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Phantomimic
Eneyda_Prado
Phantomimic scribbled: Nicely put how we sometimes develop a dependency for a love that hurts us. I once drunk that drink and it was sweet and dreadful just like you described it.

VENOM

from Eneyda_Prado in Creative Writing, Poetry

Would you dare to drink it (again)?

about 5 hours ago
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Eneyda_Prado
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VENOM

from Eneyda_Prado in Creative Writing, Poetry

Would you dare to drink it (again)?

about 5 hours ago
Phantomimic
Natia_Volturi
Phantomimic scribbled: LOL! You have quite an imagination, the story holds promise; I liked it. Please try to fix the sentences so they go across the page especially at the beginning and try to fix the English/grammar too. If you can't, show the story to someone that can help you wit that.

Demon Let Loose Chapter 1

from Natia_Volturi in Creative Writing, Fan Fiction

OK, I wrote this because I was bored and I got inspired after watching an anime. Can you guess which it is? Any Way, I put some bad description (like calling names and stuff) about my best friend and I would like to say sorry to her,but that is what makes it funny. Sorry that the chapter is in th...

about 8 hours ago
Natia_Volturi

Natia_Volturi: Sorry, when I uploaded it, it some how change it's format. And I'll try harder on the English and grammar. I can't get anybody to help me on it because my best friend is the only who comes over and she is worse at grammar and English than me and my parents and brother is worse than me too. 14 minutes ago

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Natia_Volturi
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Demon Let Loose Chapter 1

from Natia_Volturi in Creative Writing, Fan Fiction

OK, I wrote this because I was bored and I got inspired after watching an anime. Can you guess which it is? Any Way, I put some bad description (like calling names and stuff) about my best friend and I would like to say sorry to her,but that is what makes it funny. Sorry that the chapter is in th...

about 8 hours ago
Phantomimic
DTYarbrough
Phantomimic scribbled: My guess it that there is the perception that indiscriminate subscriptions defeat the purpose of Scribd. It is interpreted that you don't care about other people's work or its quality, that you just push your own. I think that is their point.

A MESSAGE TO SCRIBD

from DTYarbrough in Creative Writing, Short Stories

SOME QUESTIONS I HAVE FOR SCRIBD.

about 9 hours ago
DTYarbrough

DTYarbrough: I am pushing my stories. When I have time to read other stories, I leave comments. Try writing 90 stories in 4 months and see how much time you have for reading. If someone subscribes to me, then there is the possibility we have something in common and I take a closer look, I don't have time to look at everyones stories before I subscribe to them. about 2 hours ago

Linglang

Linglang: I think Phantomimic ,has got it right ,when you first join scribd ,people hook onto you and it takes awhile to navigate what you like what you don't ,with respect DTY ,you scribd to me and then I to you ,I did check out some of your work and commented on a couple but I am not a fan of your type of writing ,but at least I gave it a go,then I unsubscribe to you because it wasn't my thing and it felt about 2 hours ago

Linglang

Linglang: as if you were downloading 90 stories a second (less is more sometimes) + I don't think you glanced at any of my work,sorry if this sounds harsh ,but its about finding your audience and being generous to others ,this has probably come out all wrong :) about 2 hours ago

DTYarbrough

DTYarbrough: Linglang, I did look at your work but it's not my cup of tea. Maybe it was unfair to assume all of you work is the same. Perhaps I should have looked deeper but poems that don't rhyme ... I don't get it. You were very sweet to give me good revues. Thank you so much and I don't blame you at all for unsubscribing to me. I may be forced to do likewise since scribd has given me no choice. 38 minutes ago

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sarita brown
Phantomimic scribbled: A celebration of living!

Opening Her Mouth

from sarita brown in Creative Writing, Poetry

artwork. Paul Ramnora.

about 9 hours ago
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enkidukid
Phantomimic scribbled: I used to be a star-gazer and the first constellations I learned to identify were Orion and his dog Canis Mayor. Sirius always shone so bright in the night sky! I have many pleasant memories from watching the heavens with friends till very late and your poem reminded me of them. Thanks for sharing! : ^ )

Echoes of Starlight

from enkidukid in Creative Writing, Poetry

An extension of the previous starlight - as extensions can be dangerous I hope not detrimental.

about 14 hours ago
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enkidukid
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Echoes of Starlight

from enkidukid in Creative Writing, Poetry

An extension of the previous starlight - as extensions can be dangerous I hope not detrimental.

about 14 hours ago
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Brian W Porter
Phantomimic scribbled: The trucker stereotype is that of a sex-crazed nomad and I am glad you set the record straight. I laughed at the things you have seen on the road. You should write a story just on this topic.

Helping Out (trucking series)

from Brian W Porter in Creative Writing, Short Stories

Truckers help each other when a personal crisis hits.

about 14 hours ago
Brian W Porter

Brian W Porter: Did. Didn't get published because there was "not enough interest." Workin' on it again. We'll see. about 10 hours ago

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Brian W Porter
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Helping Out (trucking series)

from Brian W Porter in Creative Writing, Short Stories

Truckers help each other when a personal crisis hits.

about 14 hours ago
Brian W Porter

Brian W Porter: Thanks. about 10 hours ago

Phantomimic
randyrowe
Phantomimic scribbled: Sad but beautiful, I like it.

Good-by

from randyrowe

when all is left behind, can any hear the earth's sigh?

about 14 hours ago
randyrowe

randyrowe: thanks for the feed back. i wanted to use the singular good-by, not the synonym good-bye which refers to plural about 9 hours ago

Phantomimic

Phantomimic: Sorry for that, I realized my mistake after I posted and tried to eliminate the post but obviously it was too late. : ^ ( about 7 hours ago

Phantomimic
randyrowe
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Good-by

from randyrowe

when all is left behind, can any hear the earth's sigh?

about 14 hours ago
Phantomimic
Phantomimic scribbled: I'm getting to the end of my story. The boy has just got the girl!
about 15 hours ago
Phantomimic
RosarioSoto
Phantomimic scribbled: This is like the log of an explorer writing as she ventures into a wonderful but at sometimes scary remote region of our planet. Facing all the dangers and discovering all the wonders. Very good!

Traveling Into You

from RosarioSoto in Creative Writing, Poetry

Traveling into You is about loving each part of your partner, loving the essence and make a celebration. Loving the body, the spirit & mind together as one. It's short romantic poetry, I hope you can enjoy it.

about 17 hours ago
RosarioSoto

RosarioSoto: Thank you!!!! : ) about 1 hour ago

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Phantomimic
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Scientist turned writer
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Male
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Observer/Creator
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Moving through realms, fiction, horror, sci-fi, romance, humor etc.
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