Imagine a world in which the illuminati have played a role in killing the leader of the free world, wait

just a minute, this isn’t 2020 I’m talking about November of 1963. The John F. Kennedy assassination tainted by the hands of the Illuminati. This is a major idea that many people do not even consider as a possibility. This idea of supreme conspiracy would raise eyebrows across the country, if not the world. This idea could evolve into a New York Times best seller, a USA Today Top 100 book and most definitely could end up in Oprah’s book club list. It was the perfect time for an assassination because of all of the political and social strife that occurred in the 1950’s and 60’s. The initial driving force for my product was my interest in conspiracy theories. It just seems like so many ideas, and concepts are hidden from the public eye and it really should make you question what all is in fact kept from you. There are many high tier conspiracies in which many agree something isn’t right, yet many cannot agree on exactly what happened. In becoming consumed with this idea the fact of the matter is someone other than Lee Harvey Oswald killed the president that day. Certainly one could see this with basic witness testimonies all describing a very different scene with very contrasting evidence of what occurred. How do you suppose that three bullets can be fired from one gun in one man’s hand and no one see a thing? There are just so many details that don’t align with what the government wants us to know. These details just became embedded in my mind and when you go looking for answers there are not always answers. Well the main idea of this concept is we know the man who was responsible for pulling the trigger and his motivation for doing so and how he feels after doing so. There are a few key moments in his life which are touched upon, such as the death of his parents which leads to his relocation to his ex military crazed uncle’s home. As well as his graduation from college and

Comment [LS1]: Commented by Leah Smitley. You need headers, title, and name format. Comment [LS2]: I don’t think ‘have’ is needed. Comment [LS3]: I like the sentence, but don’t use conjunctions, and try to not write “I”

Comment [LS4]: I like this paragraph, I know what you are going to talk about without you saying “…in my book..”

Comment [LS5]: Try not to write “you” much. Instead you could write “kept for the public, country, people…”

Comment [LS6]: I like how you made me interested in the story, even though I personally have no idea about the subject. That’s good, just make it more formal by taking out first person. Comment [LS7]: Take out “Well”

when he is offered a contract from a very high official who claims to be the head of the CIA when in fact he’s a main piece in the illuminati organization. All of this and his ultimate resolution in his head before he is murdered by the illuminati to keep him quiet. The main character’s name is Michael Novak and he is the man who murders John F. Kennedy. He plays a huge role in the novel and we see him develop from a child all of the way to a cold blooded killer. Many factors play a huge role in his life and the way he develops along with his caretaker being a lunatic. Michael is also approached by the head of the Illuminati, David Ross. David is a charming, manipulative man who will crush anyone in his path. We learn that David is an older man who is very physically fit for his age and that he has an endless supply of power and money. Jerry Norwood is Michael’s crazy uncle, enough said. He is the x factor behind Michael’s interest in the military and the reason any of the chaos is unleashed. Jerry ran away from home to the local armory when he was a mere twelve years old. This man knew he was destined for military greatness and was willing and ready to serve his country at the drop of a dime. Lastly I believe a subject so interesting and intriguing as this would have an impact on many different audience groups. Ranging from the youth that love action movies today, to the culture of adults that lived there young live back in the 1960’s, this would capture an enormous amount of attention. The premise behind this idea has never been used and I believe with the growing interest in Illuminati affairs now, the work would be an instant success. As well as the gigantic amount of people who are interested and still in doubt about the details of John F. Kennedy’s death. Although the movie would indeed need to have a more mature audience it would not be off of the wall violent or disgusting, just the simple details and the automatic circumstances surrounding the project would not be suitable for a young audience. Adults would
Comment [LS10]: Reread. That doesn’t make sense. Comment [LS9]: It could be more formal without that. Comment [LS8]: Kind of confusing. Your character dies?

probably be our highest audience and many details in this project are aimed at an older generation who love a good mystery and now have an opportunity to take a step back and look at one of the oldest conspiracies and ask themselves what if? Older people love to read and this magnificent idea would create uproar in the literary world. Just think it would outshine Tom Clancy’s series of military novels and put your company on top. The technique of observing minute details and putting them on paper would make for an intense, action packed, thrill ride that would keep you on the edge of your seat all while simply reading.
Comment [LS11]: Good paper. Is it a book or movie? You said both. Try to get rid of as many first person words. To add length you could tell about the assignation in real life, to give the reader a clear understanding or fact and fiction. Overall, very good!

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