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A lot of good can come from human cloning, but we better watch out how we use this life

changing technology for new life.

Cloning has opened up many new entry ways of saving lives and new findings

throughout the nation. Human cloning has been used to save quit a few lives for

humans already, and I think that society should not mock this amazing scientific finding,

of new life . I think that human cloning should not take place because it raises to many

vital questions. People really voiced, when animal organs were put into human beings

so we could save lives. Today it has been accepted like any other surgery or transplant

they use it all the time in the medical fields as a everyday plan to save lives. I think

many issues will be addressed on cloning, but within a few years or so, it should be

considered scientific and morally accepted.

Scientists and computers cannot solve every aspect of cloning. If cloning humans is

permitted, there is no promise that the results can be controlled. Cloning could change

mankind as we know it, and this is a big issue at hand. A few companies have been

changing the genes of animals with the genes of humans to make proteins that actually

fight off cancer and other life threating diseases. Another company has reproduced

I want to talk to you about cloning animals to eat and feast upon.cows in this manor. Would that not be a amazing way to live longer and have our meat by products to the maximum standards from the FDA? I am 40 years old now and do not have any children of my own and would love to have one soon with my husband. then why can we not clone animals to be very meaty and good for us. that they could clone one for her and her husband with their own DNA. Some people say that cloning a new life . how can some people think that this is not a great? miracle that we have discovered. with all the vitamins and minerals that we need to be extra healthy in life. cannot produce a baby on her own. that can produce milk good enough for a human baby to drink with all the right proteins in it. the creation of juice. for new life that has been born. What I think is cool about human cloning is the facts that if a woman like me. While I am here with the facts about cloning animals to enhance human lives and their well beings. In my opinion. I believe that if we can come up with a natural breast milk that infants can live on (in case the mother cannot produce breast milk).

We have already learned how to cure all kinds of diseases from the time when the Plague was killing everybody and the leprosy back before Christ. then GOD or whatever higher power you believe in. would of not put this into our hands and minds to find in the first place. I think that they should be able to take the good and best genes out of humans and produce a really smart and intelligence human being with no flaws at all. That’s where we get to the question.can lead to being tolerable to diseases and might come out some kind of retard. will they be like super heroes and will we be able to control them if they get out of control or will we have to eliminate them if they don’t come out right in their minds. so why is human cloning any different from taking cells and organs to cure and replace what is killing humans inside their bodies anyways? Haven’t we used technology to put airplanes in the sky or . The last thing that I want to talk about in human cloning is this powerful scientific miracle against the will of GOD? Are we playing the role of GOD or is this technology a landing in the devils playground? I mean that it is probably impossible to clone a soul. that was eating people up from the outside in. if they would turn against us and try to destroy us. Don’t you think so? I believe that if we were not intended to clone and make new lives.

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Today it has been accepted like any other surgery or transplant they use it all the time in the medical fields as a everyday plan to save lives. I believe that if we can come up with a natural breast milk that infants can live on (in case the mother cannot produce breast milk). with all the vitamins and minerals that we need to be extra healthy in life. We have already learned how to cure all kinds of diseases from the time when the Plague was killing everybody and the leprosy back before Christ. In my opinion. If cloning humans is permitted. then why can we not clone animals to be very meaty and good for us. That’s where we get to the question. the creation of juice. Scientists and computers cannot solve every aspect of cloning. I think that they should be able to take the good and best genes out of humans and produce a really smart and intelligence human being with no flaws at all. that was eating people up from the outside in. Cloning could change mankind as we know it. that can produce milk good enough for a human baby to drink with all the right proteins in it. Human cloning and making new lives or replacing . so why is human cloning any different from taking cells and organs to cure and replace what is killing humans inside their bodies anyways? Haven’t we used technology to put airplanes in the sky or space shuttles into orbit and back. will they be like super heroes and will we be able to control them if they get out of control or will we have to eliminate them if they don’t come out right in their minds. and I think that society should not mock this amazing scientific finding. think about it. I want to talk to you about cloning animals to eat and feast upon. Cloning has opened up many new entry ways of saving lives and new findings throughout the nation. I think many issues will be addressed on cloning. there is no promise that the results can be controlled. and this is a big issue at hand. People really voiced. of new life . if they would turn against us and try to destroy us. that they could clone one for her and her husband with their own DNA. Another company has reproduced cows in this manor. While I am here with the facts about cloning animals to enhance human lives and their well beings. Human cloning has been used to save quit a few lives for humans already. Some people say that cloning a new life can lead to being tolerable to diseases and might come out some kind of retard. I think that human cloning should not take place because it raises to many vital questions. but within a few years or so. how can some people think that this is not a great? miracle that we have discovered. Would that not be a amazing way to live longer and have our meat by products to the maximum standards from the FDA? I am 40 years old now and do not have any children of my own and would love to have one soon with my husband. What I think is cool about human cloning is the facts that if a woman like me. but we better watch out how we use this life changing technology for new life. The last thing that I want to talk about in human cloning is this powerful scientific miracle against the will of GOD? Are we playing the role of GOD or is this technology a landing in the devils playground? I mean that it is probably impossible to clone a soul. for new life that has been born. cannot produce a baby on her own.Document Viewer TurnitinOriginality Report     Processed on: 14-Nov-2011 11:21 PM CST ID: 214743166 Word Count: 807 Submitted: 1 Human CloningBy Robin Ornellas Similarity Index What's this? 0% Similarity by Source Internet Sources: 0% Publications: 0% Student Papers: N/A A lot of good can come from human cloning. it should be considered scientific and morally accepted. then GOD or whatever higher power you believe in. A few companies have been changing the genes of animals with the genes of humans to make proteins that actually fight off cancer and other life threating diseases. would of not put this into our hands and minds to find in the first place. Don’t you think so? I believe that if we were not intended to clone and make new lives. when animal organs were put into human beings so we could save lives.

there is a lot of good perspectives that will come out of human cloning and more and more questions might rise as we take of create many more new lives. . So.the ones we already have is a gift from GOD to move us up to the next level of generations as we use our powerful minds more and more as the years go by.