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Analysis from abstract to paper

By:
Dana Hartono
NRP.0414040006

Darwis Ardiantoro Ilham


NRP. 0414040023

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The Focus of the Article :

• Can you find the intro/objective of the


abstract?
• What is this paper trying to prove?

• Yes, we can.
• Cultivate fish in,fish farmers must often clean the
pool. This seems quite troublesome fish farmers
because they have to monitor the cleanliness of
the pool every day. Sometimes the fish farmers
are faced with another flury of urgency and make
the fish farming activities is undermined.

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Methods :

• Do you know the methods used in the abstract?


• What part of the methods needs most detailed
description?

• Yes, we know. The method exists but is less clear


and less specific
• After studying literature, experiments and analysis
of this study produced a fresh water pool cleaning
system automatically based microcontroller.

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Results :

• How much data should be included? Are the results


as described in the abstract enough for a paper?

• The results of this study actually exist but only


mentioned once even not clear results. It
should be explained a little process of the
results.
• From the analysis of the test result, obtained an
averange response time of lessthan 1 second
after a time delay for 1 minute. So that time
spent by the pool cleaner system to be efficient.

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Conclusion :

• Can you find the conclusion in the abstract ?


• What is it ?

• Yes, we can. in my opinion this conclusion is still less


clear even just explained only one sentence.
• So that the time spent by the pool cleaner system to
be efficient.

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