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商用英文
商用英文研究的基本科技論點
•您的機構跟這個主題的相關程度多大 ?
•目前的管理界情勢: 管理問題後的工業背景?
•您的機構要解決什麼樣的問題?
•這個問題影響到您機構的程度有多深?
•這個沒解決的問題會如何影響到您的機構及管理業界其他人?
•您的機構對解決問題有何提議?
•您的機構計劃如何實行這個目標?
•達成目標的立即利益為何?
•達成目標後會對管理界其他人造成何種利益?
範例一(第一部分:背景)
商用公司近況設計 At a recent meeting, members discussed ways in
which to curtail the trend of regional hospital patients transferring to
larger medical centers. 商用計劃建構 Regional hospitals in Taiwan
lack an adequate number of physicians and wards for critically ill
patients. Emergency care staff can thus provide only primary care for
those patients before transferring them to a larger medical center. 商用
計劃問題 Such patients are thus unlikely to return to regional hospitals
for subsequent visits, instead opting for those larger medical centers for
primary care. (NOTE : Add 2-4 sentences that describe characteristics
of the problem or statistics that reflect its severity) 商用計劃問題的量化
Changing trends among hospital patients significantly impact the
operating budgets of regional hospitals. For instance, according to
statistics from Eng Chu Kong Hospital, the transfer rate of emergency
room patients to larger medical centers reached 50% in 2003,
subsequently deceasing the ward utility rate to 20%. 商用計劃問題的中
心 This statistic has greatly concerned hospital administrators,
especially with respect to how to effectively adopt customer relations
management (CRM) in order to keep regional hospital patients from
transferring to larger medical centers.
範例一(第二部分:行動)
商用計劃目標 Therefore, we recommend developing a CRM-based approach by
investigating why critically ill patients at regional hospitals in Taiwan transfer to
larger medical centers in order to more thoroughly understand the anticipated
medical services that their families expect. 商用目標的方法 To do so, factors of
patient transferral can be identified based on statistics from regional hospitals in
Taiwan. A questionnaire based on customer relations management (CRM) can
then be issued to families of critically ill patients to determine anticipated medical
services. Based on those results, an APH methodology can be formed. 希望的結
果 As anticipated, the proposed CRM-based approach can identify how the
medical services anticipated by families of critically ill patients differ from actual
ones provided by regional hospitals, with the objective of ultimately reducing this
discrepancy and patient transferral rate to larger medical centers. 領域的貢獻
While providing regional hospital administrators with an effective means of
determining the anticipated services of critically ill patients and their families, the
proposed CRM-based approach can highlight the importance of medical quality in
emergency care, eventually increasing hospital revenues and establishing high
quality emergency medical centers among regional hospitals in Taiwan. (NOTE :
Add 2 more sentences that describe more thoroughly how the proposed method
contributes to a particular field or sector)
範例二(第一部分:背景)
商用公司近況設計 Our senior management recently expressed
concern over how to facilitate the sharing of patient data among
hospitals to avoid redundancy in medical examinations. 商用計劃建構
Poor quality of surgical procedures leads to unnecessarily recurrent
medical treatment, subsequently increasing the overhead expenses of
hospitals. 商用計劃問題 Whereas individual hospitals realize the level
of their own operational quality, Taiwan hospitals have neither
collectively accumulated nor shared related medical information for
comparison purposes. Operational quality is determined prior to, during
and after surgery. (NOTE : Add 2-3 sentences that describe
characteristics of the problem or statistics that reflect its severity) 商用
計劃問題的量化 For instance, recurrent or even redundant medical
treatment following an operation is often owing to incomplete historical
data of the patient, post-operation complications, and a patient’s body
temperature that exceeds 38 °C. 商用計劃問題的中心 The inability to
enhance the quality of surgical procedures through the sharing of
pertinent data among hospitals will increase both medical fees and
societal costs.
範例二(第二部分:行動)
商用計劃目標 Therefore, we recommend developing a Web-
based medical quality index that compiles each hospital’s
relevant data for comparison and identification of areas for
improvement. 達成目標的方法 To do so, an online healthcare
medical quality information system can be developed. Inter-
organizational systems can then be utilized to manage
technology, knowledge and quality effectively. 希望的結果 As
anticipated, the proposed medical quality index can facilitate the
efforts of hospital administrators to enhance medical quality and
reduce operational costs, as well as to identify limitations
efficiently in order to reach a precise decision. 領域的貢獻 In
addition to enhancing medical quality island wide and reducing
operational expenses, the proposed index can become a
valuable asset for hospital administrators when planning and
monitoring hospital operations. (NOTE : Add 2 more sentences
that describe more thoroughly how the proposed method
contributes to a particular field or sector)
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