I sent these four people a link to my final magazine and asked them to give me some feedback on it.

These are the results and I have worked on Kirsties criticism of wrapping the text around the microphone to draw less attention to the gap. The rest of the feedback given was all positive which meant that I must have done something right and improve everything I could have from my first draft. There are probably many things that I could improve over time, but with the time I have already have, and the little time I have left - I feel that I have put everything I possibly could into the making and creation of this magazine and am please with the final outcome.