a princess! Ten seconds after she d started, she was finished. Vanessa stepped back, and admired her work. Not only had she put the clothes in completely perfect arrangements, she d incorporated all the right accessories, down to the last aglet. These are better than my originals!! Rapunzel exclaimed, practically drooling over the color schemes They re so daring dashing prancing vixen they re so so *GRUNT*! But wait, there was something missing. Then, Vanessa saw them, peeking shyly from behind the vanity. The WONDERJEANS. IT IS COMPLETE!!! cried Vanessa, pulling on the jeans gently. They fit perfectly; they hugged all the right curves, elongated her legs, and made her feel instantly on top. Yelling a warrior cry, she grabbed her blazer and strutted out to the catwalk, looking A straight into the eye, feeling fabulous. Satisfied, and feeling fiercer than Tyra, she hugged Rapunzel and headed back to the train. As she settled into her seat, she heard the jeans whisper a reminder: YOU, are the fiercest of them all. Scene 2 Katlen: (Vanessa is walking around aimlessly and evil A-Big-Butt pops out of nowhere) Evil A: Take that joyful smile off your face. You re in the wrong place you little nave girl. There is nothing that you should be happy for. I will bring sadness on you forever. Forever alone. (Pokahontas enters) Pokahontas: Hello there, you look quite sad. That s usually the face of a grumpy pumpy! Let me help you! There are so many that want to bring you down but all you need to do is be happy! You have your friends and your family and your beautiful smile, and animals. (end scene) Chapter 3: Eli, Independent Vanessa exchanged her goodbyes with Princess Katlen and went on her way. She really did believe she was in a fairy tale. Started thinking about all the stories her mother used to read to her and about how the princess eventually was saved by her prince charming. Vanessa ventured off into this wonderland of food and surprisingly it was like a giant buffet. Everywhere were supersized meals, from sushi to tacos, from beef to general tso and even Qdoba! When she was practically drooling from all the glorious treats, out pops out the evil cake.

Muaha, you must like me. I m sweet and so attractive looking. Everyone loves me! The evil cake said to her as he stabbed a fork into his side. He had a bright red A candle on his top and he did look delicious, but Vanessa was smarter than him. Do you know how many calories you are?! You re no good for me because in the long run you will always end up hurting me. I need to find something that is going to treat me right forever. She pushed him aside and kept walking, she knew she deserved better. A couple minutes later, a mango plops right in front of her. However, instead of going all ninja on the mango, she actually took a good look at him. He sung her a sweet song and he looked so calming as if he was actually a good thing. She started thinking again about how maybe she could have a prince charming and it could actually work out in the end. The mango sounded so perfect, so sweet and perfect. The idea of a prince charming just fully enveloped her and that s when Snow White came out. Why hello deary, I m not here to say true love isn t real but you must be careful with what you add into the pantry. I once fell in love with a poison apple and was cursed into a long itus. I was in a deep sleep for so long that I began to believe it was love. But the apple became my own personal brand of heroin and that was all wrong. I became so dependent. Snow White sat Vanessa down on a cupcake and spoke again. Hypnotizing me with all it s clever ways the apple pulled me in, but then I realized that I was stronger. Yes, stronger than an apple. So love, don t ever think that you need someone earthly figure like these deceiving foods. They may look nice on the outside, but on the inside? Snow White then took out a giant sword out of nowhere and sliced the mango in half and the inside was yucky and looked like a rotten marshmallows. Vanessa thanked Snow White for all the help in realizing that she is a strong woman who didn t need a prince charming to define her and that one-day, the right food will come along. Chapter 4: Grace, Beautiful It was a long journey to Sephora after bidding farewell to [Snow White] Vanessa had passed many animals and what seemed to be familiar faces. However, she was deeply puzzled for she could not recall their names. As she continued to encounter many people, they couldn't help by give a double take once seeing her. Vanessa thought to herself, "Is there something on my face?" Just as Vanessa was a few feet away from Sephora, she had encountered a mysterious letter( or actually encountered her?)from A. She read aloud as the letter had said, "Dear Vanessa, Roses are red as violets are blue, you are ugly. Sincerely, A." As soon as Vanessa read the short and piercing letter she felt a sudden punch in her gut as tried her best to hold back the tears. She had cried for many hours as her loud cry was heard in Sephora. A princess suddenly ran out of Sephora that looked like Ariel and it was!

"What's wrong?", asked Ariel as she tried to calm Vanessa's crying. "I was called ugly and I believe it is true! No wonder why people were looking at me earlier!", cried Vanessa. Ariel said, "I don't know what you are thinking! I see nothing but a beautiful young lady who is crying for no reason!" Vanessa stopped her crying and was interested in what she was saying. "Your beauty should not come from outward adornment, such as elaborate hairstyles and the wearing of gold jewelry or fine clothes. Rather, it should be that of your inner self, the unfading beauty of a gentle and quiet spirit, which is of great worth in God s sight," as Ariel recited the verse from memory, "Lucky for you, you're beautiful inside and out." "You're right! I am beautiful," exclaimed Vanessa with confidence. Chapter Five: Abby, Courageous Vanessa slowly creeps into a large empty building, and to her surprise, there is a glowing atmosphere filling up the empty rooms. Inside she finds a young woman covered in a layer of dust and perspiration. The woman is in her work clothes at the top of a ladder, painting hastily and happily on the walls of what looks to be a potential dining area. Vanessa steps towards the hard-working woman and looks up, "Uhm, Hi! I didn't mean to enter without any permission, but I'm just trying to find my way back home. Do you think you could help me out?" The dusty woman stops to look down in contentment at Vanessa, smiling halfway, but also keeping her one hand up at work using her paintbrush. "Why sure, I can show you around! What's your name, little lady?" "Vanessa. And you?" "Tiana. Nice to meet cha! I'm just getting some work done here so I don't miss the deadline of my place's grand opening, and I can definitely help you out!" "Thank you so much! Do you need some help here?" "Well, I mean, if you wouldn't mind! That's very sweet of you, Vanessa!" Tiana gets her another set of clothes to change into before Vanessa helps pick up from where Tiana left off on her wall, and the two get started. In the midst of all the work that Tiana needed to get done, Vanessa and her click very quickly. Tiana later finds out about Vanessa's adventure in Narnia and how she's been trying to find a way out. Vanessa explains how this land is so big and confusing, and she's scared that she'll never find her way back home.

"Well, I wouldn't know where your home is, Vanessa, and I assure you, its a big world out there. It must be crazy trying to get out of here. But I think that's what makes your adventure so exciting! You have the whole world ahead of you, and the best part about it is that you don't have to look for what you need on your own! If there's anyone that you can talk to about feeling alone, you can talk to me girl! Now, as you can see, I don't get much help around here from folks because they just see me as a poor, silly girl with a dumb dream to start her own restaurant. Hot shots with a lot of money thinkin' they can take this building away from me. But I know my family is by my side, from my sisters to my father up in Heaven who gave me this dream. And be it by great triumph or by God's help alone, I'll get my dream!" Tiana's confidence was displayed so bright you could see it in her determined eyes. Vanessa listened contently as she continued. "I know all the odds are against me, and that I'm looked down upon by all, even by my own family sometimes. But when you've got a dream this big, you just gotta find some courage somewhere so that you can get it. From the God that you hold so deep in your heart, Vanessa, I know you can go anywhere you want! Just hold on tight to what He's got, and you can go anywhere!" And from that moment, Vanessa believed in her heart God was meant for her to be somewhere. Whether it be someplace hostile or calm, as long as God was there to give her the courage, she could do anything. She realized that all of her adventures in Narnia were not just for herself, but for her to bring home to all her loved ones to share with. That became her dream, and her courage. By the end of the day, the girls had finished painting the whole building, and even the outside of restaurant as well. Vanessa got to sing songs with Tiana, and learned a great lesson. She kept a verse Tiana and sung close to her heart that went like this: The evening star is shinin' bright. So make a wish and hold on tight. There's magic in the air tonight, and anything could happen. Tiana, humbled and thankful of Vanessa's help, showed Vanessa a way back to the station, and wished her a grateful and promising travel on the way back home. Vanessa also left Tiana with a memory verse she had picked up before she got on that train to Narnia: Have I not commanded you? Be strong and courageous. Do not be afraid; do not be discouraged, for the Lord your God will be with you wherever you go. -Joshua 1:9 Chapter Six: Denise, Irreplaceable Chapter: RENATE (as she said it on the phone)

Now Vanessa and she had never seen a rainbow. All of her friends told her that the rainbow was beautiful and had bright beautiful colors but she had never seen one. So she tried all she can to find the rainbow. She climbed the highest mountain, traveled to the ends of the earth, floated on the highest clouds, and even swam the under the sea.(get it?) She did all she could to find the rainbow but she never could find it. She sat down on a turtle and started crying ill never see a rainbow ill never see it . But then her fairy godmother Fiona came about and said nothing you can do will ever make a rainbow. But all it takes is just a little faith that it will be there. But then the evil A-Big-Butt came out and yelled in an evil voice, Impossible, rainbows don t exist! Fiona roared, Don t listen to A-Big-Butt Vanessa, she is evil and she is lying to you! You just have to believe! Vanessa asked her fairy godmother But how can I believe when I don t see it? Fiona took her by the hand and said Just believe! Then all of a sudden the evil A-BigButt started to shake and tremble. A bright glow shined through her in all directions and sure enough it started to rain. (wth?) And as promised, a beautiful rainbow shot through sky because Vanessa had faith. The evil A-Big-Butt regained composure and sat next to the turtle, But I don t understand, I thought that I would have changed into something better. But then Fiona took A-Big-Butt by the hand and said, You were already the best you can be, it s what you do with your talents that matters. So later that night, Fiona found a tree and made crowns for Vanessa and A-Big-Butt. Vanessa finally realized that she didn t have to find some specific quality to make her unique. She was unique and gifted all on her own. And then they all lived happily ever after. The End. Epilogue: Vanessa found her way back to the girls in SOHO and she told them everything she learned. But now it s time for her to start a new story in the real world. This is meant for you to know how special you really are and to write down all the crazy things you will experience as you grow more beautifully inside and out. Be sure to keep us up to date!

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