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of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree with these views? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.Write at least 250 words. model answer: Nowadays, there are lots of advertisements on television or on the streets. Some people think that the advertising boosts the sales of goods and it encourages people to buy things unnecessarily. This arguments may be true. In my country, many advertising companies produce advertisements with famous and popular actors or singers. People, especially youngsters, buy goods that their favourite singer advertise, although they do not really need the products. Also, on the television screen, a product may look gorgeous and good quality. As a result of it, people often buy goods without enough consideration. Consumers may not actually need it but they buy goods impulsively soon after they watch the advertising. Furthermore, as many customers buy a particular product due to its advertising campaign, the other people may be affected by the trend, even if the product is not of the real needs of the society. On the other hand, there are various aspects against these arguments. Moreover, it is people's choice to make a decision to buy goods. Advertising may be not a cause of customers' buying habits. Individuals have their own spending habits. If they have got enough disposable Income then the right to mane a decision¶s given to them. No one actually can fudge whether the goods sold are the real needs of the society or not. In addition, as there should be a limited amount of disposable income consumers are able to spend, people try to allocate their budgets. They cannot be simply swayed by those advertisements. In conclusion, as customers have their own strong opinions and standard of good quality goods, it¶s better to leave them to make their own decision in buy goods. It¶s fairly difficult to say everyone¶s swayed by advertising and buy good impulsively. However, in sensitive area of businesses such as toy industries, it may be necessary to band advertising to those children as children have not got enough ability to control themselves or to know what they need. (328 words) This is an answer written by a candidate who achieved a Band 7.5 score. Here is the examiner's comment: The way in which the candidate has responded to the task is a strong point of this script. It is a well-developed answer that addresses the issues relevantly and at length. The writer introduces
For example. however. I agree with the idea that sporting events can be necessary for international relations and national unity. Similarly. We all realized that they were very normal sports fans even though they were occasionally very secretive. and some linkers are not always fully appropriate. As a fan of those competitions. examines both sides of the argument and expresses a clear position. so this limits the rating for this criterion. . many South Koreans were quite surprised at that moment when North Koreans shouted and cried during the match. For instance. after the matches. Through the sports. some sports matches can make international relations worse. Sometimes. Olympics and other international games work for easing tensions among different nations. I believe that games can not be the fundamental ways for the sound patriotism or peaceful international relations. Popular events like the football world cup and other international sporting occasions are essential in easing international tensions and releasing patriotic emotions in a safe way. a sophisticated range of structures is used but there are too many minor errors and omissions (such as in the use of prepositions and basic subject/verb agreement) to reach Band 8. the two rivals blame each other and their patriotic emotions explode in an aggressive way. A wide range of vocabulary is used accurately and precisely. a hundreds of North Korean supporters came to South Korea with the footballers and they were very excited during the sporting events. South and North Korea have football games regularly which give two nations a chance to understand each other deeply. First of all. Points are well¬argued and supported with examples. Nevertheless these mistakes do not reduce the clarity of the answer and overall a wide range of language is used with a high level of proficiency. a couple of Korean players in Japan are suffered from invisible discrimination after the match between two countries. the World Cup. I think that international sporting occasions can be one of the good ways to ease tensions or to release patriotism safely. In this essay. In conclusion.the topic. There are too many errors in cohesion. in spite of one or two awkward expressions and some rare errors. Even if it sounds ridiculous. football or baseball games between Korea and Japan are always big matches in two countries where full of tensions overflow. On the other hand. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? The World Cup football match and the Olympics are held worldwide with great national support and expectations. In the mid 1990s. The answer is well-organised and the message is easy to follow with clear paragraphing and linking of ideas. two divided nations could reduce their political and ideological tensions and could feel the patriotic unity. However. As far as I know. I will think about the effects of these popular sporting events. Even much worse scenario is that the troubles caused by losing games affect the players directly.
g. In some countries children have very strict rules of behaviour. First. which leads to many other mental diseases as well. it is now time to question how meaningful these blasts are. is it effective to do so while other alternatives are available? Lands on earth are no yet effectively used. In some cases children would be crazier to do these things from where well try to keep them away. every year. Also. money spent on space exploration is a complete waste. Those in rural areas or third-world nations do no even know how to prevent common threatening diseases like AIDS and lung cancer. which can be a main reason for their poor performance in their field. Some people think that there should have some strict rules of behaviour for children. Morever they can be. . until all urgent and important matters in this globe have been solved. Furthermore. solar and nuclear energy) have not yet been widely-used. in other countries they are allowed to do almost anything they want. people should only invest in space exploration providing that () early-mentioned urgent and important matters have been solved. It is not a common sense at all to invest million dollars researching and producing foods for astronauts (for space exploration purpose). while everyday thousands of people are starving. the discovery of outer space only serves a minor group of people if the majority are even not well-educated. but I disagree with this statement. All these ?not. In the nutshell.yets? need money. money bumped on space exploration is of no meaning. That is why costly space discovery programs are a waste of money. New energy resources (e. This essay aims to explain why it is questionable. celebrate their achievements in space exploration . Threats of plagues have not yet been deterred. However. Wherever it is a reality that sometimes more restrictions can cause more frustration in children. Sometimes they feel themselves under pressure. Nations after nations. new energy resources or to deter potential threat to globe. purposes of space exploration campaign should be studied carefully and other alternatives should be considered before money is wasted. We can see in today?s modernized era nobody likes to get some restrictions upon them. The money could be better spent on other things. To what extent should children have to follow rules? Freedom plays a mandatory role in everybody?s life. Then. whether it would be a child or an adult. every day. behave like a stubborn.With all the troubles in the world today. Nevertheless. some may argue that the purpose of space exploration are to discover new lands.
They can know the importance of relationships. They can know regarding their cultural values as well. I would like to say that children should be teach regarding the value of their customs. Moreover_ if we never draw attention upon the children? main activities then they may be acquiring bad company. then they can¶t be good human beings in their future life. In a nutshell. like if we usually ignore our children? bad habits. It would be better to make them good human beings in their coming future. They can know regarding the value of respect for their elders. rituals and respect towards their elders for their future life.In other words _ we have to look for other aspects as well. but most of the extra restriction should be being avoided. .