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1. It is certainly true to say that education has an important role in the progress of any country in the world.

It is also generally believed that all children from 5 to 15 years old should be obliged to acquire education. Beforegiving (stating) my opinion, it is sensible to discuss both sides of this issue in detail. To begin with, the first and most important advantage is that educating children from their early ages can helpto create (forming) their good characters. It is because children are curious about the surrounding world and easily imitate what they see in life. For this reason, if they are taught well, they can learn good habits. As a result, these habits will gradually found (establish) their character in the future. Another benefit to be mentioned (preferably: Another benefit of early education) is that education helps parents, teachers, and governments to (delete: to) discover the specific talent of children. Researchers found that children express their interest and special skills best during their formative age. For this reason, many special art or sport competitions and classes are set (add: aside) for talented children. In the future (comma)by educating early young generation (educating young generations early), government can find out and build a skilful, responsible workforce for their (Ambiguous. Who is their?) development. However, nowadays when the rate of children attending schools increases considerably, there are some matters concerning education. First, parents put more pressure of (for) academic achievement on children. Second, they are also worried very much (preferably: too much) about their sons and daughters occupations. Therefore, most of parents force their children to join extra classes. This makes the youth have no timefor leisure activities (Awkward. Suggestion: This takes away the youths time for leisure activities). Consequently, it causes them to become stressful and easily contract mental illness (Awkward. Suggestion: Consequently, the children become overstressed, which may result mental illness). Last, life without other (delete: other)social or sport activities also keeps children from learning interpersonal skills. Gradually, they become dependent on other people and less confident in communication. In brief, the above discussion has led to a confirmation that making education to children from their early age is a significant mission (Wordy. Suggestion: the above discussion confirms the significant advantages of early education in children). Hence, (delete: hence) family and government can have more opportunities to teach children good traits of character or discover and develop their special innate ability. However, there must be moderation in (between) studying and leisure activities for the best development of children. --- o0o ---

2. Nowadays, everyone knows how important education is. The obvious evidence is the decreasing rate of illiteracy, almost people are able to read and write clearly. Education can decide the future of any country in the world. So, governments throughout the world should make education compulsory for all children betwee n the ages of 5 and 15 forsome reasons. First of all, this concerns the development of the child between 5 and 15 years old. According to

researchers, a child between ages develops the most strongly. His brain has not formed any "trails of thinking" yet; thus, he can acquire new things very fast. We can verify it through a simple experiment. We only need to give a 6 year-old child and a 40 year-old adult some random numbers, then they have to read them again without looking at them twice . What's about the reason? The child do this work much better in most of times of repeating.Or, if a person learn foreign language when he was little, it will take less time for him to use that language proficiently. Secondly, as we know, children who are educated carefully may devote more to both their countries and the world. When they finish secondary school ( at 15 years old ), they have systems of fundamental knowledge about science, society,...which is necessary for anyone. With that base, children can continue studying at universities or take part in short courses of any jobs. In fact, it is not a small amount of children choosing the second way. They will be some of manpower source in their countries. For children who continue learning, they have more choices to contribute to the development by being businessmans, scientists, engineers,.... In contrast, the children aren't educated, they can't do anything! Finally, education affects strongly to every country. A country can't certainly exist long without intellectuals. Besides the weakness in internal force, it is not attractive foreigners to come and invest. In addition, education helps to prevent social evils which are more dangerous than invaders, such as : HIV/AIDS, gambling,...From 5 to 15 years old, children often imitate adults. As the information we read on newspaper today, it is not difficult to find that addicts are mainly children and minors. So, education children is very important because it repels bad things, conduces building healthy way of living. In generally, education is vital to any societies in today's world. There must have reasonable campaigns for education, especially for children between the ages of 5 and 15 future of each country!
3. Nowadays the high-technology products have been changing at an incredible speed. The most obvious example is the use of computers. The development of computers has brought people great convenience and profound influence which helps us to yield twice the result with half the effort in all aspect, such as business, hospitals, crime detection etc For a period of time, we have become dependent on computers. It is now very hard to imagine how the students did their paper and research twenty years ago. They had to spend most of their time looking for the practical information at library, borrowing those heavy books, and bringing every information home with them. This kind of old-fashioned way to do the research usually takes plenty of energies and time which makes the whole schedule look ineffective. Compare this with the invention of computers, we discover people can do the research more quickly and more effectively which helps save the precious time. Internet is an organic whole combined with computers which cannot be separated. In addition, this technology is widely used on various fields that dramatically speed up our pace of daily life as well as enhance our life quality. On the other hand, it also has some side-effects that influence every individual. For instance, people will lose the natural abilities to deal with diversified tasks without the assistance of computers which is rather horrible because human beings become replaceable and dependent on lifeless machine. Furthermore, long-term use of computers will damage peoples health condition causing indisposition of eyesight, dizzy, nausea, and other physical complications. Also, this kind of over-anaclisis on computer technology seriously causes people to have bad performance on schoolwork that students cannot even know how to spell or how to write a word correctly because of constant indulgence in playing online games. The most

serious is that there are abundant resources on the internet, including pornographic pictures, articles, and violent videos that might affect the growth of young adolescences with which parents should be concerned. To conclude, I think technology is like a dilemma that both have advantages and disadvantages. Only a wise person with high self-control knows how to make use of resource well and get some benefits from it without any adverse effects.

4. We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. they are used in business, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes. What things will they be used in future? IS this dependence on computers a good thing or should we be more suspicious of their benefits? ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------Computers have an unending future because a computer is used in different ways which have been mentioned above. More hi tech computers will be used in future. Yes it is a good thing. They are co connected systems now-a-days in our competitive life. However, there are some negative impacts of computers. These computers are making us lazier than before. We are somewhat work less. A hi-tech computer can work in its own job in few times than the people. It is more effective and more accurate than people so, people own power of working are in threats. If computer works like a person than most people will be unemployed. Rate of unemployment will ameliorate further. It will cause larger gaps between a poor people and a rich people. So, the modern technologies like computers should be used in a right-way. Computers should be used to full-fill the dreams of a man but not dis-hearten people with unemployment and distress. De pendants of computers should be reduced for children .we has to create own-capabilities for children, youth to work. Please remember, computer is a machine it will not be able to work like a man but it can only help our society considerably. At last, computer dependents should be reduced .people should try to do their work on their own. Especially children should do their work on their own without the helps of computers. it will be than a great beneficially to our world. Man creates computers. Computer doesnt create men!! It is a global authorized truth.