Unit One : Write for Clarity

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 The number of banks charging
their customers ATM user fees are
increasing.

 較佳 : The number of banks
charging their customers ATM
user fees is increasing.
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 The majority of the committee feel
that the right decision was made.

 較佳 : The majority of the
committee feels that the right
decision was made.


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 Time as well as temperature are
important during the batch process.

 較佳 : Time as well as
temperature is important during
the batch process.






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 The professor told the student
that he needed to finish early.

 較佳 : The professor told the
student, "You need to finish
early."


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 To simulate the program,
precautions must be taken by the
engineer.

 較佳 : To simulate the program,
the engineer must take
precautions.


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 As a graduate student, my
academic advisor gave me much
valuable advice.

 較佳 : My academic advisor gave
me much valuable advice when I
was a graduate student.

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 Before examining all of the
available options, the decision was
made to initiate the plan.

 較佳 : Before examining all of
the available options, they
decided to initiate the plan.

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 Our company prefers that
organization more than their
institute.

 較佳 : Our company prefers that
organization more than their
institute does.
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 The new company is as
competitive, if not more
competitive than, existing ones.

 較佳 : The new company is as
competitive as, if not more
competitive than, existing ones.



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 The proposed procedure corrects
dimensional distortion and errors
better.

 較佳 : The proposed procedure
corrects dimensional distortion
and errors better than
conventional options.
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