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Log Line: y y y y y y y y y y y y y y y Opens with Mothers day card being put inside an envelope. Envelope being put inside post box (outside a flower shop) Sits down at bus stop with a little girl He peers over to what the little girl is holding and sobbing about Sees photo of her mother with a tear mark on it Now upset he decides to gives the girl a rose from his suitcase They pause as he holds the rose to her She looks at him with big upset eyes She takes the flower and hugs Rene He thinks about his mother Fade Inside a house staring at a door with a letter sticking out we hear a knock. A little woman goes to open the door Rene appears behind the door with flowers and sad smile Fade out (Hugs his mother)

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