A lot of good can come from human cloning, but we better watch out how we use this life

changing technology for new life.

Cloning has opened up many new entry ways of saving lives and new findings

throughout the nation. Human cloning has been used to save quit a few lives for

humans already, and I think that society should not mock this amazing scientific finding,

of new life . I think that human cloning should not take place because it raises to many

vital questions. People really voiced, when animal organs were put into human beings

so we could save lives. Today it has been accepted like any other surgery or transplant

they use it all the time in the medical fields as a everyday plan to save lives. I think

many issues will be addressed on cloning, but within a few years or so, it should be

considered scientific and morally accepted.

Scientists and computers cannot solve every aspect of cloning. If cloning humans is

permitted, there is no promise that the results can be controlled. Cloning could change

mankind as we know it, and this is a big issue at hand. A few companies have been

changing the genes of animals with the genes of humans to make proteins that actually

fight off cancer and other life threating diseases. Another company has reproduced

cows in this manor, that can produce milk good enough for a human baby to drink with

all the right proteins in it. In my opinion, how can some people think that this is not a

great? miracle that we have discovered, the creation of juice, for new life that has been

born.

While I am here with the facts about cloning animals to enhance human lives and

their well beings, I want to talk to you about cloning animals to eat and feast upon. I

believe that if we can come up with a natural breast milk that infants can live on (in case

the mother cannot produce breast milk), then why can we not clone animals to be very

meaty and good for us, with all the vitamins and minerals that we need to be extra

healthy in life. Would that not be a amazing way to live longer and have our meat by

products to the maximum standards from the FDA?

I am 40 years old now and do not have any children of my own and would love to

have one soon with my husband. What I think is cool about human cloning is the facts

that if a woman like me, cannot produce a baby on her own, that they could clone one

for her and her husband with their own DNA. Some people say that cloning a new life

can lead to being tolerable to diseases and might come out some kind of retard. I think

that they should be able to take the good and best genes out of humans and produce a really smart and intelligence human being with no flaws at all. Thats where we get to

the question, will they be like super heroes and will we be able to control them if they get out of control or will we have to eliminate them if they dont come out right in their

minds, if they would turn against us and try to destroy us.

The last thing that I want to talk about in human cloning is this powerful scientific

miracle against the will of GOD? Are we playing the role of GOD or is this technology a

landing in the devils playground? I mean that it is probably impossible to clone a soul. Dont you think so? I believe that if we were not intended to clone and make new lives,

then GOD or whatever higher power you believe in, would of not put this into our hands

and minds to find in the first place. We have already learned how to cure all kinds of

diseases from the time when the Plague was killing everybody and the leprosy back

before Christ, that was eating people up from the outside in, so why is human cloning

any different from taking cells and organs to cure and replace what is killing humans inside their bodies anyways? Havent we used technology to put airplanes in the sky or

space shuttles into orbit and back, think about it. Human cloning and making new lives

or replacing the ones we already have is a gift from GOD to move us up to the next

level of generations as we use our powerful minds more and more as the years go by.

So, there is a lot of good perspectives that will come out of human cloning and more

and more questions might rise as we take of create many more new lives.

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Cloning has opened up many new entry ways of saving lives and new findings

throughout the nation. Human cloning has been used to save quit a few lives for

humans already, and I think that society should not mock this amazing scientific finding,

of new life . [do not leave a space before a period] I think that human cloning should not take place because it raises to many

vital questions. People really [Writing suggestion--"real" or "really" means "existing in actuality"--it adds little to the meaning (and using it to mean "big," "very," or "genuine" is slang); replace it with a more expressive word] voiced, when animal organs were put into human beings

so we could save lives. Today it has been accepted like any other surgery or transplant

they use it all the time in the medical fields as a everyday [Check spelling: "everyday" is an adjective meaning common or ordinary (This is an everyday sweatshirt); "every day" means "each day"] plan to save lives. I think

many issues will be addressed on cloning, but within a few years or so, it should be

considered scientific and morally accepted.

Scientists and computers cannot solve every aspect of cloning. If cloning humans is

permitted, there is no promise that the results can be controlled. Cloning could change

mankind as we know it, and this is a big issue at hand. A few companies have been

changing the genes of animals with the genes of humans to make proteins that actually [Clich: "actual" and "actually" are weak words whose meaning is nothing more than "in point of fact." They are often used as intensifiers but usually can be deleted with no change in meaning ]

fight off cancer and other life threating diseases. Another company has reproduced

cows in this manor [Check spelling--a "manor" is a large, luxurious house; "manner" means a way of doing something] , that [Remove comma before "that"

preceding a restrictive phrase (otherwise replace "that" with "which")] can produce milk good enough for a human baby to drink with

all the right proteins in it. In my opinion [Wordiness: Remove "in my opinion," which is unnecessary. By writing this, you are showing your opinion.] , how can some people think that this is not a

great? [Writing suggestion: "great" is an overworked word, too frequently seen, and too vague. It has too many meanings: huge, superior, numerous, etc. Use a more specific adjective] [Writing suggestion: Unless in a quote or a title, avoid rhetorical questions in academic writing. A good idea is to provide answers, not questions] miracle that we have discovered, the creation of juice, for new life that has been

born.

While I am here with the facts about cloning animals to enhance human lives and

their well beings [The preceding two words should be spelled as one word] , I want to talk to you about cloning animals to eat and feast upon. I

believe that if we can come up with a natural breast milk that infants can live on (in case

the mother cannot produce breast milk), then [consider removing "then"] why can we not clone animals to be very

meaty and good for us, with all the vitamins and minerals that we need to be extra

healthy in life. Would that not be a amazing way to live longer and have our meat by

products to the maximum standards from the FDA?

I am 40 years old [Wordiness: "years old" or "years of age" can be removed--the meaning will be the same] now and do not have any children of my own and would love to

have one soon with my husband. What I think is cool about human cloning is the facts

that if a woman like me, cannot produce a baby on her own, that [Remove comma before "that" preceding a restrictive phrase (otherwise replace "that" with "which")] they [Check pronoun agreement--if "they" refers to "woman" (or a singular subject), it should be singular, too (he or she) and perhaps require adjusting the following verb] could clone one

for her and her husband with their [Check pronoun agreement--if "their" refers to "husband" (or a singular subject), it should be singular, too (his or her)] own DNA. Some people say that cloning a new life

can lead to being [Doctoral rule (but good advice for any academic writer)--If not a noun (as in "human being"), the word "Being" is hard to imagine; it means "existing." Try to rewrite this without using "being"--with action words like "attending," "working," "living," "experiencing," simply "as"--or even removing "being" completely] tolerable to diseases and might come out some kind of retard. I think

that they should be able to take the good and best genes out of humans and produce a

really smart and intelligence human being with no flaws at all. [In speech, "at all" is often used as an intensifier, but it is less effective in writing. Try to avoid its use] Thats where we get [Doctoral rule (although good advice for any academic writer)-instead of using "get," which can mean many things, more formal is to use forms of "receive," "obtain," "arrive at," "can," "could," "grow," "able to," etc.] to

the question, will [Remove comma] they be like super heroes and will we be able to control them if they get out of control or will we have to eliminate them if they dont come out right in their

minds, if they would turn against us and try to destroy us.

The last thing that I want to talk about in human cloning is this powerful scientific

miracle against the will of [Incorrect word--use "will have"] GOD? Are we playing the role of GOD or is this technology a

landing in the devils playground? I mean that it is probably impossible to clone a soul. Dont you think so? I believe that if we were not intended to clone and make new lives,

then [consider removing "then"] GOD or whatever higher power you believe in, would [Remove comma] of not put this into our hands

and minds to find in the first place. We have already learned how to cure all kinds of

diseases from the time when the Plague was killing everybody and the leprosy back

before Christ, that was eating people up from the outside in, so why is human cloning

any different from taking cells and organs to cure and replace what is killing humans inside their bodies anyways [Misspelling: anyway] ? Havent we used technology to put airplanes in the sky or space shuttles into orbit and back, think about it. Human cloning and making new lives

or replacing the ones ["The ones" is simpler as "those"] we already have is a gift from GOD to move us up to the next

level of generations as we use our powerful minds more and more [Writing suggestion: doubling a word like this can be effective in speech but is less intensive in writing] as the years go by.

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A lot of good can come from human cloning, but we better watch out how we use this life changing technology for new life. Cloning has opened up many new entry ways of saving lives and new findings throughout the nation. Human cloning has been used to save quit a few lives for humans already, and I think that society should not mock this amazing scientific finding, of new life . I think that human cloning should not take place because it raises to many vital questions. People really voiced, when animal organs were put into human beings so we could save lives. Today it has been accepted like any other surgery or transplant they use it all the time in the medical fields as a everyday plan to save lives. I think many issues will be addressed on cloning, but within a few years or so, it should be considered scientific and morally accepted. Scientists and computers cannot solve every aspect of cloning. If cloning humans is permitted, there is no promise that the results can be controlled. Cloning could change mankind as we know it, and this is a big issue at hand. A few companies have been changing the genes of animals with the genes of humans to make proteins that actually fight off cancer and other life threating diseases. Another company has reproduced cows in this manor, that can produce milk good enough for a human baby to drink with all the right proteins in it. In my opinion, how can some people think that this is not a great? miracle that we have discovered, the creation of juice, for new life that has been born. While I am here with the facts about cloning animals to enhance human lives and their well beings, I want to talk to you about cloning animals to eat and feast upon. I believe that if we can come up with a natural breast milk that infants can live on (in case the mother cannot produce breast milk), then why can we not clone animals to be very meaty and good for us, with all the vitamins and minerals that we need to be extra healthy in life. Would that not be a amazing way to live longer and have our meat by products to the maximum standards from the FDA? I am 40 years old now and do not have any children of my own and would love to have one soon with my husband. What I think is cool about human cloning is the facts that if a woman like me, cannot produce a baby on her own, that they could clone one for her and her husband with their own DNA. Some people say that cloning a new life can lead to being tolerable to diseases and might come out some kind of retard. I think that they should be able to take the good and best genes out of humans and produce a really smart and intelligence human being with no flaws at all. Thats where we get to the question, will they be like super heroes and will we be able to control them if they get out of control or will we have to eliminate them if they dont come out right in their minds, if they would turn against us and try to destroy us. The last thing that I want to talk about in human cloning is this powerful scientific miracle against the will of GOD? Are we playing the role of GOD or is this technology a landing in the devils playground? I mean that it is probably impossible to clone a soul. Dont you think so? I believe that if we were not intended to clone and make new lives, then GOD or whatever higher power you believe in, would of not put this into our hands and minds to find in the first place. We have already learned how to cure all kinds of diseases from the time when the Plague was killing everybody and the leprosy back before Christ, that was eating people up from the outside in, so why is human cloning any different from taking cells and organs to cure and replace what is killing humans inside their bodies anyways? Havent we used technology to put airplanes in the sky or space shuttles into orbit and back, think about it. Human cloning and making new lives or replacing

the ones we already have is a gift from GOD to move us up to the next level of generations as we use our powerful minds more and more as the years go by. So, there is a lot of good perspectives that will come out of human cloning and more and more questions might rise as we take of create many more new lives.