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PART ONE - WHAT IS A STORY? ..........................................................................................................6 PART TWO - WHERE TO FIND INSPIRATION..................................................................................10 PART THREE - 6 GENERAL STUFFS YOU NEED TO KNOW BEFOREHAND .............................14 1. GET YOUR LEARN ON!...............................................................................................................14 2. NO, SERIOUSLY. GET YOUR LEARN ON.................................................................................16 3. EXPERIENCE + WHAT IT MEANS FOR YOU...........................................................................16 4. THE SCRIPT MATTERS................................................................................................................18 5. WHY YOU STILL NEED TO BE ABLE TO TELL AN ORIGINAL STORY..............................20 6. BUT STILL REMEMBER, THIS IS NOT ABOUT "GETTING THINGS MADE".....................21 PART FOUR - - HOW TO TELL A STORY - CONCEPTUALLY ........................................................22 7. EMPATHY IS YOUR NEW BEST FRIEND..................................................................................22 8. BEWARE THE LURE OF INDULGENCE....................................................................................26 9. THE CONSISTENCY OF CHARACTER MOTIVE.....................................................................27 10. CHARACTER TREES!................................................................................................................28 11. DON'T BASE YOUR CHARACTERS ON ONE PERSON, COMBINE THEM!......................30 12. HOW TO FILTER "YOUR REAL LIFE" INTO A STORY.........................................................31 13. THE BIOPIC / REALITY COMPLICATION..............................................................................32 14. RESEARCH!.................................................................................................................................34 15. THE VALUE PRE-EXISTING CONFLICT.................................................................................36 16. THE JJ ABRAMS QUESTION - MYSTERY? VS. URGENCY!................................................36 17. DON'T WRITE WOMEN JUST IN THE CONTEXT OF MEN..................................................38 18. EVERYTHING YOU WRITE IS SAYING SOMETHING.........................................................39 19. THE ENDING IS THE CONCEIT...............................................................................................40 PART FIVE - - HOW TO TELL THE STORY - STRUCTURALLY......................................................42 20. ECONOMY IS YOUR NEW SECOND BEST FRIEND.............................................................42 21. THE MYTH OF 3 ACT STRUCTURE........................................................................................43 22. DO NOT USE HERO JOURNEYS EITHER - IT IS A CRUTCH...............................................45 23. THE SEQUENTIAL APPROACH...............................................................................................46 24. TREY PARKER + MATT STONES': "THEREFORE / BUTS" NOT "ANDS"..........................47 25. DAN HARMON'S CIRCLES.......................................................................................................48 26. THE SNOW FLAKE METHOD...................................................................................................49 27. BREAKING INTO CONCURRENT ARCS ................................................................................50 28. MERGE INTO CONFLICTING ARCS........................................................................................52 29. LEARN YOUR GENRE CONVENTIONS..................................................................................55 30. "PAGE 17" ....................................................................................................................................56 31. IF YOU USE CHARACTERS, THEY SHOULD LIKELY BE REUSED ..................................57
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32. BEWARE DEUS EX MACHINA.................................................................................................58 33. BEWARE THE OPENING FLASH-FORWARD ........................................................................59 34. DON'T FUCK WITH THE AUDIENCE JUST TO FUCK WITH THE AUDIENCE.................60 35. WRITING IS RE-WRITING........................................................................................................62 36. WHEN & HOW TO DISREGARD THESE GUIDELINES........................................................63 PART SIX - HOW TO TELL A STORY - SCREENPLAY-SPECIFIC INSTRUCTION .......................68 37. KNOW IT'S BEING READ BY EVERY KIND OF PERSON....................................................68 38. THE GOLDEN RULE OF DESCRIPTION ................................................................................70 39. OH BY THE WAY, YOU ARE NOT THE DIRECTOR...............................................................71 40. THE POETIC ART OF ACTION LINES.....................................................................................72 41. DON'T WASTE OPPORTUNITIES TO SAY SOMETHING......................................................72 42. AND IF YOU WANT TO BE COLLOQUIAL.............................................................................73 43. VOICE OVER... PERHAPS, TRY NOT USING IT.....................................................................74 44. THE PRACTICAL ART OF DIALOGUE....................................................................................75 45. FINAL + BESTEST ADVICE EVER: READ YOUR ENTIRE SCREENPLAY OUT LOUD... MANY TIMES....................................................................................................................................77 PART SEVEN - NOW HERE COMES THE HARD PART....................................................................78
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SO YOU WANT TO WRITE A SCREENPLAY? KNOW THIS: THERE ARE OVER A MILLION SCRIPTS FLOATING AROUND HOLLYWOOD. HULK HAS READ, OH... A COUPLE THOUSAND OF THEM. AND NEARLY EVERY SINGLE PERSON HULK MEET IN "THE INDUSTRY" HAS A SCRIPT OF SOME SORT. SO YES, IT IS SAFE TO SAY THAT SCREENPLAYS ARE AN ABSOLUTELY PERVASIVE PART OF THE CULTURE. NOT ONLY DOES THE SHEER VOLUME OF SCRIPTS MAKE IT DIFFICULT TO DISTINGUISH ONESELF IN THIS CLIMATE, BUT SO DOES THE FACT THAT THERE ARE ALREADY A VAST NUMBER OF TALENTED WRITERS IN NEED OF WORK. AND LASTLY, CONSIDER THE FACT THAT THE ART OF STORYTELLING IS SOMETHING THAT IS ALREADY INGRAINED INTO OUR CULTURE. SO GIVEN ALL THESE PERTINENT REALITIES, HULK HAS ONE VERY SIMPLE QUESTION: WHY DO MOST MOVIES HAVE MAJOR SCRIPT PROBLEMS? QUITE FRANKLY, THE ANSWER LIES IN A LOT INDUSTRY BULLSHIT. MEANING THERE IS A GOOD DEAL OF PUTTING THE CART BEFORE THE HORSE SO TO SPEAK AND MOVING ON WITH A MOVIE BEFORE YOU REALLY HAVE A STORY... BUT THIS COLUMN IS NOT ACTUALLY ABOUT THAT. NOR IS THIS COLUMN IS ABOUT WRITING SCREENPLAYS THAT SELL, POP, OR THAT CAN BE PITCHED TO A STUDIO. WHILE THESE ELEMENTS ARE ALL IMPORTANT TO BEING A SUCCESS, IT IS NOT A PART OF WHAT WE SHALL DISCUSS HERE. IN FACT, HULK WOULD ARGUE THAT IF YOU ONLY POSSESS THE ABILITY TO SELL, POP AND PITCH, THEN YOU CAN ONLY HAVE THE KIND OF SUCCESS THAT DOES NOT LAST. MEANWHILE, KNOWING HOW TO WRITE, LASTS. SO THE FOLLOWING GARGANTUAN, SEVEN-PART COLUMN IS HULK'S HUMBLE ATTEMPT TO TRY SHED SOME LIGHT ON HOW TO BECOME A BETTER WRITER AND STORYTELLER. THE FIRST THREE PARTS OF THE COLUMN ARE RATHER CONCEPTUAL. THEY TAKE A GREAT DEAL OF TIME TO WAX PHILOSOPHICAL ON THE STATE OF MIND AND PURPOSE ONE NEEDS TO APPROACH STORYTELLING. BUT THE LAST FOUR PARTS OF THE COLUMN ARE (THANKFULLY) RATHER PRACTICAL IN TERMS OF HOW TO TACKLE THE CRAFT AND SCREENPLAY-SPECIFIC CONVENTIONS. AT THIS POINT, HULK WOULD BE REMISS IF HULK DID NOT MENTION THE FOLLOWING INFORMATION: THE FOLLOWING COLUMN IS, IN ALL SERIOUSNESS, THE LENGTH OF A BOOK. ALL THIS MEANS IS THAT YOU CAN FEEL FREE APPROACH THIS COLUMN ANY WAY YOU SEE FIT. HULK DID NOT WANT TO BREAK IT UP INTO SEVERAL COLUMNS OVER THE COURSE OF DAYS, BECAUSE HULK FELT LIKE IT WAS STILL ONE SINGULAR IDEA. AND WHILE YOU MAY NOT BE ABLE TO BE READ IN ONE SITTING, HULK TRIED TO MAKE THE STRUCTURE AS DIGESTIBLE AND EASY TO NAVIGATE AS POSSIBLE (MOST OF THE SUBJECTS ARE LISTED BY POINT NUMBER). WHATEVER SHORT COMINGS THIS APPROACH HAS IN TERMS OF PONTIFICATION, THE PIECE WILL CERTAINLY NOT HAVE OTHERS FROM A LACK OF EFFORT. WE LIKE TO THINK OF INTERNET ARTICLES AS THESE TIMELY, DISPOSAL THINGS, BUT HULK STANDS DEFIANTLY AGAINST THAT NOTION. A SIMPLE "BLOG POST" CAN BE MORE IF WE WANT THEM TO BE. WE BOTH JUST HAVE TO CHANGE OUR DEFINITION. HULK REALLY WANTS TO BELIEVE THIS COLUMN CAN WORK LIKE A BOOK, SOMETHING THAT CAN EASILY BE RETURNED TO OVER TIME. HULK WANTS THIS COLUMN TO ALWAYS BE HERE IF BY
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CHANCE YOU NEED IT. AND LIKE MOST HULK COLUMNS, IT'S HULK-SIZED-NESS IS INFORMED BY THE SHEER MASS OF THE SUBJECT ITSELF; FOR THE ART OF STORYTELLING, WHETHER WE DISTILL IT IN TERMS OF THE IDEAS, THE KNOW-HOW, OR ITS EFFECT ON AUDIENCE, IS AN ART THAT IS AS VARIED AS OUR OWN LIVES, AND AS EXPANSIVE AS OUR OWN UNIVERSE. AT THE SAME TIME, PLEASE KNOW THIS COLUMN IS NOT MEANT TO BE SOME AUTHORITARIAN RANT ON HULK'S PART. IT IS MEANT TO BE HELPFUL. NOTHING MORE. NOTHING LESS. THE MOTIVES FOR WRITING IT ARE BORN FROM A GENUINE SENSE OF CAMARADERIE, FROM KNOWING THE SAME STRUGGLE THAT ALL WRITERS GO THROUGH. AND IF YOU'VE BEEN THROUGH THAT STRUGGLE THEN YOU KNOW THAT IT IS SHAM FOR ANY WRITER TO REPRESENT THEMSELVES AS AN AUTHORITY. THERE IS ONLY THE LONESOME STRUGGLE TO EXECUTE ONE'S IDEAS. IT IS CONSTANT, PERVASIVE, AND EVERLASTING. HULK BELIEVES THIS STRUGGLE IS TOUGH ON WRITERS. IT MAKES FOR A SOLITARY LIFE. AND TRYING BATTLES WITH ONES OWN MIND. IT FOSTERS A SOLIPSISTIC SENSE OF INDEPENDENCE, WHICH CAN ALSO BREED CONTEMPT. SO AS MUCH AS ANYTHING, HULK WRITES ESSAYS LIKE THIS IN AN ATTEMPT TO CONNECT. TO SHARE. TO NOT FEEL LIKE WE ARE SO ALONE IN THE PURSUIT. AS SUCH, THIS COLUMN IS MEANT FOR WRITERS FOR EVERY SINGLE LEVEL. INTRODUCTORY, INTERMEDIATE, AND WORKING PROS WHO PERHAPS KNOW MOST OF THESE THINGS EITHER IN A CONSCIOUS OR UNCONSCIOUS MANNER, BUT COULD ALWAYS BENEFIT FROM SEEING THE IDEAS ALL LAID OUT. EVEN CERTIFIED GENIUSES CAN SOMETIMES OVERLOOK SOME MISSING ELEMENT IT MAY TAKE TO FULLY ELEVATE THEIR SCRIPT. AND YES, THIS COLUMN IS EVEN MEANT FOR THOSE WHO HAVE NO INTEREST IN SCREENWRITING WHATSOEVER, BUT ARE JUST CURIOUS ABOUT HOW THE PROCESS AFFECTS WHAT THEY SEE ON SCREEN. BECAUSE ULTIMATELY THIS ISN'T ABOUT THE PATH TO SUCCESS, OR INDUSTRY SECRETS, OR SOME ETHEREAL CONCEPT OF IMPORT... ...THIS IS ABOUT TRYING ONE'S HARDEST TO WRITE SCREENPLAYS THAT WORK.
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PLANET AND THE FATE OF THE HUMAN RACE DEPENDING ON YOU EXPLAINING IN A CLEAR WAY WHAT A STORY WAS. IT'S SO HARD BECAUSE STORIES CAN HAVE SO MANY DIFFERENT PURPOSES. THEY CAN BE ACCOUNTS OF FACTS. FULL-ON NARRATIVES. RUMORS. LEGENDS. NEWS ARTICLES. BACKGROUND INFORMATION. THE WORD ITSELF IS SO UNBELIEVABLY DEXTEROUS, SO HOW DO WE NARROW IT DOWN? FOR THE PURPOSES OF THIS ARTICLE, HULK WILL MOSTLY BE TALKING ABOUT KIND OF STORYTELLING WE CALL NARRATIVE. AND NARRATIVES ARE ONLY SOMETHING THAT HUMANS HAVE BEEN CREATING SINCE THE FREAKIN' DAWN OF CULTURE. BORN FROM THE NEED TO COMMUNICATE THE MOST RUDIMENTARY CONCEPTS OF LANGUAGE, NARRATIVES FIRST SPRANG UP AS PART OF THE ORAL TRADITION, BUILT AROUND CAMPFIRES AND COMMUNAL EXPERIENCE. THEN WE MADE SYMBOLS. WROTE. PAINTED. AND THE MEDIUMS, FORMATS, AND SHAPES OF AUDIENCES HAVE CHANGED MANY TIMES OVER THE COURSE OF TIME, BUT THE STUNNING IMPORTANCE OF NARRATIVE HAS ALWAYS BEEN THERE. THE ARCHAIC TROPES AND DEVICES INVOLVED IN THESE NARRATIVES HAVE STAYED IN TACT AND REMAIN WHOLLY RELEVANT FOR GOOD REASON: NARRATIVES ALLOW US TO COME TO A SENSE OF UNDERSTANDING ABOUT LIFE AND OUR FUNCTION WITHIN IT. WHY IS THIS HISTORY IS IMPORTANT? BECAUSE IT TELLS US WHY WE STILL FREAKIN' DO IT. THINK ABOUT IT. PARENTS TRY TO TEACH THEIR CHILDREN WHAT TO DO. TEACHERS INSTRUCT PUPILS. ELDERS TALK TO YOUNGINS. THEY CAN ALWAYS SAY "DO THIS!" OR "DO THAT!" BUT BY TELLING THE STORY THEY CAN CONVEY SO MUCH MORE THAN MERE INSTRUCTION. THEY CONVEY MEANING. CONSEQUENCE. ACTION. INACTION. PURPOSE. IT'S ALL THERE. NARRATIVES MEAN SO MUCH TO OUR CULTURE, NOT JUST BECAUSE THEY INVOKE A BASIC SENSE OF MORALITY, BUT BECAUSE THEY MAKE OUR VERY HUMANITY SOMETHING UNDERSTANDABLE. THEY MAKE OUR HUMANITY SOMETHING FELT. THIS SHOULD BE YOUR PURPOSE. IDEALLY, WHATEVER IT IS THAT YOU WOULD WANT TO COMMUNICATE TO BOTH THE PEOPLE AROUND YOU AND FOR FUTURE GENERATIONS SHOULD BE SOMETHING THAT EXISTS IN YOUR STORY. IT SHOULD BE THE VERY POINT OF YOUR STORY. IT SHOULD BE YOUR PURPOSE. OKAY, WE GET IT HULK! NARRATIVES ARE IMPORTANT! THAT'S WHY WE'RE HERE READING! OKAY, SORRY, SORRY! HULK JUST HAD TO MAKE IT CLEAR IN CASE IT WASN'T. SOME FOLKS JUST NEED TO BE REMINDED WHY WE REALLY DO THIS STUFF. NARRATIVES ACTUALLY MATTER. WHEN WE GET OLDER WE TEND TO LOSE SIGHT OF HOW AMAZING AND NEW THESE SIMPLE CONCEPTS FEEL TO YOU, BUT ASK ANY TEACHER ABOUT THAT ONE. BECAUSE EVERY HIGH SCHOOL KID IN THE COUNTRY IS DISCOVERING THE SAME IDEAS YOU DID IN HIGH SCHOOL AND THEY FEEL JUST AS REVOLUTIONARY TO THEM. THEY WERE THE IDEAS THAT BLEW YOUR MINDS AND SHAPED YOUR LIVES. THIS HAPPENS LESS AND LESS FREQUENTLY WITH ADULTHOOD, BUT OUR DUTY IS INSTEAD TO PASS ON THAT MEANING. THE CYCLE OF THESE IDEAS ARE NOT ONLY CONSTANT, BUT CRITICAL. HULK CONSIDERS THE PASSING OF THESE ARCHAIC TRUTHS TO BE A MEANINGFUL DUTY. BUT YES, YOU ARE PROBABLY RIGHT, YOU PROBABLY THINK STORIES MATTER TOO. SO NOW REAL QUESTION IS WHAT MAKES A GOOD NARRATIVE?
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IS IT SOMETHING THAT INVOLVES YOU? THAT IS WELL-REALIZED? THAT FEELS HONEST AND REAL? THAT IS CRAFTED WITHOUT EXTRANEOUS EXCESS? THAT GETS YOU TO LEARN SOMETHING YOU NEVER KNEW BEFORE? OR IS IT SOMETHING THAT SPEAKS TO SOME ARCHAIC TRUTH THAT YOU NOW RECOGNIZE IN YOUR SELF? THE CORRECT ANSWER IS "YES." WHY GOOD FRIEND, A GOOD STORY DOES ALL THOSE THINGS. THERE IS, OF COURSE, SOME AMOUNT OF WIGGLE ROOM WHEN IT COMES TO HOW SUCCESSFUL A STORY NEEDS TO BE AT EACH OF THOSE ELEMENTS. FOR INSTANCE, IF YOUR STORY IS REALLY CONCERNED WITH THE THEMATIC MEANING OF A SCENE IT CAN INDULGE IN SOME ASPECTS THAT ARE NOT WHOLLY CRITICAL FOR THE STORY, BUT REALLY THERE IS A NEGOTIATION TO ALL THIS. YOU CAN'T LOSE SIGHT OF ALL THE THINGS A GOOD STORY NEEDS, BUT WHEN YOU DO IT HAS TO BE FOR A REALLY GOOD REASON. SURE THAT GOOD REASON MOSTLY DEPENDS ON WHAT IS MATTERS TO YOU, THE PROVERBIAL AUTHOR, OR YOU, THE PROVERBIAL AUDIENCE MEMBER, BUT HULK STILL THINKS IT'S SAFE TO SAY THAT IF YOU LOOK DOWN THE LIST OF GREAT AND / OR FAVORITE FILMS, THAN YOU WILL FIND THAT THOSE STORIES REALLY DO CAPTURE ALL OF THESE ELEMENTS. SO LET'S JUST GO FOR IT! HERE HULK PRESENTS A WORKING DEFINITION OF IDEAL STORYTELLING: A GOOD NARRATIVE IS COMPELLING TO THE AUDIENCE, ECONOMICALLY TOLD, FEELS REAL EITHER IN TERMS OF EMOTION, DETAIL, OR TEXTURE, AND SPEAKS TO SOME THEMATIC TRUTH THAT YOU RECOGNIZE IN YOURSELF OR THE WORLD AT LARGE. TA-DA! ALL HULK HAD TO DO WAS CHEAT WITH A RUN-ON SENTENCE AND LIST THE STUFF HULK SAID EARLIER. YOU MAY HAVE ALSO NOTICED THAT WE HAVE NOW ANOTHER HULK-DEFINITION THAT HAS A REALLY HIGH STANDARD FOR EXECUTION. REMEMBER THIS DEFINITION NOT MEANT TO BE EXCLUSIVE, BUT TO SIMPLY SET THE KIND OF MODEL FOR HOW TO CREATE THE BEST POSSIBLE STORIES. THE DEFINITION IS MEANT TO BE AN INSPIRATION AND PRACTICAL. ALL THE BEST STORIES ARE MULTIFACETED, COMPLEX, INTERESTING, AND RESONANT. NO MATTER HOW TECHNICALLY "UNTRUE" A STORY MAY BE, A WELL-TOLD, COMPELLING ONE WILL STILL FEEL MORE REAL THAN ANYTHING ELSE IN THE WORLD POSSIBLY COULD. THE BEST STORIES SPEAK TO YOUR MIND (THEMATICALLY), BODY (VISCERALLY), AND SOUL (RESONANCE). SO OF COURSE YOU WANT YOUR STORIES TO DO THE SAME. WHEN YOU LOOK BACK TO THE HISTORY OF OUR SPECIES, IT TELLS YOU EVERYTHING TO DO. IT TELLS YOU THE PURPOSE OF THE STORYTELLER, WHICH IS NOT MERELY HERE TO ENTERTAIN (THOUGH THAT'S CERTAINLY PART OF IT), BUT TO ENGAGE THE YOUNGER GENERATION THE TOOLS THEY NEED TO UNDERSTAND HOW TO CARRY ON. IT MEANS YOU SHOULD EMBRACE THE HIGH STANDARD. SIT DOWN AND LOOK AT THAT DEFINITION AND LOOK AT YOUR OWN STORIES. ASK YOURSELF, ARE YOU TRYING TO BE COOL INSTEAD OF COMPELLING? ARE YOU TRYING TO BE FUNNY AND EDGY INSTEAD OF BEING REAL TO YOUR CHARACTERS? OR INSTEAD OF TO THE WORLD YOU'VE CREATED? HECK, ARE YOU EVEN THINKING ABOUT WHAT YOUR STORY SAYS ON AN LARGER THEMATIC LEVEL? QUITE SIMPLY, ARE YOU DOING ALL THE THINGS YOU NEED TO FIT OUR WORKING DEFINITION OF A GOOD NARRATIVE?
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THE ANSWERS TO THESE QUESTIONS WILL TELL YOU EVERYTHING YOU NEED TO KNOW. OKAY, GEE THANKS HULK FOR THE BIG DEFINITION THERE, BUT I DON'T KNOW WHERE TO EVEN BEGIN. WHAT KIND OF STORIES DO I EVEN TELL? HULK WOULD LIKE TO SUGGEST THAT YOU IMPLICITLY KNOW STORIES. YOU KNOW THEM IN YOUR BONES. YOU'VE SEEN / READ / HEARD THOUSANDS. YOU, NO MATTER WHO YOU ARE, INSTINCTIVELY KNOW WHAT MAKES STORIES GOOD AND HOW THEY WORK. THE KEY IS BECOMING AWARE OF WHAT YOU ALREADY KNOW.
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BECAUSE THE GERM OF YOUR IDEA CAN BE THE THING THAT MUST CONSTANTLY LIGHT THE FIRE UNDERNEATH YOU. WHILE IN THE SLOG OF WORKING IT OUT YOU MUST FIND THAT INSPIRATION. THE IDEA ITSELF BE A THROUGH-LINE THAT SAVES YOUR SCRIPT THROUGHOUT THE PROCESS. THE MOMENT OF INSPIRATION IS BOTH YOUR MOTIVE AND MOTIVATION. BUT EVEN THEN, WHERE TO GET THAT IDEA WRITTEN ON A NAPKIN? THE GERM OF THE IDEA? THE VERY FIRST THING THAT YOU WRITE DOWN? THE ANSWERS TO THOSE QUESTIONS ARE SO ETHEREAL AND VAGUE THAT IT IS ALMOST FOOLISH TO REALLY TRY AND ANSWER IT. BUT, FOOLISH AS IT MAY BE, HULK WANTS TO HELP YOU. SO HULK GOING TO DO HULK'S BEST HERE AND TRY TO GIVE SOME PRODUCTIVE WAYS OF FINDING STORIES YOU WANT TO TELL. HULK WILL START WITH A QUESTION: WHAT COMPELS YOU? AT FIRST, TRY TO ANSWER IT ON A MACRO LEVEL: ARE YOU CONCERNED WITH YOUTH ISSUES? ANIMALS? CROOKED POLITICIANS? THE UNSUNG PLIGHT OF NURSES? CORRUPT BUSINESS MEN? YOU ARE REALLY ASKING YOURSELF, WHAT DO I HAVE AN OPINION ABOUT? PEOPLE LOOK FOR THESE KIND OF BROAD TOPICS IN COMING UP WITH IDEAS DOCUMENTARIES ALL THE TIME, BUT IT IS ALSO A GREAT WAY TO APPROACH FICTION. OFTEN THESE ISSUES HAVE SOME SORT OF PERSONAL RELEVANCE, WHICH SPEAKS TO THE OLD ADAGE "WRITE WHAT YOU KNOW," BUT HULK THINK THAT PHRASING TO SOME REAL PROBLEMS (WHICH HULK WILL EXPLAIN LATER IN THE ESSAY WHEN WE GET TO THE "REAL LIFE" STUFF). INSTEAD, HULK THINKS WHAT COMPELS YOU IS MUCH MORE FUNCTIONAL APPROACH. ONE REASON THIS APPROACH WORKS IS BECAUSE IT NATURALLY IMBUES YOUR FILM WITH THE THEMATIC BACKBONE YOU NEED. AND THE OTHER REASONS IS BECAUSE, COME ON, YOU SHOULD FREAKING CARE ABOUT THE STORY YOU ARE TELLING. OTHERWISE, WHY DO IT? WHEN A WRITER AND FILMMAKER CARES, THEN IT JUST RADIATES OFF THE PAGE OR SCREEN. THE AUDIENCE REALLY CAN TELL. AND IF YOU DON'T CARE? THAT COMES ACROSS PLAIN AS DAY TOO. EVEN IF IT'S NOT THE ACTUAL THEMATIC MATTER YOU FIND ENGAGING, IT SHOULD BE SOMETHING ELSE ABOUT THE WORK. MOST OFTEN WRITERS AND FILMMAKERS CARE FOR GENRE, EFFECT, OR CRAFT. YOU TELLING A SCARY STORY? YOU SHOULD DELIGHT IN SCARING YOUR AUDIENCE. TREAT THE SCREEN THE SAME WAY YOU WOULD IF YOU WERE TELLING IT AT THE CAMPFIRE. ENGAGE THEM. BUT REMEMBER, THIS LARGE SCALE APPROACH IS JUST ONE HALF OF THE DEAL. EVEN IF YOU HAVE A STRONG, INTERESTING OPINION ON A SUBJECT, THE IDEA STILL HAS TO BE EXPLORED THROUGH THE CONTEXT OF ORGANIC CHARACTERS. THE CHARACTERS CAN'T BE PROPS TO LARGER IDEAS BECAUSE THE STORY WILL THEN REEK OF BEING HOLLOW AND MANUFACTURED. WHICH MEANS YOU CAN'T JUST REVERSE ENGINEER SOME CHARACTERS THAT FIT YOUR IDEAL SITUATION AND HAVE THEM ACT OUT WHAT YOU WANT TO SAY. IT HAS TO BE BALANCED. SO LET'S GO BACK TO THE SAME QUESTION: WHAT COMPELS YOU? THIS TIME LET'S ANSWER ON A MICRO-LEVEL: "MY FRIEND SO-AND-SO IS AMAZING, THEY WORK VOLUNTEER AT A HOSPITAL AND ...", OR "I READ THIS GREAT ARTICLE ABOUT SO AND
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SO." HECK, IT DOESN'T EVEN HAVE TO PEOPLE-CENTRIC. YOU CAN BE LIKE "I THOUGHT OF THIS GREAT SCENARIO WHERE...", OR "THIS REALLY NEAT SCI-FI WORLD WHERE SO-ANDSO IS POSSIBLE." OR HECK, YOU CAN JUST HAVE THOUGHT OF A SINGLE LINE OR IMAGE WHICH YOU FIND COMPELLING. THESE MICRO-LEVEL DETAILS ARE A MUCH MORE COMMON FORM OF INSPIRATION. THEY ARE SMALL IDEAS THAT EXCITE YOU TO LARGER POSSIBILITIES. BUT THEY ARE NOT NARRATIVES. YOU CANNOT SIMPLY SAY "I WANT TO WRITE ABOUT THIS TEXTURED, INTERESTING PERSON." AND IT WILL MAGICALLY PRODUCE A TEXTURED, INTERESTING STORY. SO OFTEN, A LOT OF RECENT MOVIES HAVE HAD TROUBLE WHEN THEY ASSUME TEXTURE AND CHARACTER DETAIL SOMEHOW IS THE SAME THING AS MOTIVE. THE WHOLE HATRED FOR "INDIE MOVIES" HAS NOTHING TO DO WITH THEM BEING QUIRKY, OR MAUDLIN, OR SACCHARINE. IT'S BECAUSE THEY'RE OFTEN SO EMPTY. IT'S NOT THAT THEIR CHARACTERISTICS DON'T "FEEL REAL" IT'S THAT SO OFTEN THESE CHARACTERISTICS TRY TO HIDE A LACK OF NARRATIVE OR THEMATIC PURPOSE. IT IS CHARACTER-DETAIL APROPOS OF NOTHING. YOU HAVE TO GO FURTHER THAN THAT. WITH REAL LIFE STORIES SOMETIMES THE "FACTS" GET IN THE WAY OF GOOD STORIES. HULK WILL GET BALLS DEEP INTO WHY THAT IS LATER, BUT HULK JUST HAVE TO MAKE SURE WE UNDERSTAND THAT THE CONSTRUCTION OF NARRATIVE IS SOMETHING MORE SPECIFIC TO NARRATIVE ITSELF. ULTIMATELY, A GOOD NARRATIVE IS BORN BY COMBINING THESE MACRO AND MICRO APPROACHES INTO ONE SINGULAR, COHERENT IDEA. YOUR CHARACTERS AND THE STORY THEY INHABIT SHOULD BE IN COMPLETE ALIGNMENT WITH THE INTENTION OF YOUR THEMES. WHICH MEANS YOUR NARRATIVE IS ESSENTIALLY "WHAT YOU ARE SAYING." SO WHEN YOU HAVE A GERM OF AN IDEA THAT COMPELS YOU, WHETHER IT'S A DETAIL, A PERSON, A CONCEPT, OR A THEME, YOU MUST THEN ZERO IN AND FIGURE OUT HOW THAT GERM THEN BECOMES A STORY. FOR EXAMPLE, WHEN ALAN BALL CREATED SIX FEET UNDER, HE HAD A PASSING THOUGHT ABOUT A FAMILY WHO WORKED AS UNDERTAKERS AND HOW THAT MUST BE A WEIRD LIFE CONFRONTING MORTALITY EVERY DAY OF THEIR LIVES. THAT WAS THE GERM OF THE IDEA. IT WASN'T JUST THAT IT WAS"WEIRD" OR "DIFFERENT," BUT THAT THEY ENGAGED THIS TOPIC SO PLAINLY. THE BATTLES A CONCEPT THAT IS SO DAMN PERTINENT TO A CULTURE THAT LARGELY AVOIDS THE TOPIC ALTOGETHER. BUT THAT WAS JUST THE CONCEIT. HE FILLED IT OUT WITH RICH, TEXTURED CHARACTERS THAT ALSO COMPELLED HIM. PRIM MATRIARCHS, 30 YEAR OLD GRANOLA TRANSIENTS, CLOSETED ADULTS, AND DISAFFECTED TEENS. BUT AGAIN. THAT DOESN'T MAKE A STORY. HE THEN CAME UP WITH TWO DEVICES THAT PROPELLED EVERYTHING. FIRST, THE FATHER DYING SO THIS SHOW ABOUT CONFRONTING MORTALITY BECAME ALL THE MORE FOCUSED ON A PERSONAL LEVEL. THE SECOND, WAS THAT THAT EVERY SINGLE EPISODE WOULD OPEN WITH A CLIENT'S DEATH. AGAIN, REINFORCING THE THEME OF CONFRONTING MORTALITY IN EVERY POSSIBLE WAY. DO YOU SEE THE ROLE THE GERM PLAYS? YOU THINK ABOUT WHAT COMPELS YOU AND IN THIS CASE IT WAS THE IMAGE OF A FAMILY AND THE IDEA OF "CONFRONTING MORTALITY." HE USED THAT AS THE THROUGH LINE FOR THE ENTIRE SERIES, RIGHT UP UNTIL "THE END."
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NOTICE HOW HULK BROUGHT UP A TV SHOW AS THE EXAMPLE? HULK DID THAT ON PURPOSE. NOT EVERY IDEA IS A GREAT FIT FOR THE MEDIUM OF SCREENWRITING. SOME MAKE SENSE FOR TV. SOME MAKE SENSE FOR A NOVEL. SOME MAKES SENSE FOR VIDEO GAMES. SOME MAKE SENSE FOR A SKETCH. HULK READS THINGS EVERY DAY THAT SHOULD REALLY BEST BE SUITED AS OTHER THINGS. BUT HOW TO KNOW WHAT IS BEST FOR WHAT? ... OKAY IT'S ACTUALLY PRETTY DIFFICULT, BUT THE IDEA IS TO REALLY ZOOM IN ON WHAT MAKES THE STORY WORK FOR ITS OWN PURPOSES. HULK'S ADVICE IS TO NOT THINK OF IT AS A MOVIE. JUST THINK OF IT AS A STORY. LITTLE, BIG, WHATEVER. ONCE YOU UNDERSTAND WHAT THE STORY IS ON ITS OWN MERITS, YOU CAN PLAY WITH IT TO FIGURE OUT HOW THAT STORY BEST WORKS AS A MOVIE, A TV SHOW, COMIC, WHATEVER YOU THINK BEST. BUT NO MATTER WHAT, IT FIRST HAS TO COMPEL YOU.
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REALLY A WHOLE LIFETIME OF COLUMNS. UNDERSTANDING FILM IS A PERCEPTIVE ART TAKES YEARS TO GET A GOOD GRASP, BUT THE GOOD NEWS THAT THIS INFORMATION AND KNOW-HOW IS SOMETHING ALREADY LOCKED INSIDE YOUR BODY. YOU KNOW MOVIES. YOU'VE BEEN WATCHING THEM YOUR WHOLE LIFE. SO YOU JUST NEED TO WATCH AS MANY AS POSSIBLE FROM HERE ON IN AND THEN IT IS JUST UP TO YOUR BRAIN TO BEST UNDERSTAND THE PROCESS YOUR BODY GOES THROUGH WHILE YOU'RE WATCHING THEM. YOU JUST HAVE TO THINK CRITICALLY WHILE YOU DO SO. WHY IS THE PROCESS SO IMPORTANT? BECAUSE IF YOU INTRINSICALLY UNDERSTAND MOVIES EVEN IF YOU'RE TOTALLY UNAWARE THEN THAT MEANS THE AUDIENCE INTRINSICALLY UNDERSTAND MOVIES TOO. WHICH MEANS YOU CAN'T JUST SLING CRAP UP THERE AND "EXPECT THE MORONS TO LOVE IT." BELIEVE IT OR NOT, THE GENERAL AUDIENCE KNOWS GOOD STUFF WHEN THEY SEE IT. MOVIES CAN WORK VISCERALLY FOR EVERYONE. THE WALKED OUT OF THE FIRST PIRATES, RISE OF THE PLANET APES, AND BOURNE SUPREMACY AND "GOT IT" SO TO SPEAK. THERE WILL ALWAYS ERRANT CASES OF SOMEONE ACTING OUTSIDE THE BAROMETER, BUT FOR THE MOST PART, WELL-TOLD TRADITIONAL NARRATIVES WILL ALWAYS WORK LIKE GANGBUSTERS. NOW YOU MAY POINT ON THE SUCCESS OF THE TRANSFORMERS SERIES AS EVIDENCE THAT SHITTY STUFF SUCCEEDS TOO, BUT THEY ARE A RARE AND SPECIAL CASE OF AN AUDIENCE KNOWING THE BRAINLESS FODDER THEY ARE ABOUT TO RECEIVE AND GOING FOR IT. PLUS HULK ARGUE THE TINY BIT OF EMOTIONAL CONNECTIVE TISSUE IN THE FIRST FILM (DON'T TORTURE BUMBLEBEE!) ACTUALLY EARNED THE SERIES A GREAT DEAL OF PUBLIC GOODWILL GOING FORWARD. DOUBLE-PLUS, YOU CANNOT CONFUSE MARKETING AND ECONOMICS WITH SOMETHING BEING "A GOOD STORY." JUST CAUSE IT GETS BUTTS IN SEATS, DOESN'T MAKE IT GOOD. HULK REALLY BELIEVES THAT PEOPLE KNOW GOOD TRADITIONAL MOVIES BY INSTINCT AND THAT IS BECAUSE EVERY PERSON ON THE PLANET IMPLICITLY UNDERSTANDS THE EFFECTS AND NEEDS OF NARRATIVE. SO THE QUESTION YOU HAVE TO ASK WHEN EVALUATING A FILM IS SIMPLE: DID MOST PEOPLE WALK OUT OF THE FILM SAYING "IT WORKED."? LET'S GO BACK TO THE [CONDENSED] MISSION STATEMENT: THIS COLUMN IS NOT ABOUT SCREENPLAYS THAT SELL, OR POP, OR HOW TO PITCH. THESE ARE ALL ELEMENTS OF SUCCESS, BUT HULK ARGUE IT IS THE KIND OF SUCCESS THAT DOESN'T LAST. KNOWING HOW TO WRITE, LASTS. SO THIS COLUMN IS ABOUT BECOMING A BETTER WRITER AND STORYTELLER. IT IS ABOUT WRITING SCREENPLAYS THAT WORK. BECAUSE AUDIENCES INSTINCTIVELY KNOW HOW THEY SHOULD WORK, EVEN IF THEY CANNOT ARTICULATE IT. THEY KNOW IF THEY FELT CONNECTED, OR INTERESTED, OR LAUGHED, OR SCREAMED. THEY KNOW IF THEY WERE COMPELLED. SO KNOWING HOW AN AUDIENCE WILL RESPOND TO WHAT IS PUT ON SCREEN IS EVERYTHING. YOU HAVE TO BE EFFECTIVE. HULK WILL DELVE INTO A WHOLE BUNCH OF TOOLS TO BE EFFECTIVE, BUT YOU JUST HAVE TO UNDERSTAND THAT YOU NEED TO WATCH A TON OF MOVIES. YOU NEED TO GET YOUR LEARN ON.
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BUT MORE IMPORTANTLY HULK HAS READS A METRIC FUCK TON OF THEM. NOT CASUALLY EITHER, BUT FOR, LIKE, PROFESSIONAL PURPOSES AND STUFF. MEANING HULK'S ABILITY TO LOOK AT A SCREENPLAY AND IDENTIFY WHY IT WORKS AND WHY IT DOESN'T IS A BIG PART OF WHAT HULK DO. AND AS SUCH, IT'S NOT THAT HULK WANT BE AN AUTHORITY, BUT A CHANCE TO OFFER WHAT HULK HAS KNOWN & EXPERIENCED. AND THAT MAY BE OF SOME USE. AND IT MAY NOT. HULK JUST WANTS TO SHARE THE STRUGGLE JUST LIKE YOU. THAT'S MORE THE REASON THAN ANYTHING. BUT SINCE THIS PARTICULAR ARENA OF FILMMAKING IS "WHAT HULK DO" YOU MAY NOTE A SLIGHT DIFFERENCE IN TONE TO THIS ARTICLE. HULK WILL BE A TAD LESS CAUTIOUS AND A TAD MORE DIRECT. AND IN FULL-DISCLOSURE , SOME OF THIS DIRECTNESS OF TONE HAS TO DO WITH SOMETHING A LITTLE MORE JADED... AT LEAST MORE THAN YOU WOULD EXPECT FROM HULK... AS HULK SAID THERE ARE THOUSANDS AND THOUSANDS OF PEOPLE IN LOS ANGELES WHO HAVE CLAIMED TO HAVE "WRITTEN A SCREENPLAY" AND ARE NOW TRYING TO SELL IT. IN COMPLETE HONESTY, WHAT THEY HAVE WRITE IS MORE THAN LIKELY TOTAL CRAP. THEY MAY HAVE A GOOD IDEA. THEY MAY HAVE A GOOD SENSE OF MOVIES. THEY MAY HAVE THE RIGHT INTENTIONS. BUT THEY HAVE NOT EVEN PUT IN CLOSE TO 1/100TH THE WORK THAT SO MANY WORKING PROFESSIONALS IN THIS INDUSTRY ACTUALLY HAVE. AND SORRY, BUT HULK RESPECTS THOSE WORKING PROFESSIONALS TOO MUCH TO NOT ACKNOWLEDGE THE STUNNING GAP BETWEEN THE QUALITY. AND YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW HARD MOST OF THEIR PATHS WERE IN GETTING TO WHERE THEY GO. THEY WORK AT THE CRAFT OF WRITING THE SAME WAY ONE WORKS AT ANY DEMANDING JOB. AND THEY ARE REALLY GOOD AT IT. SO IMAGINE IF YOU SUDDENLY HOPPED ON A MAJOR LEAGUE FIELD AND JUST WENT UP TO BAT. RIDICULOUS ANALOGY, HULK KNOW, BUT THIS HAPPENS ALL THE TIME IN LOS ANGELES AND NOBODY THINKS TWICE ABOUT IT. THERE IS THIS WEIRD ASSUMPTION THAT ANYONE CAN WRITE A SCREENPLAY IF THEY HAVE A NEAT ENOUGH IDEA. HULK KNOWS THIS IS A DEMOCRATIC MERITOCRACY, THAT'S ACTUALLY ONE OF THE GREAT THINGS ABOUT THE INDUSTRY (ANYONE THE RIGHT CONNECTION CAN HAVE A SHOT AT BEING A SCREENWRITER), BUT HULK'S OBVIOUS PROBLEM IS WITH THE LACK OF AWARENESS. THE BLIND ASSUMPTION THAT SOMEBODIES LITERAL FIRST ATTEMPT TO WRITE A SCREENPLAY COULD SOMEHOW BE WORTHY IS DOWNRIGHT STRANGE (NOTE: DOESN'T FULLY APPLY TO WRITERS OF OTHER NARRATIVE FORMS, BUT STILL DOES MORE THAN YOU'D THINK). SO MANY PEOPLE JUST HAVE NO AWARENESS OF WHERE THEY STAND. HENCE: DELUSION. AND IT'S A KIND OF DELUSION THAT SUFFOCATES THE INDUSTRY AND MAKES IT HARDER FOR FOLKS WHO CAN ACTUALLY WRITE. IT CREATES A CULTURE WHERE IT'S MORE DIFFICULT TO HAVE CONFIDENCE TO "SELL THEMSELVES." THE DON'T WANT TO BE LIKE THE REST OF THE DELUSIONAL, PRESSURING JERKS. SO HULK JUST WANT YOU TO REALIZE THAT KNOWING WHERE YOU STAND, AND HOW FAR YOU HAVE TO GO IS A CRITICAL ELEMENT TO UNDERSTANDING WHERE YOU STAND IN YOUR WRITING DEVELOPMENT. THIS ISN'T ACCUSATORY. HULK TOTALLY INCLUDES HULKSELF IN THIS ONE TOO. REALLY, HULK KNOW THAT ENTIRE PARAGRAPH ABOVE REEK OF A KIND OF ELITISM. HULK TOTALLY, TOTALLY AWARE OF THAT. BUT THAT'S NOT HOW IT'S MEANT. THE STATEMENT IS MEANT TO SHOW YOU THAT YOU HAVE TO START REALLY WORKING FOR IT. YOU HAVE TO RESPECT THE CRAFT AND THE EFFORT THE SAME WAY THE
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PROFESSIONALS DO. HULK REALLY, REALLY WANTS YOU TO BE A BETTER SCREENWRITER. YOU JUST HAVE TO TAKE IT REALLY, REALLY SERIOUSLY. WHY IS THAT SO IMPORTANT? BECAUSE:
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SADLY DISCOVERED THAT THROUGH MARKETING, TONE-APPEAL, STAR-POWER, AND PROPERTY RECOGNITION THEY COULD STILL GET BUTTS IN SEATS OPENING WEEKEND. WHICH IS SUPER-GREAT FOR THEM BECAUSE THEY DIDN'T UNDERSTAND HOW SCRIPTS AND STORIES WORKED IN THE FIRST PLACE... TO BE FAIR THERE ARE A GOOD DEAL OF EXECUTIVES WHO ARE STUNNINGLY BRILLIANT. AND WOULDN'T YOU KNOW IT, BUT THE THINGS THEY PRODUCE ON TEND TO BE RATHER GOOD TOO! BUT THE IMPORTANT THING IS THAT SCRIPTS REALLY USE TO MATTER TO THE INDUSTRY. THE BUSINESS OF MOVIES WORKED ON A LONG-PLAY SELL FOR WEEKS AND WEEKS. WORD OF MOUTH WAS WHAT GOT BUTTS IN SEATS OVER TIME, AND IT DIDN'T HAVE MUCH TO DO WITH OPENING WEEKEND BOX OFFICE. SO WRITING A GOOD STORY, WELL-TOLD WAS YOUR FREAKING BUSINESS MODEL. NOW? IT'S A NEAT LITTLE BONUS. WHICH IS ANOTHER IDEA THAT HULK WOULD LIKE TO SUGGEST IS SHORT-SIGHTED BALLS. CONSIDER THE FOLLOWING ARGUMENT: IF THE MOST VALUABLE THING A MOVIE STUDIO CAN GET THEIR HANDS ON IS "A FRANCHISE" THEN HOW DO YOU GET PEOPLE INTERESTED IN COMING BACK TIME AND TIME AGAIN? YOU MAKE A GOOD FIRST MOVIE. AND THAT MEANS YOU NEED, LIKE, A GOOD STORY, RIGHT? NOT TO GET TOO SMASHY, BUT SERIOUSLY PEOPLE, HOW IS THIS NOT FUCKING OBVIOUS? THERE IS THE COMMON KNOWLEDGE THAT THE BOX OFFICE OF SEQUELS HAS LITTLE TO DO WITH THE ACTUAL MOVIE, BUT IS INSTEAD ARE A REACTION TO THE LAST ONE. HOW OFTEN DO WE HEAR " _____ WAS SO GOOD THAT I CAN'T WAIT FOR ____2!" ISN'T THAT HOW YOU BUILD THE FRANCHISE MODEL? HULK UNDERSTAND THAT EVERYONE TRYING TO MAKE A GOOD FIRST MOVIE AND ALL THAT, BUT BEING SURE YOU'VE LOCKED ONTO A GREAT SCRIPT IS THE FIRST PART OF THAT. IF A FRANCHISE IS EVERYTHING TO CORPORATE FOLKS, THEN WHY INSIST THE STORY DOESN'T MATTER? A GOOD STORY WELL-TOLD, IS SECRETLY STILL THE BUSINESS MODEL, WE'RE JUST NOT SEEING IT. INSTEAD, ONE OF THE GUYS RUNNING DISNEY SAYS "ONLY SET-PIECES MATTER" AND THEN CAN'T FIGURE OUT WHY NOBODY FUCKING LIKED TRON. THIS IS THE VERY PINNACLE OF "NOT GETTING IT." THE SCRIPT MATTERS. THIS EVEN TRUE FOR ALL THE POPULAR "IMPROV COMEDIES" YOU SEE IN TODAY'S LANDSCAPE. GUESS WHAT? ALL THOSE HEAVILY IMPROVISED ADAM MCKAY MOVIES? HAVE YOU EVER READ THE SCRIPTS? THEY'RE PRETTY FREAKING GOOD. AND THEY'RE A LOT CLOSER TO THE FINAL PRODUCT THAN YOU MAY REALIZE. THE CHARACTER ARCS, THE RELATIVE POINTS, THE TONE. IT'S ALL THERE, AND IT'S ALL OFTEN GREAT. THE IMPROV'S FUNCTION IS ONLY TO FIND THE BEST POSSIBLE JOKES, WHICH THEY ONLY MANAGE TO ACCOMPLISH BY GETTING SOME OF THE BEST COMEDIC PERFORMING MINDS IN A ROOM TOGETHER. IT'S A DIALOGUE RE-WRITE ALONE. NOT AN IMPROVISED NARRATIVE. SO TO ALL YOU BUDDING IMPROV-BASED WRITERS, YOU NEED TO HAVE TO WRITE A SCRIPT YOU'RE PROUD OF FIRST. IMPROV IS A GREAT PERFORMANCE TOOL, BUT IS NOT AN APPROACH TO STORY. YOU NEED THE FOCUS THAT NARRATIVE BRINGS. SO HAVE THE SCRIPT BE THE SOUL OF YOUR PROJECT AND SOMETHING YOU'D BE PROUD OF, AND THEN TRY TO USE IMPROV TO SIMPLY TRY AND IMPROVE THE SURFACE.
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YOU KNOW WHO AGREES? TINA FEY. SHE WAS WHOLLY BORN FROM THE 2ND CITY IMPROV MODEL, YET SHE BASES ALL HER WRITING ON THE WORK OF GOLDEN AGE TV AND THE SIMPSONS. THE SCRIPT MATTERS.
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STORY YOU FIND COMPELLING WITH THE DETAILS AND ICONOGRAPHY OF THE KNOWN PROPERTY. YOU MAKE IT YOUR OWN. AFTER ALL, NOLAN DIDN'T MAKE BATMAN FOR ADULTS BECAUSE IT WAS "GRITTY." HE MADE IT FOR ADULTS BY MAKING A BATMAN MOVIE THAT WAS ABOUT INTERESTING ADULTMINDED CONCEPTS. CITY POLITICS. SYMBOLS. ANARCHISM. HE TOOK THE BATMAN ICONOGRAPHY AND ENGAGED WITH IDEAS THAT INTERESTED HIM. AND BY DOING THAT HE TRANSCENDED THE PROPERTY THROUGH THE POWER AND KNOW-HOW OF ORIGINAL STORYTELLING.
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THE SINGLE UNIVERSAL TRUTH OF HUMANITY'S SURVIVAL... WHOA. PLEASE EXCUSE THE NAIVE-SOUNDING LOFTINESS OF THE FOLLOWING, BUT IN AN EFFORT TO BE ATTUNED AND GROUNDED HUMAN BEINGS, WE SOMETIMES MISS THE SAME LOFTY TRUTHS THAT STARE US RIGHT IN THE FACE. HULK WOULD LIKE TO SUGGEST THAT IT IS AN OBVIOUS, YET CRITICAL TRUTH THAT EMPATHY IS WHAT BINDS HUMAN BEINGS TOGETHER. IT'S WHAT ALLOWS US TO LOVE OUR PARTNERS, FAMILIES, AND FRIENDS. UNLESS WE'RE DIPPING INTO SOME SCHADENFREUDE, IT IS EVEN WHAT GIVES US OUR CAPACITY FOR JOY AND LAUGHTER. MEANING EMPATHY ISN'T JUST "A NICE THING WE HAVE IN LIFE," BUT A WHOLLY NECESSARY FUNCTION. TO PARAPHRASE DAVID FOSTER WALLACE, IT'S WHY WE DON'T SPEND EVERY SECOND OF THE DAY CLUBBING EACH OTHER THE HEAD AND STEALING EACH OTHER'S GROCERIES. EVEN IN A WORLD CONTAINING CRIME, DEPRAVITY, AND WAR, IT IS EMPATHY THAT ALLOWS US TO SOMETIMES REFRAIN FROM THOSE VERY THINGS. WHICH MEANS IT'S WHY WE SURVIVE AS SPECIES. THOSE ARE THE DAMN STAKES AND IT'S STUNNING HOW OFTEN THIS REALIZATION PASSES US BY... AND IT'S OFTEN WHY WE MISS THE FACT IT BELONGS IN (ALMOST) EVERY KIND OF STORY. WHEN IT COMES TO OUR MOVIES, EMPATHY IS ALSO THE VERY THING INVOLVES AN AUDIENCE AND KEEPS THEIR ATTENTION. IT HOOKS INTO THEIR BONES ON A VISCERAL LEVEL. IT GIVES THE AUDIENCE ROOTING INTEREST AND PERSPECTIVE. IT IS THE REASON A MOVIE IS EXPERIENCED INSTEAD OF WATCHED. MOVIES ARE UNIQUE IN THAT THEY GET TO HAVE A PERSON ACTUALLY PARTICIPATE IN THE OLD CLICHE OF "WALKING A MILE IN ANOTHER MAN'S SHOES." WE TAKE IT FOR GRANTED, BUT ISN'T THAT KIND OF AMAZING? A GREAT FILMMAKER USES EMPATHY AS THEIR FUEL. THEY USE IT COMPEL THE AUDIENCE. AND HULK TRULY LOVES THAT THE THING THAT ENABLES HUMANITY TO FUNCTION IS THE SAME EXACT THING THAT ENABLES MOVIES TO WORK! NOTHING COULD BE MORE APPROPRIATE FOR HULK'S FAVORITE MEDIUM. BUT NOW THAT WE KNOW EMPATHY IS IMPORTANT, THE QUESTION THEN BECOMES HOW THE HECK DO WE USE IT? THERE IS THE OLD ADAGE THAT YOU CAN MAKE AN AUDIENCE CARE JUST BY THREATENING TO "KILL THE KITTEN."
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THIS IS JUST A SAYING OF COURSE. YOU DON'T ACTUALLY NEED TO THREATEN TO KILL THE KITTEN (UNLESS YOU WROTE THE GIRL WITH THE DRAGON TATTOO OR SOMETHING). WHAT THIS ANALOGY REALLY MEANS IS YOU TAKE SOME OBVIOUS THING TO EMPATHIZE WITH (CUTE KITTEN!) AND YOU PUT IT IN SOME KIND HORRIBLE DANGER AND INSTANTLY THE AUDIENCE IS AUTOMATICALLY INVOLVED IN YOUR MOVIE. BUT IT ALSO CAN BE ANY OF THESE RATHER HUMAN, OFT-EXPERIENCED SORT OF THINGS. LIKE SPILLING COFFEE ON YOURSELF. OR HAVING PARENTS THAT "JUST DON'T UNDERSTAND!" OR THE FOIL OF THAT AND HAVING BRATTY KIDS. BASICALLY YOU WANT TO HAVE THIS VERY RELATE-ABLE TEXTURE OR CONTEXT WHICH LETS THE AUDIENCE SAY "I TOTALLY RECOGNIZE AND SYMPATHIZE WITH THAT INCLINATION!" (NOTICE HULK SAID INCLINATION AND NOT "SITUATION" BECAUSE PEOPLE MAKE THAT MISTAKE. IT'S THE EMOTIONS WE IDENTIFY WITH, NOT THE PREDICAMENT.) THERE IS OF COURSE A WAY THAT THESE DEVICES CAN BE TOTALLY MANIPULATIVE. SOME PEOPLE HATE TO HAVE NARRATIVES BOX THEM IN WITH HOW TO FEEL AND THINK. RATHER THAN SPEND A BIG CHUNK OF THIS ON HOW TO BALANCE THE GOALS OF EMPATHY WITHOUT BEING MANIPULATIVE, IT IS FAR EASIER TO LINK TO DEVIN'S EXCELLENT REVIEW OF WARHORSE, WHICH COVERS THE SUBJECT QUITE WELL. THE MAIN POINT IS TO SIMPLY FIND THE RIGHT BALANCE OF PRESENTATION AND BE SURE THAT THERE ARE REAL CHARACTER MOTIVATIONS BEHIND THE DEVICES, MEANING THE DEVICES/SITUATION SHOULD DIRECTLY IMPACT OR COMMENT ON THE CHARACTER AND STORY AND NOT JUST BE THERE TO CHEAPLY GET "THE AUDIENCE ON THEIR SIDE." SADLY, THERE ARE A LOT OF PEOPLE IN THE FILMMAKING INDUSTRY WHO CONFUSE "EMPATHY" WITH "LIKABILITY." THE MISTAKE IS UNDERSTANDABLE, BUT PLEASE UNDERSTAND THAT THE TWO ARE NOT THE SAME THING IN THE SLIGHTEST. EMPATHY IS
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ABOUT RELATION AND UNDERSTANDING. THEY THINK LIKABILITY AMOUNTS TO "NOT HAVING YOUR CHARACTERS DO ANYTHING BAD." THIS ASSUMPTION IS COUNTERPRODUCTIVE BECAUSE WITHOUT HAVING A CHARACTER DO "THE WRONG / FALLIBLE THING" YOU WILL END UP CREATING SOME REAL SHIT DRAMA IF YOU ASK HULK. IN FACT, THIS GRAVE MISUNDERSTANDING ABOUT EMPATHY / LIKABILITY IS RESPONSIBLE FOR THE LEGIONS OF DOORMAT MAIN CHARACTERS THAT MOVIE AUDIENCES ARE TREATED TO TIME AND TIME AGAIN. FALLIBILITY IS EMPATHETIC! HULK KNOW HULK ALWAYS BRING UP INDIANA JONES AND WE DON'T LOVE HIM BECAUSE HE'S PERFECT, WE LOVE HIM BECAUSE HE'S CONSTANTLY FUCKING UP (AND BARELY GETTING OUT THE RESULTS). HE'S AFRAID OF THINGS, HE HAS FALSE CONFIDENCE, AND SHOWS FEAR. HE'S A PERFECT HUMAN ACTION HERO. HULK SAY IT NOW AND SAY IT FOREVER, LOOK TO INDY FOR INSPIRATION! THERE IS OF COURSE A RATHER MODERN TENDENCY TO GO THE OTHER WAY WITH EMPATHY AND TEST THE AUDIENCE BY SEEING HOW MUCH OF A DICK A CHARACTER CAN BE ON SCREEN. THESE SORT OF JERK-ASS ANTIHEROES LITTER THE SCREEN NOWADAYS, AND FOR COMEDY / DARK COMEDY PURPOSES THEY CAN WORK PRETTY WELL. BUT THERE'S A WHOLE ART TO IT. THE EFFECT IS ACTUALLY MEANT TO DISTANCE THE AUDIENCE IN ORDER TO ILLUMINATE SOME KIND OF LARGER POINT OR TRUTH ABOUT HUMAN BEHAVIOR. THIS POINT CAN BE BLACK-AS-NIGHT FUNNY OR DARKLY POETIC (COEN BROTHERS) OR IT CAN BE GRATING AS ALL HELL (THE SOMETIMES UNSUCCESSFUL WORK OF NEIL LABUTE). BUT THE KEY IS JUST TO HAVE AN UNDERSTANDING OF THAT APPROACH. THERE IS A REAL CONTRARIAN TENDENCY THESE DAYS TO GO THIS JERK-ASS DIRECTION JUST BECAUSE IT SEEMS DIFFERENT. THE INCLINATION IS FINE, BUT BE SURE THERE IS A POINT TO IT. DON'T JUST MAKE THE JERK-ASS MAIN CHARACTER A SHORTCUT TO BEING FUNNY / EDGY WITHOUT ANY SORT OF REAL THEMATIC EXPLORATION. YOU WILL NOW NOTICE, THAT WHETHER YOU GO THE EMPATHETIC OR DISTANCING ROUTE, A GOOD DEAL OF WHAT YOU HAVE TO DO TOMAKE IT COMPELLING IS EXPLORING IS THE HUMAN CONDITION. ASK YOURSELF BOLD QUESTIONS: WHAT IS IT THAT MAKES THIS CHARACTER GOOD? WHAT IS IT THAT MAKES THEM TROUBLED? WAIT, BETTER YET, LET'S GET SPECIFIC! ASK YOURSELF, WHY DO WE LIKE TONY SOPRANO? WHY DO WE NOT LIKE TONY SOPRANO? WHAT DETAILS ABOUT THIS CHARACTER'S LIFE MAKE HIM SO INTERESTING? HULK HAS SAT HERE AND WAXED PHILOSOPHICAL ABOUT EMPATHY FOR QUITE SOME TIME, BUT THAT'S BECAUSE THERE IS NO BASIC, TRUTHFUL SHORTCUT HULK CAN SAY WHICH MAKES YOU UNDERSTAND ITS NUANCES. YOU CAN THREATEN TO KILL THE KITTEN AND BE QUITE SUCCESSFUL AT IT, OR YOU BITE YOUR THUMB AT THE VERY CONCEPT OF EMPATHY ALL TOGETHER. THERE IS A WIDE SPECTRUM OF APPROACH AND ALL HULK WANTS YOU TO DO IS HAVE A REAL CONCRETE REASON FOR GOING IN EITHER DIRECTION. IT CAN'T JUST BE "BECAUSE IT IS EASY." AND WHATEVER YOU DO...
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FIGURE OUT HOW TO LET IT OUT. AND IF YOU DON'T GIVE THE CHARACTERS GOOD REASONS TO CHANGE, THEN YOU ARE ESSENTIALLY MAKING YOUR CHARACTERS BE INSINCERE. WE THINK OF THEM LIKE WE THINK OF TIGER WOODS. WE LOOK AT THE STORYTELLER LIKE THEY JUST WANTED THE CHARACTER TO FIT SOME POINT OR THE STORY THEY WANTED TO TELL... AND AUDIENCE CAN SMELL THAT INSINCERITY FROM A MILE AWAY. HULK KNOW THAT HULK MAKES THIS "SINCERE CHARACTER" THING SOUND LIKE IT'S EASY THING TO DO, BUT THIS IS ACTUALLY ONE OF THE MORE DIFFICULT THINGS FOR A WRITER TO SEE IN THEIR OWN WORK. THAT IS BECAUSE, AS THE CREATOR, IT IS OFTEN HARD TO SEPARATE ONESELF FROM THE POWER AND CONTROL OVER WHAT YOU ARE WRITING. "OF COURSE THE CHARACTER WOULD DO THAT! THAT'S WHAT I'M MAKING THEM DO!" BUT TO THE AUDIENCE, WHO ONLY GETS TO LEARN ABOUT THE CHARACTER THROUGH THE VERY DIFFERENT LENS OF EXPERIENCE, IT DOESN'T WORK LIKE THAT. THEY DON'T KNOW WHAT IS INSIDE YOUR HEAD. THEY ONLY SEE WHAT COMES OUT FROM THE STORY. AS SUCH, THEY ARE ACTUALLY MUCH BETTER AT READING "WHO THE CHARACTERS ARE" AS WELL AS THEIR CAPACITIES FOR GOOD AND BAD. AS SUCH, WHEN WRITING IT IS IMPORTANT TO GROUND YOURSELF IN THESE SAME TANGIBLE CAPACITIES. REMIND YOURSELF OF THEM CONSTANTLY. WHAT WOULD THEY REALLY DO? WHAT ARE THEIR MOTIVATIONS? WHAT DO THEY WANT? WHAT DO THEY NEED? ARE THEY SMART ENOUGH TO DO THAT? ARE THEY KIND ENOUGH TO DO THAT? ARE THEY MEAN ENOUGH TO DO THAT? YOU MAY LIKE THE EFFECT OF A DECISION, BUT IT HAS TO BE SINCERE. HULK KNOW WE ALL WANT TO EXPLORE STORYTELLING IN AS ADVENTUROUS A WAY AS POSSIBLE, BUT YOU HAVE TO DO WHAT MAKES SENSE FOR YOUR CHARACTER. GO WHERE THEY HAVE TO GO, NOT WHERE THE STORY WANTS THEM TO GO. NOW... HOW DO YOU DECIDE WHAT ACTUALLY MAKES SENSE FOR A CHARACTER?
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NUANCE OF HOW CHARACTERS BEHAVE. SO DON'T GO OVERBOARD. THAT BEING SAID, THE GREAT THING ABOUT CHARACTER TREES IS THE STUFF YOU COME UP WITH WILL ALWAYS BE THERE IF YOU NEED IT. HULK WAS ONCE INTRODUCED TO A SMART WAY OF KEEPING TRACK OF CHARACTER TREES BY USING BODY PARTS. YOU START AT THE BOTTOM AND GO UP, THUS "BUILDING A COMPLETE PERSON." TO WIT: A) FEET - WHAT DO THEY LOOK LIKE? WHAT ARE THE FACTS OF THEIR FAMILY HISTORY? WHERE HAVE THEY LIVED? THE FEET ARE ALL ARE FACTUAL DETAILS TO BE DRAWN ON. B) GROIN - WHAT DO THE WANT? HOW DOES THEIR SEXUALITY MANIFEST ITSELF? WHAT ARE THE OTHER BASE WANTS? GREED? APPROVAL? ESTEEM? THE GROIN ADDRESSES ALL THE THINGS ABOUT THE PERSON THAT ARE BORN OUT OF IMPULSE. C) HEART - WHAT DO THEY NEED? WHAT THINGS DO THEY SECRETLY NEED IN THEIR LIFE THAT WILL MAKE THEM A BETTER PERSON? NOTICE IT IS RATHER DIFFERENT FROM WHAT A CHARACTER "WANTS" (WHICH MAY BE MISGUIDED). A CHARACTER'S HEART IS LIKELY THE KEY TO THE ENDING CATHARSIS. D) THROAT - HOW DOES THE PERSON SOUND? NOT JUST THE LITERAL VOICE, BUT HOW DOES THE PERSON PROJECT THEMSELVES? HOW DO THEY COME OFF TO PEOPLE? WHAT IS THEIR "SURFACE VIBE" AS THEY SAY? A PERSON'S THROAT IS BASICALLY THEIR POSTURE AND ATTEMPT AT PRESENTATION. E) LEFT CHEEK - WHAT IS THEIR INTELLIGENCE? HOW DOES IT MANIFEST ITSELF? HOW DO THEY PROBLEM SOLVE? BASICALLY, THE LEFT CHEEK EXPOSES THE "LEFT BRAINED" ABILITIES. F) RIGHT CHEEK - WHAT IS THEIR IDEALISTIC / ARTISTIC CAPACITY? WHAT IS THEIR CONSCIENCE AND MORALITY? JUST LIKE BEFORE, THE RIGHT CHEEK EXPOSES "RIGHT BRAINED" ABILITIES. G) CROWN - THIS IS WHERE YOU CAN LOOK AT AT ALL THE BODY PARTS LISTED AND PIECE TOGETHER AN ACTUAL PSYCHOLOGY. YOU NOW HAVE ALL THE TOOLS AT YOUR DISPOSAL TO CREATE A REAL, COMPLEX PERSON WITH A CONSCIOUS MIND AND A SUBCONSCIOUS ID. YOU CAN START TO PIECE TOGETHER WHAT REALLY MATTERS WHEN YOU WRITE ABOUT THE CROWN. WHAT ARE THEIR DEFINING MEMORIES? WHAT IS THEIR PATHOLOGY? THE CROWN ESSENTIALLY ALLOWS YOU TO ANSWER THE QUESTION: WHO IS THIS CHARACTER? SO THAT'S A CHARACTER TREE. YOU START FACTUAL, THEN GET EMOTIONAL, THEN IDEOLOGICAL, AND THEN BUILD INTO AN ACTUAL CHARACTER PSYCHOLOGY. IT IS A GREAT WAY TO BUILD FULLY TEXTURED PEOPLE WITH WHOLE LIVES ONTO THEMSELVES. BETTER YET, CHARACTER TREES WORK SO WELL IN MAKING ALL YOUR CHARACTERS TRULY DIFFERENT FROM ONE ANOTHER. CHARACTER TREES ARE NOT THE BE ALL END ALL, BUT A GREAT TECHNIQUE FOR
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INTERESTING WAY HIM TO MANIFEST HIS ASSIMILATION INTO AMERICAN SOCIAL CULTURE. IT WAS FASCINATING OVER-COMPENSATION. IT ALSO MADE THE PROBLEMS WITH HIS TRADITIONAL INDIAN PARENTS FEEL MUCH MORE TEXTURED INSTEAD OF OBLIGATORY. COMBINING THEM COMPLETELY REVOLUTIONIZED THIS CHARACTER'S STORY. SO HULK STARTED TO DO THIS WITH PRETTY MUCH EVERY SINGLE "REAL LIFE" INSPIRATION. YOU FORCE THEM TO BE FILTERED THROUGH A PRISM OF OTHER CHARACTERISTICS AND SUDDENLY IT REMOVES THE SINGULARITY. NOW THIS DEVICE IS NOT SOME ONE-SIZE-FITSALL THING YOU CAN DO WITH ANY TWO CHARACTERS, BUT IT BECOMES SO MUCH FUN TRYING TO FIND THE NEAT COMBINATIONS OF PEOPLE THAT ACTUALLY FIT TOGETHER. BETTER YET, IT CREATES NEW MEANING TO ALL THOSE DETAILS. WE LIKE TO THINK WE SEE THE PEOPLE IN OUR LIVES AS COMPLEX, BUT BELIEVE IT OR NOT WE OFTEN JUST REDUCE THEM TO THEIR OWN KIND OF STEREOTYPES: "OH THAT'S JUST SO AND SO!" SO WHAT HULK LOVES ABOUT THIS METHOD IS THAT IT FORCES YOU TO REMOVE THE SINGULAR WAY IN WHICH YOU THINK ABOUT THE PEOPLE AROUND YOU. IT BREEDS 3D CHARACTERIZATION. AND IT'S NOT JUST TRUE OF CHARACTER EITHER....
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NOT ONLY DOES IT REEK OF AMATEUR HOUR, IT'S JUST PURE MASTURBATION. AS P.T. ANDERSON ONCE SAID "YOU'RE WORKING OUT YOUR PSYCHOSIS AT EVERYONE ELSE'S $8.50" (THAT SHOULD CLEARLY BE UPDATED TO 15 BUCKS). BUT THE PROBLEM IS IT'S CATHARTIC STORYTELLING ONLY BUILT ONLY FOR YOURSELF. WHICH IS NOT TO SAY YOU CAN'T MAKE WORK, BUT JUST SO OFTEN IT DOESN'T TRANSLATE. TRUST HULK ON THIS ONE. IT WILL NOT SPEAK TO NO HIGHER TRUTH. EVEN THE MOST LAUDED MASTURBATORY WORKS, CALL DIRECT ATTENTION TO THE CALLOUSNESS. LIKE WITH THE ENTIRE WORK OF WOODY ALLEN, HE WEAVES THE PROBLEMS AND HANG UPS OF HIS OWN MASTURBATORY WRITING DIRECTLY INTO THE NARRATIVE. HECK, HE OUTRIGHT EXPLAINS HOW INSIGNIFICANT IT IS AND HOW IT ONLY HELPS THE ARTIST (THIS IS THE ENTIRE THEME OF DECONSTRUCTING HARRY). REALITY DOES NOT AUTOMATICALLY MAKE FOR FICTION. AND IN CASE YOU'RE WONDERING, YES, KAUFMAN / JONZE'S "ADAPTATION" IS 100% ABOUT THIS ENTIRE CONCEPT. IT'S ALL ABOUT HOW ONE CANNOT SIMPLY RELY ON THE FACETS OF TRUTH AND MUST SEARCH FOR BEAUTY AND TRUTH AND THEMES, AND MUST ULTIMATELY EMBRACE STORYTELLING CONVENTIONS TO MAKE THOSE IDEAS RESONATE (EVEN IF ONE DOES SO CHEAPLY). AND THAT FILM EXPLAINS IT BETTER THAN HULK EVER COULD HULK MEAN, OF COURSE IT CAN... IT'S A NARRATIVE.
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POWER DAYS. AND ULTIMATELY, HIS MEDITATIVE FINAL DAYS. THERE'S WAY MORE SECTIONS THAN THIS TOO, BUT EACH OF THEM FEELS LIKE ITS OWN SPECIFIC MOVIE. THERE'S SO MUCH PROPULSION AND ECONOMY TO EACH MINI-STORY. LEE FULLY EMBRACED THE PRINCIPALS OF NARRATIVE AT EVERY TURN SO THAT THE SUPPOSEDLYRESTRICTING "FACTS" BECAME INCREDIBLY COMPELLING. HE DOESN'T CHANGE THE FACTS. HE AMPLIFIES THE FACTS. AND IN DOING SO HE CREATES A BIOPIC THAT ISN'T JUST TRUE, IT FEELS TRUE. THE SECOND OPTION IS TO DISMISS THE CONCEPT OF NARRATIVE ALL TOGETHER AND COMMIT SOLELY TO THE CONCEPT OF ACCURACY. THIS MEANS YOU TELL THE STORY THROUGH THE EVOLUTION OF RELEVANT DETAILS. THIS WORKS LESS WELL WITH A PERSON'S LIFE, AND MUCH BETTER WITH A SPECIFIC EVENT OR TIME-FRAME. HULK CALLS THIS THE JOURNO-CINEMATIC ROUTE. YOU BE LIKE ALL THE PRESIDENTS MEN. YOU BE LIKE ZODIAC. EVEN WITH MADE-UP STORIES THAT ARE MEANT TO CAPTURE "THE NUANCE OF REALITY" YOU BE LIKE THE FRENCH CONNECTION. YOU BE LIKE CONTAGION. IN ALL THESE FILMS YOU ESCHEW THE PRINCIPALS OF NARRATIVE AND CHARACTER ARCS TO TELL THE STORY OF "AN EVENT" THROUGH THE FIXATION OF DETAIL. THE ACTUAL HUMAN CHARACTERS COME IN AND OUT, AND SURE THEY SHOULD BE ENTERTAINING AND FULLYTEXTURED, BUT YOU REALLY JUST NEED ONE OF THEM TO DRIVE THE NARRATIVE PROPULSION, USUALLY THROUGH THEIR FIXATION ON THE EVENT ITSELF. THE FIRST TIME HULK REALIZED THAT IT MADE SO MUCH SENSE. THEIR DRIVE HELP'S FUEL THE FILM'S DRIVE. IN ALL THESE "REAL EVENT" FILMS HULK LIST ABOVE, WHETHER FICTION OR NON-FICTION, THEY ARE FILLED WITH CHARACTERS THAT PUSH THROUGH DISCOVERING THE NARRATIVE ITSELF. TO UNLOCK NIXON'S WATERGATE. TO FIND THE ZODIAC KILLER. TO FIND CHARNIER. TO UNDERSTAND AND CURE THE DISEASE. THEIR UNBENDING FIXATION IS THERE TO 100% SERVE THE PROPULSION OF THE NARRATIVE. SO WHERE IS THE ARC? WHERE IS THE CHARACTER CHANGE WE TRULY NEED IN MOVIES? THE EVENT BECOMES THE CHARACTER. THIS ABSOLUTELY BLEW HULK'S MIND WHEN HULK FIRST HEARD THIS IDEA. IT SEEMS TO FLY IN THE FACE OF THE CHARACTER-CENTRIC STUFF HULK SAID EARLIER. THIS DETAIL IS ACTUALLY REALLY IMPORTANT. EVEN THOUGH THESE FILMS ARE SOME OF HULK'S FAVORITES (AND MAYBE YOURS AS WELL) THERE IS A WAY LOT OF PEOPLE IN THE TRADITIONAL AUDIENCE CAN'T RELATE TO THEM. THERE IS NO CENTRAL CHARACTER JOURNEY. IT IS HARDER FOR THEM TO EMPATHIZE. YES, THEY MIGHT BE MISSING OUT, BUT THE FILMMAKER JUST HAS TO RECONCILE THE FACT THAT KIND OF STORY IS NOT FOR EVERYONE. BUT, BUT HULK... THAT'S CAN'T BE IT, RIGHT? JUST TWO OPTIONS!??! WITH NOTHING IN THE MIDDLE!?! THERE'S GOTTA BE A WAY HULK, THERE'S GOTTA BE! FINE... THERE'S ONE OPTION. ONE OPTION TO PERFECTLY CAPTURE THE SANCTITY OF REALISTIC DETAIL AND COMBINE IT WITH THE ETHOS OF CHARACTER-DRIVEN STORY. THE OPTION IS SO RARE, THAT HULK HAS ONLY REALLY SEEN IT HAPPEN ONCE IN TV AND FILM (NOVELS ARE MUCH BETTER AT IT). THAT OPTION IS THE WIRE.
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PEOPLE OFTEN MISTAKE THE WIRE FOR ONLY HAVING THIS JOURNO-CINEMATIC ROUTE AND THAT'S NOT ACCURATE. YES, THE SHOW WAS WRITTEN BY FORMER JOURNALISTS, WHO SO DREW ON THEIR REAL LIVES AND EXPERIENCES, AND IN SUCH A RESPONSIBLE WAY THAT IT MAY HAVE JUST SEEMED LIKE THAT WAS THE CASE. EVERYONE WAS LIKE "THE WIRE IS TOTALLY, LIKE, REAL MAN." ... BUT THAT'S ONLY HALF THE STORY. BECAUSE THE SHOW ALSO STICKS BEAUTIFULLY TO ELEMENTS OF NARRATIVE, PARTICULARLY GREEK DRAMA STRUCTURES. THEY WERE JUST SO DAMN GOOD AT GROUNDING THOSE OBVIOUS NARRATIVES IN A KIND OF MUTED-UN-CINEMATIC TEXTURE. IT RESISTED ALL FORMS OF STYLIZATION (THERE'S A GREAT ANECDOTE DAVID SIMON TALKS ABOUT WHERE THEY DON'T PAN DOWN TO SHOW AN IMPORTANT DETAIL BECAUSE "THE CAMERA WOULDN'T KNOW TO DO THAT." IT WAS AN EVEN-KEELED UNIVERSE). EVEN WITH ALL THE SHOW'S FIXATION ON DETAIL, THEY STILL USED PERFECT STORY ECONOMY. THEY ONLY USED THE LEVEL OF DETAIL THEY NEEDED AND THE REST IS TRADITIONAL CHARACTER ARC AND CATHARSIS. AND IN TERMS OF THEME IT MAY BE THE SINGLE MOST SOCIALLY CONSCIOUS, THEMATICALLY-LOADED TELEVISION SHOW THAT HAS EVER EXISTED. HYPERBOLE MUCH, HULK? WHATEVER. IT'S THE WIRE. AND IF YOU'RE GOING TO TRY TO REPLICATE IT... HULK MEAN... WE MAY NEVER SEEN ANYTHING LIKE AGAIN. BUT EVEN THEN, PERHAPS THERE ARE SOME LESSONS TO TAKE AWAY FROM IT. LIKE THIS ONE:
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HULK IS SAVING A LOT OF THIS FOR AN UPCOMING COLUMN, BUT IT FAIR TO SAY A LOT OF PEOPLE HAVE A PREOCCUPATION WITH "IN-MOVIE" LOGIC. ONLINE CULTURE IN PARTICULAR SEEMS FIXATED ON NOTICING PLOT-HOLES AND INCONSISTENCIES ALL THE TIME. OFTEN WE DERIDE THESE MOVIES FOR NOT "THINKING IT THROUGH' AND BEING "BAD" BECAUSE OF IT. FIRST OFF, THESE SORTS OF COMPLAINTS ARE MADE BY PEOPLE WHO WOULD HAVE EXTREME DIFFICULTY WRITING A STORY WITHOUT PLOT-HOLES THEMSELVES, BUT THAT WOULD BE SORT OF FLIPPANT OF HULK AND NOT IMPORTANT BECAUSE THEY'RE NOT THE ONES TELLING THE STORY. HULK'S PROBLEM IS THAT THEY JUST MIGHT BE MISSING THE POINT. HULK THINKS THAT CHARACTER CONSISTENCY (MENTIONED ABOVE) AND THEMATIC CONSISTENCY ARE FAR MORE IMPORTANT THAN THAN IN-MOVIE LOGIC. MOST OF US TEND TO FORGIVE MOVIES WITH PLOT HOLES AS LONG AS THE REASONS FOR SKIPPING THEM ARE PRETTY DAMN GOOD. ALL OF THE JOKER'S PLANS IN THE DARK KNIGHT DO NOT MAKE A LICK OF SENSE. NONE. BUT IT DIDN'T MATTER BECAUSE THE FILM WAS SO PROPULSIVE AND WELL-CONSTRUCTED THAT WE GOT SWEPT UP IN THE STORY (THE FILM IS A GREAT GAME OF CAT AND MOUSE). BUT IT REALLY DIDN'T MATTER BECAUSE NOLAN USED ALL THAT STORYTELLING IN SERVICE OF INTERESTING IDEAS ABOUT ANARCHISM, MORALITY, SOCIOLOGY, AND CHARACTERIZATION. SO YES, HULK AGREE, IT DIDN'T MAKE A LICK OF LOGICAL SENSE, BUT IT DOESN'T REALLY
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MATTER. THERE'S A REASON EVERYONE WALKED OUT AND THOUGHT "MASTERPIECE!" AND DIDN'T NOTICE THE PLOT-HOLES UNTIL THEY WATCHED IT A FEW MORE TIMES. BUT EVEN THOUGH HULK THINK CHARACTER AND THEMATIC CONSISTENCY MATTERS WAY MORE THAN IN-MOVIE LOGIC, IT CLEARLY DOESN'T MEAN THAT WE SHOULDN'T BOTHER PUTTING EFFORT. THAT WOULD JUST BE LAZY. AND LOT OF WRITERS IN THIS INDUSTRY ARE GUILTY OF BEING LAZY. HOLLYWOOD MOVIES ARE FILLED WITH ALL SORTS OF NONSENSE, PRODUCING WORK THAT MAKES IT SEEM LIKE THE WRITERS HAVE NEVER USED A COMPUTER AND DON'T UNDERSTAND WHAT THE TERM "HACKING" ACTUALLY MEANS. EVEN WHEN YOU GO HIGHER-BROW THAN THAT, THE SCIENCE OF LOST WAS OFTEN LAUDED, BUT IT WAS ACTUALLY PRETTY MUCH GIBBERISH. IF YOU HAVE ANY NONARMCHAIR, SERIOUSLY-HARDCORE SCIENCE FRIENDS THEN IT WAS REALLY, REALLY HARD FOR THEM TO WATCH THE SHOW. MOSTLY, BECAUSE THEY WOULD REFERENCE THESE COOL ADVANCED CONCEPTS AND THEN NOT ACTUALLY UNDERSTAND WHAT THEY ENTAILED. BUT THESE ARE SORT OF SPECIAL CASES. AS LONG AS WE ARE TRYING TO WRITE GOOD SCRIPTS, WE SHOULD ALSO TRY TO BE ACCURATE. THE NARRATIVE HAS TO BE SOUND FIRST AND FOREMOST, BUT TRUE RESEARCH CAN GO ON TO INFORM SO MANY GREAT IDEAS AND REALLY FLESH OUT YOUR STORY. YOU JUST HAVE TO PUT THE WORK IN. AND BETTER YET, HULK THINK THAT AUDIENCES SUBCONSCIOUSLY RESPOND WHEN CHARACTERS REALLY KNOW WHAT TO CALL THINGS. THE SPECIFIC DETAILS GIVE THE AIR OF VERACITY. AND SOMETIMES GREAT TRUTHS ARE ARRIVED AT WHEN YOU WORK BACKWARD FROM THAT VERACITY. GOING BACK TO DAVID SIMON, GENERATION KILL IS COMPELLING BECAUSE ALL THEY TRIED TO DO WITH THE NARRATIVE WAS CREATE THE MOST ACCURATE DEPICTION OF LIFE AS A SOLDIER IN IRAQ. AND THEY DID SO IN WAY THAT WAS ONLY MEANT TO MAKE THOSE SOLDIERS HAPPY. BUT BY DOING PLEASING THOSE SOLDIERS, THEY CREATED A KIND OF DETAIL-ORIENTED TRUTH THAT HELPED STRIKE A CHORD WITH THOSE OF US LOOKING IN ON THE SITUATION. SIMPLY PUT: AUDIENCE LIKE TO WATCH SMART PEOPLE BE PROFESSIONAL. IT IS RESPONSIBLE FOR MOST OF THE GOOD COP, LAWYER, DOCTOR SHOWS WE SEE ON TV, EVEN THOUGH SOME OF THEM HAVE TAKEN TO LYING RIGHT THROUGH THEIR FREAKING TEETH. AND HULK THINKS THAT THIS DISHONEST APPROACH TO PORTRAYING REALWORLD PROFESSIONALISM HAS REALLY BAD SOCIETAL CONSEQUENCES. LOOK AT CSI. THE "SCIENCE" MAY BE SOMEWHAT SOUND (IF THAT) AND FEATURES REAL TECHNIQUES, BUT THE SHOW IS THE MOST DISHONEST LOOK IMAGINABLE ABOUT HOW THOSE SCIENCES ARE ACTUALLY USED IN THE FIELD. IT IS UTTERLY DISHONEST TO HOW THOSE PEOPLE REALLY DO THEIR JOBS. IT IS UTTERLY DISHONEST ABOUT THE SUCCESS RATE OF THE TECHNIQUES AND THE KINDS OF RESOURCES POLICE ACTUALLY HAVE. AND AS SUCH IT CREATES A SERIOUSLY DAMAGING PORTRAIT OF HOW SOCIETY WORKS. DON'T BELIEVE HULK? A LOT OF JURIES HAVE STOPPED TAKEN JURORS IF THEY ARE CSI FANS... THE SHOW LIES THAT BADLY (THE JURORS CONSTANTLY EXPECT EVERY SINGLE CASE TO HAVE THE KIND OF RESOURCES THEY NEED FOR ON SITE FORENSIC EVIDENCE. FORENSIC EVIDENCE IS ONLY STUDIED BY 3 SCIENTISTS IN A LITTLE LAB ROOM AND THERE IS A 6 MONTH WAITING LIST) .
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THE PROBLEM WITH CSI IS NOT THAT THEY ARE CREATING HYPER-FICTIONALIZED TELEVISION, BUT THAT THEY ARE DOING SO UNDER THE GUISE OF REALISM. IT BRINGS UP A REALLY DIFFICULT ARGUMENT ABOUT THE PURSUIT OF NARRATIVE VS. THE PURSUIT OF REAL-LIFE LOGIC. AGAIN, THERE IS SOME WIGGLE ROOM HERE, BUT HULK THINK IF THE MANNER OF STORYTELLING IMBUES A COMMITMENT TO TANGIBLE REAL-LIFE DETAILS, THERE IS ALSO AN ACCOMPANYING DUTY TO PORTRAY THOSE DETAILS IN A SIMILAR REALISTIC VEIN. AND THAT MEANS YOU SHOULD DO YOUR RESEARCH. NOW LET'S SWITCH GEARS OUT OF CHARACTER / REALITY AND GET INTO SOME POTENTIAL TROUBLE SPOTS WITH STORY APPROACH.
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HULK DOES NOT FEEL UNCOMFORTABLE SAYING THAT. HE KNOWS THAT IT CAN ENGAGE AN AUDIENCE, PROPEL FURTHER DISCUSSION, CREATE A BEAUTIFUL ATMOSPHERE, AND LOCK INTO YOUR SENSE OF CURIOSITY. ALL OF HIS MOVIES AND TV WORK ABSOLUTELY COMMIT TO THE POWER OF MYSTERY. HE OUTLINES THE WHOLE THEORY IN HIS NOW-FAMOUS (INFAMOUS?) TED SPEECH ABOUT HOW MYSTERY CAN COMMAND A STORY ALL THE WAY THROUGH AND ESPECIALLY THE MARKETING PRESENCE. HIS FREQUENT CO-WRITER AND COLLABORATOR DAMON LINDELOF, OFTEN TALKS ABOUT HIS WRITING STRATEGY WHERE EVERY CHARACTER HE WRITES HAS A SECRET, WHICH INFORMS AND GUIDES THEIR DEPTH. THESE TACTICS HAVE GREAT VALUE... BUT BOTH THESE GUYS TEND TO USE THEM TO A FAULT. SOMETIMES MYSTERY IS JUST NOT THE REQUIRED TONE. YES, MYSTERY CAN HANG OVER A SCENE TO WONDERFUL EFFECT, BUT IT CAN ALSO HAN OVER A SCENE TO AN INCREDIBLY MUTING EFFECT. SOMETIMES SCENES JUST NEED TO BE FUNCTIONAL. SOMETIMES THEY JUST NEED TO BE CLEAR. SOMETIMES THEY NEED TO HAVE URGENCY. URGENCY IS SIMPLE. URGENCY IS BORN FROM CLARITY. WE HAVE TO STOP THAT THING OR THE BOMB GOES OFF AND WE BOTH DIE! THE THING HULK REALLY LIKE ABOUT THIS KIND OF STORYTELLING IS THAT IT IS A VISCERAL KIND OF ENGAGEMENT. MYSTERY MAKES AN AUDIENCE MEMBER GO "OOOH, WHAT THE HECK IS GOING ON HERE?"AND BRINGS PEOPLE INTO THEIR MINDS TO PONDER. THIS IS ADMITTEDLY A VITAL ENGAGEMENT THAT DOESN'T HAPPEN OFTEN ENOUGH IN CINEMA. BUT IT IS OFTEN JUST A CEREBRAL ENGAGEMENT. AND URGENCY, WITH ALL ITS DULL SIMPLICITY, ALLOWS THE AUDIENCE TO "SKIP" THE USE OF THEIR BRAIN AND JUST EXPERIENCE THE FILM IN THE MOST PRIMAL AND EXCITING WAY. THAT MAY SOUND LIKE HULK IS ADVOCATING BEING A PHILISTINE, BUT NOT IT ALL. DIFFERENT SCENES / FILMS JUST CALL FOR DIFFERENT THINGS. AND HULK THINKS URGENCY IS MORE GEARED TO HOW BEST TO USE FILMMAKING'S NATURAL POWER. AND DON'T THINK THAT URGENCY ONLY APPLIES TO ACTION AND STOP THE WORLD! CIRCUMSTANCES. IT WORKS JUST AS WELL FOR TWO CHARACTERS TALKING ABOUT THE SOMETHING THAT IS IMPORTANT TO EACH OF THEM. IT IS WHOLLY FUNCTIONAL. THINK BACK TO HOW MANY CONVERSATIONS OF LOST HAD TWO PEOPLE WAXING PHILOSOPHICAL ABOUT SOMETHING WE NEVER ACTUALLY UNDERSTOOD. WE WONDERED WHAT THE HECK THEY WERE TALKING ABOUT AS THEY TIP-TOED AROUND VAGUE CONCEPTS, BUT WE WERE NOT NECESSARILY ENGAGED ON CHARACTER OR STORY LEVEL. AND IT BECAME MORE AND MORE TIRESOME WITH EVERY PASSING SEASON. IT WASN'T THAT WE WANTED "ANSWERS" IT WAS THAT WE WANTED CLEAR STAKES AND SOMETHING THAT MATTERED. MYSTERY TRULY HAS A SHORT-TERM LIFESPAN. IF YOU TRY TO SUSTAIN IT FOR TOO LONG, YOU'RE SUNK. SO IF LINDLELOF NEEDS TO HAVE EVERY CHARACTER HAVE A SECRET, DO WE THEN LOSE THE POWER OF TWO CHARACTERS ARGUING OVER STAKES WE BOTH UNDERSTAND? HULK UNDERSTAND THAT OFTEN LOST WAS THEMATICALLY INTERESTED IN SUBVERTING THE VERY IDEA OF WHAT ONE "CAN ACTUALLY KNOW" AND THUS NEED TO PUT ONES ENERGY INTO FAITH. BUT SO OFTEN THIS WISHY-WASHY MYSTERIOUSNESS OVERPOWERED THE
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MECHANICS OF BASIC NARRATIVE. WHAT'S FUNNY IS THAT THE FIRST SEASON REALLY DID UNDERSTAND THE POWER OF CLEAR STAKES AND TANGIBLE CHARACTER MOTIVATION. BUT THE DEEPER DOWN THE WELL THEY WENT, THE MORE THEY LOST SIGHT OF THAT BALANCE, SO MUCH SO THAT IT RUINED SOME OF THE POWER OF THE CENTRAL MYSTERY... AND PLEASE KEEP IN MIND THIS IS COMING FROM A HULK THAT REALLY, REALLY LOVED THE SHOW. ULTIMATELY, THERE'S CLEAR REASONS TO USE BOTH MYSTERY AND URGENCY, BUT HULK JUST WANT YOU TO BE AWARE OF, YOU KNOW, HOW TO USE IT AND WHY. ASK YOURSELF, WHAT WOULD MAKE THIS SCENE WORK BETTER? NOT UNDERSTANDING THE URGENCY AND ENGAGING THE AUDIENCE ON CEREBRAL LEVEL? OR TOTALLY UNDERSTANDING IT AND ENGAGING THE AUDIENCE VISCERALLY? NOTHING HIGHLIGHTS THE DIFFERENCES OF THE TWO APPROACHES LIKE MISSION IMPOSSIBLE III AND MISSION IMPOSSIBLE IV: GHOST PROTOCOL. THE FIRST STEEPS EVERY CHARACTER, AND EVEN THE FILM'S MACGUFFIN IN THE TOTAL SHROUD OF SECRECY. THE SECOND EXPLAINS ABSOLUTELY EVERYTHING AND TAKES YOU ON ONE HELL OF A COMPELLING RIDE. ... HULK KNOWS WHICH ONE HULK LIKED. WHICH DID YOU?
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CAN'T HELP BUT ENJOY WHATEVER THEY DO ON SCREEN. WE ARE SIMPLY MOVED BY INTERESTING, HUMAN CHARACTERS. SIDE-NOTE: HULK ALSO HAS ANOTHER COLUMN PLANNED AROUND RACE IN MOVIES. BUT FOR WRITING PURPOSES? ESPECIALLY IF YOU HAVE PROBLEMS WRITING CHARACTERS OF DIFFERENT BACKGROUNDS? HERE'S A TIP: IF YOU'RE WHITE AND YOU'RE WRITING A BUNCH OF WHITE PEOPLE. TRY JUST SUDDENLY CHANGING THE RACE OF ONE OR MORE OF THE CHARACTERS. THEN CHANGE NOTHING ELSE... PROBLEM SOLVED. CLOSING ARGUMENT? PEOPLE RESPOND TO PEOPLE BEING PEOPLE. AND THAT'S ALL YOU REALLY NEED TO KNOW. NOW, LET'S HAMMER HOME THE THEMATIC ANGLE OF STORY-TELLING.
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THIS IS WHERE WE GET INTO THE CONCEPT OF "SOUL" IN THE MIND, BODY, SOUL APPROACH TO MOVIES. WHEN HULK TALKED ABOUT IDEAS AND SUBJECTS THAT COMPEL YOU BACK IN THE INSPIRATION SECTION, THE INTENT WAS TO PROVIDE THEMES THAT CAN BE USED TO COMPEL BOTH YOUR CHARACTERS AND THEN THE AUDIENCE. IT IS YOUR CHANCE TO CONNECT TO THE PERSON'S SOUL. THEMATIC MESSAGES ARE NOT A BURDEN OR A RESPONSIBILITY, BUT A DAMN OPPORTUNITY. THEME ALLOWS THE AUTHOR TO SAY SOMETHING IMPORTANT. IT DOESN'T NEED TO BE OPPRESSIVE AND DOMINATE THE STORY OR SENSE OF FUN IN YOUR FILM. EVEN IN THE MOST SILLY OF COMEDIES LIKE THE OTHER GUYS, MCKAY FINDS A WAY TO COMMENT ON THE THINGS HE FINDS IMPORTANT AND MAKES THEM WORK WITH THE CONTEXT OF A SEND UP OF ACTION MOVIES. FOR INSTANCE, HE TOTALLY FINDS IT INTERESTING THAT ACTION FILMS OFTEN FEATURE THESE CRAZY ETHNIC BAD GUYS WHO OPERATE DRUG CARTELS AND MURDER AND STUFF, BUT WHOSE EXPLOITS ARE ALMOST NOTHING COMPARED TO THE PERVASIVE SHAME OF WHITE-COLLAR CRIME. SURE, THE FILM MAKES FUN OF OVERTHE-TOP CAR CHASES AND CLICHED SUPER-POLICE OFFICERS, BUT IT IS ALSO SERIOUS CRITICISM ABOUT THE SIMPLISTIC WAY ACTION FILMS PAINT GOOD AND BAD. AND EVEN IF YOU JUST WANT YOUR MOVIE TO BE FUN AND NOT OVERWHELM YOUR AUDIENCE WITH "MESSAGES" THERE IS A WAY TO DO THAT TOO. YOU CAN POST-MODERNLY THUMB YOUR NOSE AT THE IDEA OF "SAYING SOMETHING," AVOID WHAT YOU THINK IS TRITE OR DIDACTIC, AND IMPLORE THAT VERY THEMATIC MESSAGE INTO YOUR FILM. HULK MEAN, IF THAT'S WHAT YOU ACTUALLY THINK, ISN'T THE SCRIPT JUST AN OPPORTUNITY TO MAKE THAT CLEAR? THEME IS ALWAYS AN OPPORTUNITY, NOT A BURDEN.
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MONOLOGUE, DELIVERED BY AN ACTOR, SEEMINGLY RIGHT TO THE AUDIENCE, IN WHICH THEY WOULD RUMINATE ON THE EVENTS THAT HAVE TRANSPIRED, WHAT THEY MEANT, AND HOW THEY SHOULD RESONATE GOING FORWARD... HULK MEAN... HE IS THE GREATEST WRITER EVER AND HE BASICALLY JUST TELLS YOU THE CONCEIT RIGHT AT THE END. SO DO NOT LOOK AT THE ENDING OF YOUR PIECE AS A BURDEN, BUT AN OPPORTUNITY. AN OPPORTUNITY TO SAY EVERYTHING YOU WANT TO SAY IN YOUR MOVIE. IT IS AN OPPORTUNITY TO BE POETIC, RESONANT, AND INTERESTING. AND IF YOU SKIRT ON THAT OPPORTUNITY? AND JUST WRAP A FEW THINGS UP WITHOUT LIVING UP TO THE REST OF YOUR FILM? THEN THAT MIGHT BE A BIT OF A PROBLEM BECAUSE THAT'S WHAT THE AUDIENCE LEAVES WITH. HAMMER HOME YOUR POINTS. END STRONG. SAY SOMETHING. NOW LET'S QUIT THIS CONCEPTUAL SHIT AND GET INTO PART FIVE AND HOW TO USE STRUCTURE!
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NOTE: THE CORRESPONDING PICTURE TO PART FIVE, SHOWN ABOVE, CAN DIE IN A FIRE. SO PARSING OUT THE STRUCTURE OF A SCREENPLAY IS COMMONLY REFERRED TO AS "BREAKING A STORY." IT FEELS LIKE A BETTER PHRASE THAN "CONSTRUCTING" BECAUSE THAT WORD FEELS LIKE ROUGH ASSEMBLAGE. WHEREAS BREAKING A STORY IS ABOUT TAKING THE IDEA ITSELF, YOUR INCLINATION + THE STORY ALREADY LOCKED IN YOUR MIND, AND BREAKING IT DOWN SO YOU UNDERSTAND IT ON STRUCTURAL LEVEL. IT'S MORE LIKE YOU ARE MANIPULATING WHAT YOU INSTINCTUALLY HAVE AND KNOW. LIKE WORKING WITH PLAY-DOH OR SOMETHING. HULK LIKES THAT THINKING MUCH, MUCH BETTER. ANYCRAP, LET'S LOOK AT HOW TO PROPERLY BREAK A STORY.
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YOU REALLY, REALLY NEED TO EMBRACE THE CONCEPT OF ECONOMY. IT SHOULD BE THE HUGE THOUGHT IN THE BACK OF YOUR HEAD. REPEAT IT AGAIN AND AGAIN: TELL ONLY AS MUCH STORY AS YOU NEED... AND IF YOU'RE TELLING MORE THAN YOU NEED, WELL THEN THERE BETTER BE A DAMN GOOD REASON FOR IT. BY VALUING ECONOMY FROM THE ONSET, IT HELPS YOU CREATE A TIGHT, FOCUSED, EXCITING SCRIPT. IF YOU DO THAT THEN INTEGRATING CHARACTERIZATION, NUANCE AND THEME IS ACTUALLY FAR EASIER TO INCORPORATE THAN GOING IN THE OTHER DIRECTION. TRUST WHEN HULK SAYS IT IS FAR MORE DIFFICULT TO TAKE A LUMBERING STORY, FULL OF THOROUGH CHARACTERIZATION AND THEMATIC EXPLORATION, AND THEN SOMEHOW PARSE IT DOWN INTO A TIGHT STORY. IT'S SO MUCH HARDER. SO GO THE OTHER DIRECTION. IN EVERY KIND OF STORY, EVEN THE MOST CASUAL CHARTER PIECES, EVEN FILMS WITH A LEISURELY EDITING PACE, YOU STILL WANT THE CHARACTER'S EVOLUTION TO BE PROPULSIVE. EVEN WITH THE MOST INTIMATE, HUMAN STORIES, YOU ALWAYS WANT TO ENTER EACH SCENE WITH A NEW SENSE OF PURPOSE AND INTEREST. AND IN ORDER TO DO THAT YOU HAVE TO UNLEARN POINTS #21-22.
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USED TO CREATE THAT RICH AND FULLY TEXTURED STORY YOU SO UNCEREMONIOUSLY BOILED DOWN INTO 3 ACTS. HULK FIND THIS ALL REALLY TROUBLESOME. SO WHAT IS PRACTICAL, HELPFUL DEFINITION FOR AN ACT? AN ACT IS ANY TIME A CHARACTER MAKES A DECISION FROM WHICH THEY CAN NO LONGER GO BACK. HULK THINKS THAT'S PRETTY DAMN PRACTICAL. AS SUCH, A FILM CAN HAVE ANY NUMBER OF ACTS. REALLY. DO WHATEVER MAKES THE MOST SENSE FOR YOUR PARTICULAR STORY, WITH YOUR PARTICULAR AMOUNT OF CHARACTERS, AND YOUR PARTICULAR CHARACTERS' JOURNEYS. IS THE CHARACTER GOING TO EVOLVE THROUGH A LOT OF STAGES IN LIFE? ARE THEY GOING TO LEARN ONE SIMPLE LESSON? WHAT SORT OF COMPLEXITIES ARE THEY FACING? ARE THE PROBLEMS SHORT TERM? LONG TERM? DO THE PROBLEMS EVOLVE TOO? THESE SORTS OF QUESTIONS DICTATE YOUR STRUCTURE. AS KIND OF GO-TO-MODEL HULK DOES LARGELY ENJOY SHAKESPEARE'S 5 ACT MODEL WHICH BREAKS DOWN THINGS IN A KIND OF HELPFUL WAY AND REALLY SEEMS TO FIT THE STANDARD LENGTH OF A SCREENPLAY (YOU'D BE SHOCKED HOW OFTEN PEOPLE TRY TO USE 3 ACT STRUCTURE AND FIND THEMSELVES STALLING OUT AT 50-70 PAGES). WITH SHAKESPEARE, THERE IS ACT 1 - THE INTRODUCTION, WHICH ESTABLISHES PREEXISTING CONFLICTS AND THE NEEDS AND WANTS OF THE MAIN CHARACTERS. ACT 2 - THE INSTIGATION, WHICH INTRODUCES HOW THE MAIN CONFLICT OF THE STORY COMES TO BE, WHICH IS OFTEN SOMETHING THAT COMPLICATES THE PRE-EXISTING CONFLICT TO BOOT. THEN THERE IS ACT 3 - THE TURN, IN WHICH THERE IS SOME GRAVE TURNING POINT THAT FLIPS THE CONFLICT ON ITS HEAD AND HAS GRAVE CONSEQUENCES FOR ALL (THESE ARE OFTEN SHAKESPEARE'S BEST ACTS. THEY ARE FULL OF LARGE, BOLD ACTION THAT ARE NORMALLY RESERVED FOR "CLIMAXES" OF MOST 3 ACT FILMS. BY MOVING THESE GRAND GESTURE TO EARLIER IN THE STORY, THEY THUS HAVE THE POWER TO BOTH SHOCK THE AUDIENCE AND SHAPE THE STORY FURTHER. IT'S BRILLIANT STORYTELLING). THEN THERE IS ACT 4 - THE SPIRAL, IN WHICH THE RESULTS OF THE TURN GAIN STEAM AND PROPEL TOWARD THE ENDING (WHAT IS INTERESTING IS HOW MOST ACT 4S LOOK LIKE THE ENTIRE ACT 2S OF 3 ACT STRUCTURE. WHICH MEANS THERE A LOT OF BACK AND FORTH AND SET UP FOR FINALE, BUT IT WORKS MUCH BETTER IN SHAKESPEARE BECAUSE THE ACTS ARE SO SHORT, AND HECTIC AND FEELS LIKE TIME IS RUNNING OUT. MEANWHILE, IT DOESN'T WORK IN 3 ACT STRUCTURE BECAUSE THEY TRY TO DO THIS FOR 40 PAGES IN THE MIDDLE OF THE MOVIE AND IT JUST COMPLETELY LACKS IMPORTANCE). FINALLY THERE IS ACT 5 THE CLIMAX, WHICH BRINGS THE NARRATIVE TO A RESOLUTION AND HAMMERS HOME THE FINAL THEMATIC MESSAGES OF THE ENTIRE PIECE (THE ENDING IS THE CONCEIT!). BUT AGAIN, THIS IS JUST A MUCH MORE INTERESTING MODEL FOR PROPULSIVE STORYTELLING, BUT ANY NUMBER OF ACTS WILL DO. MALCOLM X IS 9 ACTS IN HULK'S ESTIMATION. SOME FILMS ARE UPWARDS OF 20. THERE'S EVEN A WAY THAT EVERY SINGLE SCENE SHOULD FEEL LIKE IT'S OWN MINI-ACT THAT ACCOMPLISHES SOME STORY POINT AND PROPELS YOU FURTHER, IT'S JUST WE TEND TO RESERVE THE TERM "ACT BREAK" FOR THESE MAJOR SORT OF GESTURES. BUT REALLY EVERY SCENE IN A FILM SHOULD BE ACCOMPLISHING SOMETHING, JUST ON A DIFFERENT SCALE.
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WE'RE GOING TO EXPLORE ALL THE POSSIBLE WAYS TO APPROACH THE SHAPE OF YOUR STORY IN THE NEXT FEW POINTS, BUT JUST REMEMBER THAT USING 3 ACT STRUCTURE AS YOUR "GUIDE" IS ONE THE MOST REDUCTIVE, UNHELPFUL THING YOU CAN DO. IT'S A MODEL THAT JUST MAKES ONE'S MOVIE LOOK LIKE EVERY OTHER BAD MOVIE. BUT MORE IMPORTANTLY IT WILL NOT HELP YOU BECOME A BETTER WRITER.
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OF SOME "TRIAL" BUT IT'S NOT EVEN THAT. IT'S JUST AN EXTENSION OF "THE REFUSAL" THAT GOES ON FOR-FUCKING-EVER. IT'S AN ENDLESS DELAY OF PEP-TALKS AND THIS FAUX-MANUFACTURED "CONFLICT" BECAUSE THE WRITERS ARE SO AFRAID TO MOVE THE STORY AND CHARACTERS ALONG TO THE POINTS THEY'RE RESERVING FOR ACT 3. WASTING AN AUDIENCE'S "NARRATIVE TIME" IS WORST KIND OF OFFENSE TO HULK (AGAIN, NOT TALKING ABOUT SLOW-PACED EDITING. HULK ACTUALLY LIKES THAT. NARRATIVE TIME IS DIFFERENT). AND WHEN THE OBLIGATORY CLIMAX COMES IT FEELS APROPOS OF NOTHING BUT MERE EXPECTATION. IT'S WHOLLY UNEARNED AND DISTANCES ITSELF FROM ANYTHING THAT COME BEFORE. EVEN THE ACT 1 TRANSITION IS GARBAGE. IT ISN'T EVEN REALLY AN "ACT" BECAUSE HAL JORDON DOESN'T EVEN MAKE A CHOICETO GO TO PLANET OA. THE RING JUST TAKES HIM THERE. AND HE THEN SPENDS THE ENTIRETY OF THIS SUPPOSED "ACT 2" GOING BACK ON THAT TRANSITION. THE ENTIRE FILM HAS ONE ACTUAL DECISION RIGHT BEFORE THE LAST BATTLE. THIS IS A COMPLETE FAILURE TO UNDERSTAND WHAT STORYTELLING REALLY MEANS. HULK FEELS THE FILM IS ONE OF THE LAZIEST, MOST-STORY-DEAF SCRIPTS EVER WRITTEN. REALLY. NONE OF IT IS WHAT YOU WANT IN HOW TO TELL A STORY. AND HULK REALLY WORRIES THAT PART OF THE REASON IS BECAUSE THEY SO DESPERATELY CLUNG TO 3 ACT STRUCTURE AND THE HERO JOURNEY, THINKING IT WOULD HANDLE EVERYTHING THEY NEEDED. DAMMIT ALL, HULK SMASH! YOU, THE PERSON HULK WRITING TO NOW, STAY AWAY FROM THEM! YOU WANT TO BE PROPULSIVE! AND.. AND... SORRY HULK CALM DOWN NOW. [CLEARS VOICE] ... HULK JUST WANT TO SUGGEST TO YOU THAT THERE ARE OTHER MODELS OUT THERE WHICH HELP YOU WRITE MUCH BETTER WORK. YOU MAY ARGUE "BUT HULK YOU TALK ABOUT OTHER STRUCTURE MODEL TO USE. AREN'T THOSE JUST AS REDUCTIVE?" NO, NOT REALLY. IT'S A FAIR POINT OF COURSE, BECAUSE ALL THESE MODELS ARE INDEED REDUCTIVE, BUT THERE IS A SPECIFIC WAY THAT THE REDUCTIVE ANGLES OF EACH ALL HELP SOLVE CERTAIN PROBLEMS ONE ENCOUNTERS IN WRITING. AND HULK FINDS THAT ASIDE FROM A FEW THEMATIC POINTS IN THE HERO JOURNEY, THESE TWO POPULAR MODELS WON'T SOLVE MUCH OF ANYTHING. BUT HULK REALLY BELIEVE THERE ARE SOME OTHER MODELS THAT WILL HELP. SO LET'S LOOK AT THEM, SHALL WE?
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WRITTEN THIS WAY TIME AND TIME AGAIN, WHERE THE STORY JUST PLAIN RUNS OUT STEAM WITH NO REAL SENSE OF HOW TO RESOLVE IT. BUT THE VALUE OF THE SEQUENTIAL APPROACH BECOMES STARTLINGLY APPARENT LATER ON IN YOUR DEVELOPMENT. ONCE YOU'VE ALREADY HAD A GOOD DEAL EXPERIENCE WITH STRUCTURE AND HEAVILY OUTLINING, IT CAN RE-INTRODUCE THE MOST BASIC LOGICAL FORM OF WRITING. YOU SEE, SO MANY INTERMEDIATE WRITERS GET CAUGHT UP IN THE GAME OF BEATS AND STRUCTURE AND CHARACTER POINTS THAT THEY'LL END UP WRITING THESE LITTLE DISCONNECT SCENES. THE STORY IS THIS SCENE AND THEN IT'S THAT SCENE, ETC. THEY'LL WORK EACH WORK LIKE THEIR OWN LITTLE PLAYS. IT WORKS IN TERMS OF MAKING YOUR OUTLINE LOOK GOOD AND WELL-REALIZED, BUT OVER-RELYING ON THOSE METHODS ALSO HURTS THE OVERALL FLOW. BECAUSE NO MATTER WHAT MOST STRUCTURAL OUTLINES CREATE FLOW PROBLEMS. THEY JUST DO. AND IN COMPARISON, THE LOGICAL PROCESS OF WRITING SEQUENTIALLY CAN SO HELPFUL WHEN YOU FINISH A SCENE AND SAY "WELL NOW I GO HERE OF COURSE!" MEANING THAT SEQUENTIAL APPROACH IS BEST USED AS A KIND OF INTERMITTENT TOOL. START WITH HEAVILY PLANNED ARCS, BUT DON'T BE AFRAID TO MOMENTARILY LOSE YOURSELF IN THE FLOW OF THE WRITING (PARTICULARLY IF IT THE FIRST DRAFT). BUT ALWAYS TAKE PIT STOPS TO REFOCUS. BE SURE THAT WHERE YOU'RE GOING FITS BACK INTO THE OUTLINE. GO BACK AND FORTH, BUT NEVER BE AFRAID TO GIVE INTO WHAT SCENE DICTATES MIGHT HAPPEN NEXT. ONCE YOU'RE DONE, YOU STILL KEEP GOING BACK WORKING IT INTO YOUR BEATS. THE WHOLE THING IS A DIFFICULT BALANCING ACT (ONCE HULK EXPLAINS THE NEXT FEW BEATS, ACHIEVING THIS BALANCE WILL MAKE MUCH MORE SENSE), BUT REALLY THE IMPORTANT THING IS TO REALIZE THAT FLOW IS ALWAYS CRITICAL TO ORGANIC STORY PROPULSION.. BUT HOW DO YOU BE SURE WHAT "FLOWS" ACTUALLY MAKES SENSE?
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EVERY PASSING SEASON OF THE SHOW. THEY HAVE ALWAYS BEEN FUNNY AND SMART, BUT AFTER 10 YEARS THEY HAVE FINALLY LEARNED TO SHAPE THEIR STORYTELLING. MEANING THE SHOW HAS GONE FROM BEING FLIPPANT AND FUNNY, TO NOW THEY ARE BEING DOWNRIGHT RESONANT. A PUNK ASS SHOW THAT CAN TELL STORIES MIND, BODY, AND SOUL. AND THAT'S REALLY SOMETHING. SO LOOK AT YOUR STORIES. LOOK AT EVERY SCENE. IF THE ONLY WAY TO LINE UP THE BEATS IS WITH "AND THEN" THEN YOU'RE IN TROUBLE. FIND YOUR "THEREFORES" AND "BUTS." START RESHAPING YOUR PURPOSE!
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ANALYSIS IS ABOUT HOW YOU INCORPORATE IT IN INTO YOUR METHOD. EVEN IF IT MAY HELP YOU SOLVE A WHOLE BUNCH OF PROBLEMS IN YOUR SCRIPT, IT JUST MIGHT NOT MAKE PERFECT SENSE FOR YOUR NON-SITCOM APPROACH. SO THE REAL LESSON TO TAKE FROM DAN HARMON'S CIRCLES IS HOW MUCH WORK AND THOUGHT HE PUTS INTO HIS CHARACTER ARCS, AND HOW HARD HE WORKS AT GETTING HIS STORIES TO BREAK TO THEM. WHICHEVER STRUCTURAL METHODS YOU END UP INCORPORATING, YOU SHOULD BE WORKING JUST AS HARD. MOVING ON!
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BEAT OF THE STORY. THIS WOULD ALLOW HULK TO BE SURE THAT EACH BEAT REALLY ACCOMPLISHED SOMETHING. HULK WON'T DO IT FOR ALL OF THEM, BUT HERE'S A QUICK + DIRTY TREATMENT (THAT AGAIN IS UNEDITED) OF WHAT THE STORY BEATS WOULD LOOK LIKE FOR ONE OF THE ARCS. -RELATIONSHIP WITH BOSS: DOCTOR MEETS BOSS AND NOTICES THEIR DIFFERENT LIFE APPROACHES. THE DOCTOR FEELS ALIENATED. THE DOCTOR THEN SEES THE BOSS'S PRAGMATIC UNCOMPASSIONATE STYLE IN ACTION AND IT GIVES HIM ETHICAL CONCERN, SO THEY COME INTO A CONFLICT OVER IT. THE DOCTOR STICKS TO HIS GUNS ON A DIFFERENT CASE AND SAVES A PATIENT WHO A DANGER TO OTHERS. IT IS A SUCCESS AND EVERYONE ELSE FINE, MUCH TO THE DISMAY OF THE BOSS, THE MAIN DOCTOR FEELS EMBOLDENED BY THIS SUCCESS, SO THE NEXT TIME THE DOCTOR DOES THIS SAME THING, IT IS LESS SUCCESSFUL. HIS EMBOLDENED ATTITUDE WAS MISPLACED SO HE THEN HE SEES NEGATIVE CONSEQUENCES OF THIS DECISION. A DECISION CAUSES OTHERS TO GET SICK, THE DOCTOR SEES HOW HIS EMBOLDENED ATTITUDE HAS UNDERMINED THE BOSSES ABILITY TO RUN THE HOSPITAL, THE NEGATIVE CONSEQUENCES FOR SPIRAL, THE PROBLEMS ARE RIGHTED BY THE TWO APPRECIATING THE OTHER AND COMING TO WORK TOGETHER. NOW THIS IS EXAMPLE ISN'T THAT GOOD OR FOCUSED, AND IN FACT IT IS THE KIND OF HOSPITAL PLOT LINE WE'VE SEEN A MILLION TIMES BEFORE, BUT THAT JUST MAKES IT PERFECT FOR OUR PURPOSES. SINCE THEY ARE ALL FAMILIAR STORY BEATS YOU IMPLICITLY "GET" THE BARE BONES OF THE STORY, WE CAN NOW TALK ABOUT WHERE IT CAN PROPERLY GO. THE FIRST STEP WOULD BE THAT THESE BEATS NEED TO BE FLESHED OUT IN AN ORGANIC AND ACCURATE MANNER. THE STORY, LIKE ANY STORY, COULD EASILY FEEL FORCED. BUT THE BEATS COULD EASILY FEEL NATURAL AS ANYTHING TOO. EITHER WAY, WE HAVE WHAT WE NEED. WE DON'T NEED ANY MORE SCENES THAN WHAT IS CONVEYED IN THAT DESCRIPTION OF THE ARC. SO WE HAVE ECONOMY. NOTICE HULK DOES NOT DOUBLE UP ON CONFLICTS WHICH SAY THE SAME THING. THERE IS AN INCIDENT THAT SHOWS A GOOD REACTION. AND INCIDENT THAT SHOWS A BAD REACTION. WE DON'T NEED ANY MORE THAN THAT. THOSE TWO CASES ALONE WILL PROPEL THE STORY WHERE IT NEEDS TO GO. NEXT. HULK WOULD DO THIS FOR THE OTHER ARC WITH THE COWORKER RELATIONSHIP AND THE ARC WITH HIS PAST / SELF. AGAIN, WE DO THIS TO BE SURE EACH ELEMENT IS A SINGULAR, COMPLETE STORY. ... BUT THESE ARE NOT THREE SEPARATE STORIES, ARE THEY? NOT AT ALL. THIS IS A MOVIE, OR A TV SHOW, OR A NOVEL, OR WHATEVER. AND AS SUCH IT IS ONE THING. WHICH MEANS THE ARCS NEED TO BE INGRAINED INTO A SINGULAR STORY. THIS IS WHERE YOU DO THE 2ND PART OF THE BREAKING PROCESS AND:
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ESSENTIALLY "START OVER" WITH THE MULTIPLE ARCS. THAT'S RIGHT WE DON'T JUST AUGMENT WHAT IS ALREADY THERE TO MAKE IT WORK. THAT WOULD BE HALF-ASSED AND ULTIMATELY MAKE THINGS STILL FEEL DISCONNECTED. WE NEED TO CONVERGE THE RELATIONSHIPS. WE NEED INTERESTED PARTIES. WE NEED STAKES AND DIFFERENT WANTS ALL CENTERING AROUND THE CENTRAL SETTING AND NARRATIVE. WE NEED TO FIND OUR UNIFYING CONCEPT OF A "DRAGON SCROLL" EVEN THOUGH IT PROBABLY WON'T BE A TANGIBLE OBJECT AND INSTEAD SOME CONCEPT THAT IS FAR MORE ETHEREAL. WE NEED TO MAKE IT ONE STORY. WHICH MEANS ALL THOSE ARCS WE JUST MADE IN POINT #27? THEY DON'T MATTER. THEY WERE A ROUGH DRAFT TO HELP US BE SURE WE DIDN'T SKIRT ANYONE'S RELATIONSHIPS. NOW IS THE TIME TO COMPLETELY ASSIMILATE THEM TOGETHER BY STARTING OVER. THE TAI LUNG EXAMPLE ABOVE MADE HULK THINK ABOUT ABOUT ADDING ANOTHER CHARACTER TO THE MIX WHO WOULD COMPLICATE THE WHOLE THING AND ADD ANOTHER LAYER OF CONFLICT. THEY COULD BE ANOTHER CO-WORKER IN THE HOSPITAL. THEY COULD CREATE A LOVE TRIANGLE AND HAVE A RADICALLY DIFFERENT, INHUMANE IDEA OF HOW THE HOSPITAL SHOULD BE RUN, ONE THAT WOULD SURELY SINK THE HOSPITALS DIRECTION. THE INCLUSION OF THIS CHARACTER WOULD BE PRODUCTIVE. IT WOULD MAKE FOR A CLEAR 'WRONG" IN THE SCENARIO. IT WOULD PROVIDE THE AUDIENCE WITH EMPATHY FOR THE OTHER MAIN CHARACTERS AND HATE FOR THIS JERK-FACE. IT WOULD BASICALLY SET UP DEFAULT ROOTING SCENARIOS WE WANT IN THE FILM. IT WOULD BE TOTALLY EFFECTIVE AND WORTHWHILE. ... IT ALSO NOT THE KIND OF HUMAN STORY HULK INTERESTED IN TELLING. FOR ONE, IT'S JUST TOO DAMN MANIPULATIVE. HULK KNOWS THIS MELODRAMATIC STORY LIKELY CAN'T BE TURNED INTO HIGH-ART OR ANYTHING, BUT HULK'S PARTICULAR INCLINATION WOULD BE TO MAKE THIS SCRIPT MORE QUIET, NUANCED, AND WELLOBSERVED. AND THAT MEANS NO ABJECT VILLAINS. BUT SINCE WE STILL WANT THE INNERCONFLICT THE VILLAIN PROVIDES, IT WOULD THEN MAKE SENSE TO TAKE SOME OF THOSE SAME 3RD PARTY CLASHING MOTIVES, AND GIVE IT TO A NON-EVIL CHARACTER. HOW ABOUT THE LOVE INTEREST CO-WORKER? THIS WOULD BE GOOD BECAUSE BEFORE THIS HULK HADN'T REALLY A STRONG IDEA OF THE CHARACTER'S FAULTS. SADLY, SHE WAS JUST ONE OF THOSE FOILS WHO COULD "MAKE THE DOCTOR REALIZE HE NEEDS LOVE" OR SOMETHING STUPID. BUT GIVING HER A CONTENTION AND DIFFERING VIEW POINT ON WHAT DIRECTION THE HOSPITAL SHOULD GO IN. DOING THIS PROVIDE STAKES AND CONFLICT. IT WOULD MAKER HER RELEVANT TO THE STORY AND NOT JUST RELEVANT TO THE MAIN DOCTORS CATHARSIS. IT WOULD HELP MAKE HER TEXTURED AND REAL. WE WOULD GET THE SAME CONFLICT THE VILLAIN WOULD HAVE PROVIDED, BUT IN THIS VERSION HER HUMANITY WOULD MAKE HER VIEW SEEM MORE HUMAN. BUT WHAT COULD THIS THIRD DIRECTION FOR THE HOSPITAL ACTUALLY BE? WELL, HULK VERY INTERESTED IN THE POLITICS OF AFRICA AS WELL, SO MAYBE THE 3RD CHARACTER SHOULD WANT TO REACH OUT TO THE LOCAL ARMY OR DESPOT WHO, DESPITE THEIR ATROCITIES, HAVE RESOURCES THAT COULD HELP. BOTH THE BOSS AND THE MAIN CHARACTER SHOULD WANT TO STICK TO THE HOSPITAL'S CRUCIAL INDEPENDENCE. IT
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WOULD MAKE FOR A STORY IN WHICH ALL 3 MAIN CHARACTERS HAD SIGNIFICANT INTEREST IN THE DIRECTION OF THE HOSPITAL (IE THE PLOT), BUT ALSO THE MAIN THEME OF IDEALISM VS. PRACTICALITY. IT WOULD GIVE ALL THREE CHARACTERS DIFFERENT RELATIONSHIPS WITH ONE ANOTHER. PLUS BY ADDING THIS ARMY/DESPOT CHARACTER WE WOULD THEN HAVE AN OUTSIDE FORCE WHICH HELPS US AUTOMATICALLY EMPATHIZE WITH EVERYONE WITHIN THE HOSPITAL'S TEAM. BUT AGAIN, NONE OF THIS WOULD BE SO CUT AND DRIED BY THE END. THEY WOULD ALL COME TO UNDERSTAND ABOUT EACH OTHERS' VIEW OF IDEALISM VS. PRACTICALITY. IT IS THE MERGING OF CONFLICTING ARCS. AND IT IS HOW ONE WRITES ONE SINGULAR STORY. NOW, HULK SHOULD MENTION THAT FIGURING OUT A SCENE ORDER IS TOO BIG A SUBJECT TO GET INTO HERE... THAT MAY SOUND CRAZY, BUT IT'S ITS OWN 8,000 WORD COLUMN. HULK WILL COVER THAT WHEN THE TIME COMES, BUT YOUR APPROACH SHOULD BE PRETTY LOGICAL. JUST SORT OF PUT IT TOGETHER AND TRY TO INCLUDE AS MANY OF THE CHARACTERS IN EACH SCENE AS POSSIBLE, EXCEPT WHEN THEY HAVE TO BE ALONE OR IN PAIRS. USE LOGIC. THERE IS ALSO ONE THING ABOUT HULK'S AFRICAN DOCTOR MOVIE EXAMPLE THAT HULK HAVE TO TALK ABOUT: EARLY ON HULK REALIZED SOMETHING VERY IMPORTANT. IT HAS TO DEAL WITH POINT #17 AND THE TREATMENT OF WOMEN IN FILM. YOU'LL NOTICE HULK IMMEDIATELY WENT TO THE "DEFAULT MALE PROTAGONIST" AND ALSO THE DEFAULT "FEMALE SUPPORT FIGURE." NEITHER OF THESE OPTIONS ARE GOOD FIRST INCLINATIONS. YOU MAY EVEN REALIZE THAT THIS STORY, WITH ALL ITS CAPACITY FOR MELODRAMA AND BY TOTAL ADMISSION A SOMEWHAT GREYS ANATOMY-LIKE PLOT, REALLY MAKES MORE SENSE IF THE MAIN CHARACTER WAS FEMALE.... HULK TOTALLY AGREES... THAT'S A GOOD SELL FOR THIS MOVIE... BUT HERE'S THE THING. BECAUSE THE TONE OF THE STORY COULD FEEL SO MUCH LIKE FODDER FOR A KIND OF EXPLOITATIVE FEMALE STORY (SOMETHING ALMOST LIFETIME-ESQUE), HULK WOULD LIKE TO TRY TO PUSH IT IN A DIFFERENT DIRECTION AND EMBRACE AN A-TRADITIONAL TONAL APPROACH. IT WOULD BE A MALE DOCTOR IN TOUCH WITH EMOTIONS AND A SIMPLE RELATE-ABLE STORY. HULK WOULDN'T WANT IT TO BE "AIMED AT AN AUDIENCE" BUT SOMETHING MORE ORGANIC, NUANCED, AND AIMED AT EVERYONE. IT A CASE WHERE HULK WOULD GO THE OPPOSITE OF INTUITION FOR MAIN CHARACTER'S GENDER, BUT ALL FOR A VERY SPECIFIC EFFECT. THIS IS WHAT HULK TALKS ABOUT WHEN TALKING ABOUT THE RESPONSIBILITY OF THE AUTHOR. THINK ABOUT THESE KIND OF MATTERS AND EFFECTS CONSTANTLY. THEY WILL TOTALLY INFORM YOUR THEMES. AND WITH ENOUGH DISCUSSION HULK WOULD EASILY BE OPEN TO SWITCHING BACK THE SEXES OF THE TWO COWORKERS, SO THAT THE FEMALE WAS THE PROTAGONIST. HULK WOULDN'T WORRY ABOUT DOING THAT IN THE SLIGHTEST. DO YOU KNOW WHY? BECAUSE THEY'RE PEOPLE. NOT GENDERS. AND WRITING THEM AS PEOPLE MAKES FOR BETTER CHARACTERIZATION. YOU CAN SWITCH GENDERS IN SCRIPTS ALL THE TIME AND UNLESS YOU'RE MAKING PENIS AND VAGINA JOKES OR SOMETHING (WHICH SOMETHING HULK WOULD TOTALLY DO) THE EFFECTS AREN'T THAT BIG A DEAL. THE GENDER DOESN'T MATTER THE WAY YOU THINK IT DOES. SO DON'T WORRY SO MUCH ABOUT IT. IN THE END,
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THEY WILL EITHER BE PLAYED BY AN ACTOR OR AN ACTRESS SO THE AUDIENCE WILL BE ABLE TO KNOW. YOU DON'T HAVE TO WRITE IT TO TELL THEM. BUT EVEN AS HULK ESCHEWS THE GENDER LINES AND ESPOUSES ON THE PRINCIPALS OF MELODRAMA HERE, THE PRINCIPALS OF MELODRAMA DO NOT APPLY TO ALL FORMS OF STORIES. THAT'S WHY YOU SHOULD:
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IF YOU LOOK AT ACTION FILMS THE CAUSE AND EFFECT NEEDS TO MANIFEST ITSELF BY CREATING TENSION FOLLOWED BY A MOMENT OF ELATION AND IMPACT (ARE THEY GOING TO DO IT?!?! THEY DID IT!!!) EVEN THOUGH YOU KNOW THAT IN MOST ACTIONS FILMS THE HEROES WILL SUCCEED, THAT DOESN'T ACTUALLY MATTER. THE FILM'S SUCCESS IS IN TRICKING THE AUDIENCE'S BRAIN, THROUGH WHOLLY VISCERAL FILM-MAKING TECHNIQUES, TO FEEL FOR A SPLIT SECOND LIKE THEY MAYBE THEY WON'T. (GOING BACK TO URGENCY VS. MYSTERY, THERE IS A REASON ACTION FILMS WORK WELL WITH CLEAR STAKES AND COMPLETELY OBVIOUS URGENCY. IT'S VISCERAL). THESE CAUSE + EFFECT MODELS ARE EVERYWHERE AND PART OF EVERY KIND OF GENRE. TO UNDERSTAND THEM IS PARAMOUNT TO YOUR ABILITY TO WRITE. IT EVEN GOES TO THEMATIC MOTIFS LIKE UNDERSTANDING HOW GOOD WESTERNS ARE OFTEN ABOUT "THE END OF THINGS." OR THAT ROMANTIC COMEDIES DEPEND ON THE AUDIENCES FALLING IN LOVE WITH THE CHARACTERS BEFORE THE CHARACTERS DO WITH EACH OTHER (THERE'S A REASON THE RECENT ROMANTIC COMEDIES HAVE COMPLETELY FAILED WHEN THEY GO FOR THEY SLEPT WITH EACH OTHER! NOW THEY HAVE TO FIGURE IT OUT! IT DOESN'T PLAY INTO THE BASIC SENSE OF HOW THE CAUSE + EFFECT WORKS... KNOCKED UP NOT WITHSTANDING BECAUSE THAT MOVIE ACTUALLY GOES FOR OTHER AVENUES OF NARRATIVE RESONANCE AND SUCCEEDS BRILLIANTLY.) UNDERSTANDING THE PSYCHOLOGY OF HOW A GENRE WORKS WILL GIVE YOU PRECISELY WHAT YOU NEED TO MAKE YOUR OWN FILM WORK.... AND YES, EVERY FILM IS TECHNICALLY A GENRE FILM. NOW THAT WE'VE COVERED "BREAKING" STORIES, WE SHOULD LOOK AT A FEW MICRO PROBLEMS AND DEVICES THAT SHOW UP IN WRITING...
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A BAD THING. IT'S NOT AS IF YOU ABSOLUTELY HAVE TO GET YOUR MAIN STORY COOKING BY PAGE 17, BUT HULK WOULD LIKE TO SUGGEST IF YOU'RE GOING MUCH EARLIER OR MUCH LATER THAN THAT PAGE NUMBER, THEN PERHAPS YOU SHOULD PROBABLY HAVE A REALLY GOOD REASON TO DO SO, THAT'S ALL. DON'T LET IT BE DUE TO LAZINESS.
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CONSTRUCTED WHERE EVERYTHING ALWAYS SEEMS TO COME BACK AND BE RELEVANT. WHETHER COMEDY, DRAMA, SHORT OR LONG NARRATIVE, FIND WAYS TO DO THINGS LIKE THAT. IT DOESN'T HAVE TO BE SO PERFECT AND HAVE LITTLE NEAT BOWS ON IT, BUT THERE IS SURELY AN ORGANIC WAY NOT TO WASTE CHARACTERS. BECAUSE THE MORE THE CHARACTERS FEEL LIKE TANGENTS, THEN THE MORE THEY'LL FEEL LIKE TANGENTS.
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REASON THEY TURN THE DEVICE NOT JUST INTO SOMETHING THAT "WORKS" WITHIN THE NARRATIVE CONTEXT OF THE SHOW, BUT SOMETHING THAT SWOONS WITH MEANING AND RESONANCE. IT IS PERFECT WRITING. SO WHEN YOU CONSIDER USING DEUS EX MACHINA IN YOUR OWN WORK, THINK OF THIS ONE STUNNING EXAMPLE. ASK YOURSELF, WHY AM I USING THIS "EASY" SOLUTION? IS THIS THE ONLY WAY I CAN SOLVE THE PROBLEM? AND IF SO, THINK ABOUT THE NATURE OF THE DEVICE AND WHAT IT ACTUALLY MEANS ON A THEMATIC LEVEL. DOES THAT FIT YOUR OWN THEMES? IS IT APPROPRIATE FOR YOUR CHARACTER? DEUS EX MACHINA WORKS WHEN IT IS THE POINT.
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TIMES BREAKING BAD DID GIVE AWAY ACTUAL CONTEXT AND INFORMATION, IT WAS OFTEN A PIECE OF TOTAL MISDIRECTION. BUT IF YOU'RE JUST DOING IT SO YOUR STORY STARTS OFF ALL CLIMAX-Y AND SERIOUS THEN YOU'RE NOT ONLY WASTING THE AUDIENCES TIME, BUT YOU'RE ROBBING YOUR CLIMAX OF IMPORTANT RESONANCE. YOU'RE SUBCONSCIOUSLY MAKING THE AUDIENCE FEEL LIKE THEY'RE JUST WAITING UNTIL WE GET THERE AGAIN. AND EVEN IF BREAKING BAD USED IT WELL FOR TWO WHOLE YEARS, THERE'S A REAL REASON THEY STOPPED USING IT. THERE'S ONLY SO MUCH EVEN THEY COULD DO WITH IT. THE OPENING FLASH-FORWARD IS HORRIBLY OVERUSED DEVICE, SO BE WARY.
34. DON'T FUCK WITH THE AUDIENCE JUST TO FUCK WITH THE AUDIENCE
THE FOLLOWING IS HULK'S GENERAL PIECE OF ADVICE ABOUT LIFE: IF YOU START ANY SENTENCE WITH "WOULDN'T IT BE COOL IF... " DON'T DO IT. JUST DON'T DO IT. WHEN IT COMES TO STORYTELLING SPECIFICALLY, THE REASON IS SIMPLE. ASKING THAT QUESTION IMPLIES YOU ARE THINKING ABOUT THE RESULT FIRST. YOU ARE PROBABLY THINKING ABOUT SOME ABSTRACT IDEA OF HOW AUDIENCE WILL REACT. YOU ARE THINKING ABOUT THE WAYS STORIES ARE NORMALLY TOLD AND HOW YOU WANT TO BE DIFFERENT. YOU ARE THINKING NOT ABOUT HOW PEOPLE WILL BE COMPELLED OR ENGAGED, BUT HOW THEY WILL SIT BACK AND BE AMAZED BECAUSE YOU DID SOMETHING DIFFERENT AND "COOL." HULK HAS MENTIONED TIME AND TIME AGAIN IN THESE COLUMNS ABOUT HOW TRYING TO PURSUE COOL IS A POOR AIM, BECAUSE IT ALWAYS REEKS OF FALSE INTENTION. IT ALWAYS SEEMS DESPERATE AND UNEARNED.IT HAS NOTHING TO DO WITH BEING A VALID OPTION FOR THE STORY. IT WILL BE LIKE A MARKETING EXECUTIVE TRYING TO IDENTIFY WHAT THE HIP KIDS ARE INTO. IT'S TRUE EVEN IF YOU'RE A COOL, FORWARD-THINKING, PROGRESSIVE PERSON. IT WILL FEEL CALCULATED AND COLD. THE PURSUIT OF COOL OR WHAT'S "DIFFERENT" WILL ALWAYS SEEM DISINGENUOUS. SO TRY TO TELL YOUR STORY. WHEN IT COMES TO NARRATIVE, DON'T ACTIVELY TRY TO BE DIFFERENT FOR DIFFERENT'S SAKE. BECAUSE IT WILL JUST END UP SEEMING LIKE YOU'RE FUCKING WITH THE AUDIENCE. LOOK NO FURTHER THAN THE CURRENT DEBACLE WITH ENDING OFTHE DEVIL INSIDE. THE STUDIO / FILMMAKERS WENT ALONG WITH DOING SOMETHING "DIFFERENT" AND IN MOMENT OF COMPLETE STUPIDITY THEY DID SOMETHING THEY THOUGHT MIGHT BE COOL. SPOILERS IF YOU WANT TO SEE A HORRIBLE MOVIE: THE FILM ENDS ABRUPTLY AND TELLS THEM THEY CAN CONTINUE THE EXPERIENCE WITH THE STORY ON A WEBSITE, THUS SHIFTING IT INTO SOME FORM OF TRANSMEDIA LAMENESS... WELL GUESS FUCKING WHAT? DID THE FILMMAKERS NOT REALIZE THAT, NARRATIVELY-SPEAKING, THEY WERE DOING THE MOST RIDICULOUS THING IN THE HISTORY OF THE WORLD? DEVIN HAD A GREAT ARTICLE ABOUT IT HOW THE DECISION, EVEN IF UNINTENTIONAL, MADE IT SEEM LIKE THEY WERE EFFECTIVELY CHEATING THE AUDIENCE AND THUS THEY GOT FUCKING PISSED. HULK AGREES, BUT REALLY WANTS TO HAMMER THE POINT HOME
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THAT IT WAS HOW THE URL CALLED TO ATTENTION THE FACT THEY WERE EXPOSING AN INCOMPLETE NARRATIVE, BY IMPLYING THERE WAS MORE NARRATIVE TO BE HELD ELSEWHERE. THEY DID SOMETHING WORSE THAN JUST HAVING AN UNRESOLVED ENDING... THEY MADE IT SEEM LIKE THE NARRATIVE WAS PURPOSEFULLY INCOMPLETE. HERE'S THE FILMMAKER'S EXPLANATION: "The stories always have a very Hollywood ending. And we're doing the antithesis of that. I know some people love it and some people f*cking hate it but it gets people talking. We're just trying to make it realistic. Not every situation ends perfectly or the way you want it to end." (VIA BLOODY DISGUSTING) ... ... ... ... SORRY. NOW THAT HULK HAS THAT OUT OF SYSTEM LET'S ANALYZE WHY THAT COMMENT MIGHT BE THE WORST THING EVER SAID BY A FILMMAKER. THE FIRST PROBLEM IS THAT HE MAKES IT CLEAR HE'S OKAY JUST FUCKING WITH THE AUDIENCE TO GET A REACTION. SECOND, WHAT THE HELL DOES THAT HAVE TO DO WITH REALISM? NOTHING, THAT'S WHAT. THIRD, HE'S OBVIOUSLY NOT TRYING TO TELL A STORY BUT JUST DO "THE OPPOSITE" AS IF THAT SOMEHOW IS ATTRACTIVE OR COOL OR BADASS. IT'S JUST CONTRARIANISMAPROPOS OF NOTHING. FOURTH, HE PLAYS THE "GET PEOPLE TALKING" CARD WHICH ONLY MATTERS IF YOU'RE PUSHING A PRODUCT LIKE A SALESMAN, NOT A SO-CALLED ARTIST. FIFTH, HE PLAYS THE "PURPOSEFULLY-WITHOLDING MESSAGE" CARD, THUS IMPLYING WE'RE JUST MAD AT THE ENDING BECAUSE THE FILM DIDN'T END HOW WE WANTED IT TO, THUS IMPLYING WE'RE JUST A BUNCH OF HAPLESS DUMB-FARTS WHO NEED TO BE PLACATED. FOR ALL FIVE OF THOSE REASONS HULK WOULD LIKE TO POLITELY SUGGEST THIS GUY CAN GO SIT IN THE CORNER OF DIRECTOR JAIL AND THINK ABOUT WHAT HE'S DONE. BECAUSE THE MOST GRAVE PROBLEM WITH ALL THESE STATEMENTS IS THAT THERE IS CLEARLY NO UNDERSTANDING OF WHAT NARRATIVE EVEN MEANS. NONE. HIS "HOLLYWOOD ENDING" COMMENT SHOWS THAT HE PERCEIVES NOTHING ABOUT HOW ENDINGS WORK. HE SEEMS TO THINK THAT ANYTHING WITH RESOLUTION IS AKIN TO HAVING THE CHARACTERS RIDE OFF INTO THE SUNSET HAND IN HAND. IT'S ASININE. REMEMBER WHAT HULK SAID EARLIER ABOUT HOW THE ENDING IS A CHANCE TO RAM HOME THEMES? WELL MOST FOUND FOOTAGE FILMS TEND TO END ABRUPTLY, BUT AT LEAST MOST OF THEM HAVE AN ENDING GESTURE LIKE THAT MANAGES TO DO SOMETHING. THEY WILL AT LEAST REVEAL WHO THE BAD GUY ACTUALLY IS, OR SHOW THAT EVERYONE ELSE IS STILL ALIVE IS TOTALLY FUCKED OR SOMETHING BUT. THIS ONE JUST ENDS ON ANOTHER ACTION BEAT INDISTINGUISHABLE FROM OTHER ACTION BEATS BEFORE. THE FILM AND HIS ENSUING COMMENTS ARE ENOUGH EVIDENCE TO SHOWCASE THAT THIS PERSON COULD NOT POSSIBLY UNDERSTAND LESS OF WHAT A STORY IS, HOW
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IT WORKS, OR WHY IT MATTERS. IF "THE ENDING IS THE CONCEIT" THEN THIS FILMS CONCEIT WAS TOTAL INEPTITUDE. SO TO ALL OF YOU, HULK WANT YOU TO KNOW STORYTELLING IS NOT SOME "GAME" WHERE YOU MESS WITH THE AUDIENCE. IT'S AN ART. IF YOU WANT TO GO IN BOLD NARRATIVE DIRECTIONS, YOU START WITH THE FAMILIAR TROPES AND YOU CAREFULLY BRING THE AUDIENCE ON A JOURNEY, OFTEN TO PLACES THAT ARE UNCOMFORTABLE, BUT YOU DO SO WITH A GUIDING HAND. YOU CAN BRING ALWAYS AN AUDIENCE TO AN ANTAGONISTIC PLACE, BUT YOU CAN'T DO IT IN ANTAGONISTIC WAY. AND IF YOU DO? YOU BETTER BE DAMN SURE THAT AUDIENCE'S ANGERED REACTION IS THE EXACT RESULT YOU WANT (WHICH IS WHY IN ITS MOST BASIC SENSE, HUMAN CENTIPEDE 2 "WORKS" FOR ITS FILMMAKER). SO WHILE EVERYONE IS GOING AROUND SAYING THE DEVIL INSIDE IS "FUCKING STUPID," THERE'S A REAL REASON WHY EVERYONE IS SO DAMN ANGRY. THEY SHOWED THE DEEPEST LACK OF UNDERSTANDING OF WHY PEOPLE WATCH MOVIES. YOU CAN'T TAKE TURNS OR SURPRISES AND MESS WITH EXPECTATION WITHOUT HAVING A DAMN GOOD REASON FOR THEM. YOU HAVE TO NEGOTIATE YOUR DROPPING OF ONE ELEMENT OF GOOD NARRATIVE MAKING, AND FULLY EMBRACE ONE OF THE OTHER ELEMENTS FROM OUR WORKING DEFINITION. DROPPING THEME? IT BETTER MAKE PERFECT SENSE FOR THE TEXTURE, CHARACTER, OR REALITY. DROPPING NARRATIVE ECONOMY AND PROPULSION? BETTER MAKE PERFECT SENSE FOR THEME. FOR INSTANCE, THE CHANGE OF NARRATIVE DIRECTION IN NO COUNTRY FOR OLD MEN IS EASILY FELT, BUT HAS A STUNNING THEMATIC RESONANCE. BY REMOVING SHACKLES OF NARRATIVE RESTRICTION, THE FILM IS FREE TO EXPLORE SOMETHING COMPLETELY ABSTRACT, EVEN DOWNRIGHT POETIC. AS A RESULT, WHAT COULD HAVE JUST BEEN TIGHT, WELL-REALIZED ACTION FILMS, BECOMES ON ONE OF THE BEST FILMS OF ALL TIME. BUT ALSO REMEMBER THAT FOR ALL THE PEOPLE WHO EITHER WEREN'T PERCEPTIVE TO THEMATIC STUFF OR JUST NOT THAT INTO IT, THE ENDING OF NO COUNTRY REALLY RUBBED THEM THE WRONG WAY. AND IT'S BECAUSE IT ESCHEWED THE MOST BASIC EXPECTATIONS OF NARRATIVE. BUT THE COENS UNDERSTAND AND EXPECT THOSE LIMITATIONS. THEY UNDERSTAND THEIR RESPONSIBILITY TO DEFTLY WEAVE IN AND OUT NARRATIVE IN ORDER TO CREATE NEW THEMATIC MEANINGS. SURE, THE COEN BROTHERS DEFY EXPECTATIONS OF STORYTELLING CONSTANTLY, BUT THEY DO SO ONLY TO ENGAGE DEEP QUESTIONS BEHIND LIFE. THEY DON'T SIT AROUND AND GO "WOULDN'T IT BE COOL IF?"
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LIKES TO WRITE IS TO JUST GET A FIRST DRAFT OVER AND DONE WITH SO THAT HULK CAN THEN BE ON HULK'S WAY WITH ALL THE FUN EDITING PROCESS. EDITING IS FUN. THERE IS THE OLD ADAGE THAT "WRITING IS RE-WRITING." HULK FEELS IT IS TRUE BECAUSE THAT IS WHEN YOU GET TO SHAPE THE ACTUAL STORY. WHEN IT'S A BAD SCRIPT, WHICH THEY ALL ARE AT FIRST, YOU CAN RESHAPE IT THROUGH SHEER COMMITMENT TO MAKE IT A GOOD SCRIPT. AND THE BEST PART ABOUT REFINING YOUR SCRIPT IS, YOU KNOW, YOU CAN STILL MAKE GREAT CHANGES WITH ZERO NEGATIVE CONSEQUENCES (UNLIKE WHEN YOU START FILMING). HULK LOVES EDITING SCRIPTS. IT'S WHEN THE STORY ACTUALLY FEELS ALIVE. PAUL THOMAS ANDERSON TALKED ABOUT WRITING ONCE AND SAID, TO PARAPHRASE, THAT WRITING IS LIKE IRONING. YOU HAVE THIS RUMPLED MESS THAT'S STILL A SHIRT AND EVERYTHING, BUT YOU KEEP GOING OVER IT AGAIN AND AGAIN TIL IT'S SMOOTH. EACH PASS STRAIGHTENS THE SHIRT, ACCOMPLISHING ITS JOB UNTIL YOU HAVE EXACTLY WHAT YOU NEED. SO HOW DO YOU KNOW WHEN YOU'RE DONE? IT'LL BE "DONE" WHEN YOU FEEL LIKE YOU'RE JUST TINKERING WITH IT. YOU'LL MAKING SMALL INCREMENTAL CHANGES WHICH, SURE MIGHT BE WELL AND GOOD, BUT THEY ARE PROVIDING NO DEEPER OVERHAUL OR UNDERSTANDING TO THE PIECE ITSELF. SO HULK THINK YOU SHOULD ONLY GET ONE ROUND OF TINKERING AND THEN IT SHOULD BE OUT OF YOUR HANDS AND WITH OTHER, TRUSTED EYEBALLS. TO EITHER BE APPROVED OF, OR TO TELL YOU WHAT IT REALLY NEEDS. NO SCRIPT EVER FEELS PERFECT. THERE IS ONLY THE TIME TO LET IT GO.
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BE WILLING TO SAY "FUCK BATTLES IN THE LAST ACT." IF THAT'S WHAT IT CALLS FOR. TARANTINOS KILL BILL VOL. II KNEW THAT AFTER THE BATTLE AGAINST THE 88, HE COULDN'T TOP IT ACTION-WISE. SO HE HAD A BRILLIANT 5 MINUTE MONOLOGUE, SUMMING UP THE ENTIRE VIEWPOINT OF CHARACTER, FOLLOWED BY AN EQUALLY CLIMACTIC DISCUSSION OVER DINNER, AND FINALLY 5 SECONDS OF INTENSE FIGHTING... IT WAS A HUNDRED TIMES MORE INTERESTING THAN ANY POSSIBLE BATTLE. HE DID WHAT MADE SENSE FOR THAT STORY. SO DO WHAT MAKES SENSE FOR YOUR STORY. MIKE LEIGH'S HAPPY GO LUCKY ESCHEWS EVERY RULE OF TRADITIONAL ROMANTIC COMEDIES TO SAY SOMETHING FAR MORE INSIGHTFUL ABOUT THE NATURE OF LIFE AND HAPPINESS. DO WHAT MAKES SENSE FOR YOUR STORY. ANIMAL HOUSE ESSENTIALLY STOP THE MOVIE AND HAS A FULL-ON DANCE NUMBER TO "SHOUT." IT HALTS THE NARRATIVE AND SUCCEEDS ONLY BECAUSE IT IS A PURE JOY FROM START TO FINISH. DO WHAT MAKES SENSE FOR YOUR STORY. THE ENDING OF NO COUNTRY FOR OLD MEN TOSSES ASIDE ALL NARRATIVE PROPULSION TO WAX PHILOSOPHICAL ON THE NATURE OF LIFE AND RESOLUTION ITSELF. IT POKES INWARD AT EACH OF THE CHARACTERS, CUTTING TO THE BONE OF THEIR ESSENCE, BUT LEAVING THESE OTHER BIG CATHARTIC GESTURES OFF-SCREEN. AND YET IT ALL RESONATES WITH A SIMPLE SPEECH, AL DO WHAT MAKES SENSE FOR YOUR STORY. SHANE CARRUTH'S PRIMER GLEEFULLY BREAKS EVERY SINGLE RULE ABOUT NARRATIVE, CONCEPT, AND COHERENCE. AS SUCH, A LOT OF PEOPLE CANT EVEN WATCH IT. BUT FOR SOME FOLKS, HE MANAGES TO CREATE ONE OF THE MORE BRAZEN, INTERESTING FILMS EVER MADE. IT SO CONCENTRATES ON THE CONCEPTS OF SCIENTIFIC VERACITY THAT IT CAPTURES ITS RESONANT THEMATIC TRUTHS THROUGH THE SUBJECT ITSELF (MUCH LIKE THE ZODIAC AND CONTAGION EXAMPLES), ONLY HIS SUBJECT IS ONE OF THE MOST COMPLEX THEORETICAL CONCEPTS ON THE PLANET. THIS COMPLETELY UNAPOLOGETIC TREATMENT OF SCIENTIFIC ACCURACY VIA PLOTTING RESULTS IN A STUNNING, DISTINCT, ORIGINAL FILM. THE FILMMAKER PURSUED AN UNCOMMON VIEW THAT COMPELLED HIM AND THUS REVEALED A NEW VIEW THAT COMPELLED US. DO WHAT MAKES SENSE FOR YOUR STORY. BUT JUST KNOW THIS... EVERY SINGLE RULE OR GUIDELINE THAT IS BEING BROKEN IN THE EXAMPLES LISTED HAS DAMN GOOD REASONS FOR WHY. IT'S NOT "JUST CAUSE IT WOULD BE NEAT." THEY WEREN'T MAKING SOME TOTALLY PEDESTRIAN MOVIE AND THEN BROKE A RULE BECAUSE "IT'S MORE REAL!" THEY WEREN'T EVEN JUST "GOING WITH THEIR GUT," A THING THAT HULK BETS MANY OF YOU WOULD WANT TO DO. HINT: THAT COULD JUST BE YOUR VISCERAL, CONTRARIAN ID TALKING. AND THAT'S NOT SOMETHING YOU WANT TO TRUST WITH STORY.
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NO. THOSE EXAMPLES OF EXCEPTIONS SUCCEED BECAUSE IT MAKES COMPLETE SENSE FOR THOSE STORIES. IT'S ALMOST AS IF THAT HAD TO GO THERE TO SEE THEIR CONCEITS THROUGH. THE BIGGEST PROBLEM WITH HOW EVERYONE IS BREAKING THE RULES NOWAWAYS IS NOT BECAUSE IT'S ROBBING US OF TRADITIONAL NARRATIVE POWER, THOUGH THAT SUCKS, IT'S BECAUSE NO ONE SEEMS TO EVEN UNDERSTAND WHY THE RULES ARE EVEN THERE. IF THEY DON'T KNOW WHAT THE RULE SAYS AND HOW IT WORKS, THEY THEREFORE CAN'T UNDERSTAND WHAT BREAKING THE RULE SAYS EITHER. THEY'RE JUST TRYING TO BE "DIFFERENT" ... AND HULK SAYS FUCK THAT. WORSE, THERE'S SOME FOLKS WHO REALLY DON'T EVEN KNOW THE RULES ARE ANYMORE. THERE'S GOTTA BE A REASON FOR ALL OF THIS, RIGHT? WHY DON'T WE KNOW THE RULES ANYMORE? WHAT HAPPENED? AND WHY DO WE JUST SLAM FORWARD WITH THIS FAUXUNDERSTANDING OF FILMMAKING? IT ALL SPEAKS TO AN EVOLUTION OF FILMMAKING. IF YOU FORGIVE HULK FOR INDULGING THIS BIT OF A HISTORY-LESSON, BUT BACK IN THE GOLDEN AGE OF HOLLYWOOD EVERYONE PRETTY MUCH KNEW THE NARRATIVE RULES. MOVIES HAD A VERY SET CRAFT. THEY KNEW ALL THE BEATS. WRITERS WERE ALL STABLED IN THE STUDIO SYSTEM AND THEY WOULD EVEN HAVE DIFFERENT ROLES. THERE WOULD BE A STRUCTURE GUY. A DIALOGUE GUY. THE DIRECTOR HAD A ROLE. MOVIES AND STORYTELLING WERE ON AN ASSEMBLY LINE. YES THIS PRODUCED A LOT OF SIMILAR WORK, BUT IT WAS DOWNRIGHT PROFESSIONAL STUFF. AND BESIDES, ALL THE BEST WRITERS / FILMMAKERS KNEW HOW TO SNEAK SUBVERSION RIGHT INTO IT ANYWAY SO THE ARTISTIC INCLINATION WAS ABLE TO FLOURISH TOO. THE POINT IS THAT THE AUTHORS CREATED GOOD STORIES, WELLTOLD. THE 60/70'S CHANGED THE PARADIGM. THE SYSTEM HAD BEEN "WORKING" SO WELL FOR SO LONG, BUT A GOOD DEAL OF STORYTELLERS GOT LAZY WITHIN THOSE CONSTRUCTS. WHICH MEANS MOVIES IN GENERAL GOT LAZY TOO. WHEN THIS WAS COUPLED WITH SERIOUS CHANGES IN COUNTER-CULTURE, IT RESULTED IN THE AUDIENCE GENUINELY TIRING OF THE HOLLYWOOD SYSTEM. NEW AUDIENCES WANTED AN ALTERNATIVE, SO THEY TURNED TO NEW FILMMAKERS. THEY DIDN'T HAVE RESOURCES SO THE CONSTRUCTION WAS MESSY. NATURAL. OUTDOORS. THUS, MOVIES BROKE THE MOLD. THE TEXTURES, STORIES, IDEAS ALL RESONATED IN A PERFECT WAY FOR THE TIME AND PLACE. OF COURSE, THE HUGE SUCCESS OF SOME BLOCKBUSTERS IN THE 70'S PAVED THE WAY FOR ANOTHER ROUND OF STUDIO DOMINANCE, ALL DONE THROUGH THE HOMOGENIZED, BIG BUSINESS 80'S. BUT AGAIN, THINGS CHANGED. WE HAD ANOTHER REACTION TO "THE MAN" WITH THE 90'S INDEPENDENT FILM BOOM. AGAIN THE FILMS WENT MESSY. NATURAL. OUTDOORS. BUT ALAS, THE INDEPENDENT MOVEMENT WAS HOMOGENIZED AGAIN AS CORPORATIONS ARE NOW RUNNING "INDIE STUDIOS" TOO. THE PURPOSE OF ALL THIS HISTORY IS TO HIGHLIGHT THE FACT THERE HAVE BEEN EBBS AND FLOWS TO THE NATURE OF THE BUSINESS FOR... PRETTY MUCH ALWAYS. THERE IS ALWAYS A DICHOTOMY: TO WORK WITHIN THE SYSTEM, OR TO WORK OUTSIDE THE
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SYSTEM. DEPENDING ON THE DIRECTION OF THE TREND IT MAKES IT EASIER TO DO ONE OR THE OTHER, BUT STORYTELLERS, AT LEAST THE ONES WE LIONIZE, ALWAYS SEEM TO HAVE IMPLICIT DESIRE TO SNUB THE DOMINANT CULTURE OR POPULAR MODELS AND EMBRACE THE MOST ARTISTIC CONSTRUCTS AND FORMS. IT IS AN IDOLIZATION OF PERPETUAL REBELLION. THE 90'S INDEPENDENT FILMMAKERS REBELLED AGAINST THE HOMOGENIZED 80'S MODEL, BUT THEY WERE ALSO IN LOVE WITH THE 60/70'S POETS OF THEIR DAY, AND SOUGHT TO EMULATE THEM. IT'S ALL VERY ROMANTIC SOUNDING... BUT THE PROBLEM WITH THIS, AND WHY NO ONE SEEMS TO GIVE A SHIT ABOUT THE RULES ANYMORE, IS BECAUSE WE HAVE FALLEN IN LOVE THE CADENCE OF THIS REBELLIOUS WORK. THINK ABOUT THE 90'S BOOM. TARANTINO HAS HAD HUNDREDS OF EMULATORS, BUT THE REASON NO ONE COMES CLOSE TO BEING AS GOOD AS HIM IS THEY ONLY TAKE THE TANGIBLE STUFF. THE COOL SUITS. THE SWEARS. THE OUT-OF-ORDER STORYTELLING. THE IRONIC SENSE OF MUSIC AND BLOODY GUNFIGHTS. THEY GET THE IDEA THAT PEOPLE TALK, BUT NOTHOW THEY TALK. THEY MISS THE VERY SIMPLE ELEMENTS OF NARRATIVE PROPULSION, OBJECTIVES, AND CLEAR STAKES. HIS STORY TELLING ISN'T OUT OF ORDER FOR NO REASON, BUT INSTEAD TO REVEAL THE STORY IN A FASCINATING THEMATIC EVOLUTION. PEOPLE OBSESSES OVER HIS CADENCE, WHICH IS TOTALLY NEAT AND STUFF, BUT IT'S NOT WHY HIS FILMS WORK. THIS HAS ALWAYS BEEN TRUE. PEOPLE RIP-OFF ALTMAN, SCORSESE, SPIELBERG, LUCAS, ETC. BUT THE REASON THOSE RIP-OFFS FEEL SO FALSE IS NOT BECAUSE THEY ARE DERIVATIVE, BUT BECAUSE THEY FAIL TO RECOGNIZE THE MOST BASIC DYNAMICS OF GOOD NARRATIVE STORYTELLING. LET'S GO SUPER-RECENT: SUPER 8 USURPS ALL THE LANGUAGE AND CADENCE OF SPIELBERG'S FILMS, BUT IT FAILS BECAUSE IT DOESN'T KNOW HOW TO MAKE THE MONSTER ELEMENTS CONNECT THEMATICALLY TO THE STORY (UNLIKE JAWS + ET). REALLY, IT DOESN'T GET TWO CENTRAL COMPONENTS OF OUR GOOD NARRATIVE DEFINITION. ATTACK THE BLOCK SUCCEEDS BECAUSE IT TAKES THE INSPIRATION OF CARPENTER AND DANTE AND FILTERS THOSE MOTIFS AND APPROACH INTO ITS OWN PERSONAL STORY AND TEXTURE. PLUS IT HAS DEEP THEMATIC IDEAS. IT GETS ALL FOUR COMPONENTS OF HULK'S GOOD NARRATIVE DEFINITION. STORY RULES. CADENCE IS OVERRATED. AND BECAUSE HULK HAS TO ACKNOWLEDGE THE EXCEPTION FOR JUST ABOUT EVERYTHING, YES THE CADENCE/STYLE OF YOUR SCRIPT AND FILM IS GREAT TOOL FOR SPEAKING TO CERTAIN AUDIENCES. BUT STYLIZATION IS NOT NEARLY AS CRITICAL AS THE INTENTION AND HONESTY OF YOUR WELL-MEANING STORY. IT DOESN'T MATTER WHERE YOU COME FROM AND WHO YOU'RE WORKING FOR, YOU CAN BE OPERATING SUBVERSIVELY WITHIN THE SYSTEM, OR YOU CAN BE CHUCKING ROCKS FROM THE OUTSIDE WITH AN INDEPENDENT BENT. YOU CAN BE TELLING A TRADITIONAL STORY OR YOU CAN BE USING WILDLY INVENTIVE META FORM. IT REALLY MAKES NO DIFFERENCE TO HULK. THE MEANING OF THE STORY, AND ITS ABILITY TO RESONATE FOR THE AUDIENCE, IS WHAT MAKES THE NARRATIVE THING WORK.
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HULK DOESN'T CARE WHAT KIND OF CONCEPTUAL STORY YOU ARE TELLING, OR WHAT STRUCTURE YOU ARE USING... JUST THINK ABOUT WHAT YOU ARE SAYING. APPROACH YOUR STORIES IN TERMS OF MIND, BODY, AND SOUL. ASK YOURSELF QUESTIONS. WHAT DOES THIS ACTION MEAN? WHAT AM I IMPLYING WITH THIS CHARACTER'S BEHAVIOR? KNOW WHEN YOU'RE FOLLOWING THE RULES AND KNOW WHEN YOU'RE BREAKING THEM. KNOW WHO YOU ARE REACHING AND WHY. BE CONSCIOUS.
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SCRIPT, SAT DOWN TO READ YOUR SCRIPT YOU WOULD WANT HIM TO THINK IT'S GREAT. THIS GOES WITHOUT SAYING. THE SAME CAN BE SAID FOR IF YOUR FAVORITE ACTOR SAT DOWN TO READ YOUR SCRIPT. AND THEN IF A STUDIO EXEC SAID DOWN TO READ YOUR SCRIPT YOU WOULD WANT THEM TO THINK IT'S GREAT TOO . AND IF A SCRIPT READER, WHO READS A MILLION OF THEM AND WHOSE TIME IS SHORT, SAT DOWN TO READ YOUR SCRIPT YOU WOULD WANT THEM TO THINK IT'S GREAT AND KEEP READING, FORGETTING THERE'S A NEXT ONE ON THE PILE. AND IF AN 21 YEAR OLD INTERN, WHO REALLY DOESN'T HAVE THE BREADTH OF EXPERIENCE OR PATIENCE, SAT DOWN TO READ YOUR SCRIPT YOU WOULD STILL WANT THEM TO THINK IT'S GREAT TOO. NOW GUESS WHICH ORDER OF PEOPLE THE SCRIPT WILL BE READ IN? YUP. YOU HAVE TO MAKE YOUR SCRIPTS ACCESSIBLE TO THE 21 YEAR OLD INTERN. SORRY FOLKS BUT WHEN YOU'RE STARTING THE GAME IT'S TRUE. NOW, THIS DOES NOT MEAN THAT YOU "CAN'T USE BIG WORDS" OR TELL A COMPLEX STORY. THAT WOULD BE NONSENSE. THE 21 YEAR OLD INTERN IS ACTUALLY PRETTY SMART. WHAT IT MEANS IS THEY ARE BUSY AND CAN GET DISTRACTED. ACTUALLY, THE SAME GOES FOR ALL THOSE PEOPLE REALLY. THEIR TIME IS INVALUABLE. WHICH MEANS YOU HAVE TO GET TO THE POINT AND NOT DILLY-DALLY IN THE DAMN DESCRIPTION. THAT MEANS NO "WALLS OF BLACK TEXT." REALLY. HULK ONE OF THE MOST PATIENT READERS ON THE PLANET. HULK CAN READ FAST. HULK PICKS UP INFINITE JEST EVERY YEAR AND REVISITS IT. HULK FUCKING LOVES TO READ DENSE INTRICATE TEXT. HULK MEAN, LOOK AT THESE FUCKING ESSAYS. HOW COULD HULK NOT? BUT WHEN HULK SEES THAT BIG WALL OF BLACK TEXT IN A SCRIPT, HULK'S HEART JUST SINKS A LITTLE. IT JUST HAS NO REAL FUNCTION IN A SCREENPLAY. BY THE END OF PART 6 YOU'LL FULLY UNDERSTAND WHY THAT IS, BUT FOR NOW JUST ACCEPT THAT IT IS. AND THIS REALITY JUST MEANS IT IS NEVER PRODUCTIVE TO READ. IT'S CERTAINLY NEVER ANY FUN TO READ. IT'S NEVER COMPELLING. YOU MAY THINK IT'S IMPORTANT, OR RELEVANT, OR INTERESTING, OR CAREFULLY CONSTRUCTED. BUT TO THE READER IT'S JUST NOT. IT'S JUST CLEAR YOU'RE WORRYING TOO MUCH ABOUT SOMEONE NOT DOING EXACTLY WHAT YOU WANT WITH THE DETAIL. THAT'S NOT GOOD SCREENWRITING. SO WHEN DESCRIBING THE ACTION, BE AS BRIEF AND CONCISE AS POSSIBLE. IT'S THE SAME THING AS HULK'S "HAVE NARRATIVE ECONOMY!" LESSON ONLY IT APPLIES TO THE ACTUAL TEXT AND NOT THE STORY. THE SECOND THINGS START TO GET DENSE IN THE DESCRIPTION, EVERY READER WILL TUNE OUT. IT IS AN ABSOLUTELY FIXTURE OF THE BUSINESS. THESE ARE BUSY-AS-SHIT PEOPLE. MOST OF THEM WILL SIMPLY GLANCE AT THE ACTION TO GET A SENSE OF WHAT'S HAPPENING AND THEN JUST GO BACK TO THE DIALOGUE. SO BE BRIEF AND MOVE ON. BUT AT THE SAME TIME YOU CAN'T HAVE NOTHING EITHER. BECAUSE WHAT YOU WRITE IN THE NON-DIALOGUE SECTIONS IS STILL VITALLY IMPORTANT TO THE STORY, IT STILL HAS TO BE CONVEYED WITH PURPOSE. BECAUSE THE DIRECTOR WILL ABSOLUTELY USE IT TO GO INTO PRODUCTION, THE CRITICAL DETAILS HAVE TO BE THERE. WHICH MEANS THAT
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YOU, THE WRITER, HAVE TO LEARN HOW TO BALANCE THE NEEDS OF ECONOMY WITH THE NEEDS OF RELEVANT INFORMATION. AND WOULDN'T YOU KNOW? HERE'S A WAY TO DO THAT:
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IF YOU WRITE SOMETHING WE CAN'T SEE, IS NOT JUST MERE FAUX PAS, NOT JUST A COMPLETELY WASTED OPPORTUNITY, BUT A WRITING HABIT THAT WILL ACTIVELY MAKE THE MOVIE WORSE. YOU'RE PUTTING AN IDEA INTO THE FILMMAKERS HEAD THAT WILL MAKE TOTAL SENSE FOR YOUR STORY, HELP THEM GET IT, BUT IT WON'T HELP THE AUDIENCE GET IT. GUESS WHO MATTERS THE MOST? THE GOLDEN RULE FIXES ALL: WRITE ONLY WHAT WE CAN SEE.
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THE IMPLICATION OF THIS MAY SEEM OBVIOUS, THAT GITTES IS "CHEAP" OR SOMETHING, BUT THE FACT THAT HE HAS THEM ALL LINED UP AND READY TO GO IN HIS OFFICE SAYS SOMETHING ELSE... IT IMPLIES THAT JAKE KNOWS THE CLIENT WON'T KNOW THE DIFFERENCE. WHAT MAY SEEM LIKE A SMALL DETAIL IN THE SCRIPT IS ACTUALLY A DETAIL THAT CAN BE SUSSED OUT TO SEVERAL OTHER IMPLICATIONS. IT'S A BRILLIANT LITTLE GESTURE OF WHICH TOWNE IS A MASTER. REALLY, HULK READ A SHIT TON OF SCRIPTS AND THESE OPPORTUNITIES ARE RARELY EXPLORED. SO HULK WANT YOU TO EMBRACE THE KIND OF HIGH-DEGREE STORYTELLING EVIDENT IN THESE TINY DETAILS. EMBRACE THE HIGH STANDARD. ALWAYS TRY TO ALWAYS SAY SOMETHING. EVEN TRY TO SAY MULTIPLE THINGS AT ONCE. EVERY DETAIL IN YOUR SCRIPT CAN MATTER IF YOU REALLY WANT IT TO. DON'T WASTE OPPORTUNITIES TO SAY SOMETHING!
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THAT'S ALL THERE IS TO IT. BECAUSE IF YOU'RE NOT ACTIVELY MAKING THE READER LAUGH THAN THERE'S, QUITE LITERALLY, NO POINT TO DOING IT. SERIOUSLY. NONE. YOU'RE ALREADY PISSING ON THE CONCEPT OF ECONOMY. AND BY BREAKING THE 4TH WALL JUST SAY "I KNOW YOU'RE A PERSON/ HULK WHO IS READING THIS. LET'S JUST TRY AND CHEER YOU UP!" IT BETTER BE GOOD. BUT THERE ISN'T ANYTHING ELSE THE READER CAN CAN DO WITH IT OTHER THAN LAUGH. IT CERTAINLY WON'T MAKE THE MOVIE ANY BETTER. IT CERTAINLY WON'T CONVEY TO THE DIRECTOR HOW TO MAKE THE MOVIE ANY FUNNIER. THE AUDIENCE SURE CAN'T SEE THE FUNNY LINE. IT ADDS NOTHING OF VALUE TO THE FILM. THE ONLY THING IT CAN DO IS MAKE THE READER LAUGH, WHICH ADMITTEDLY IS SOMETHING TO BE APPRECIATED IN THE LONG SLOG OF READING SCRIPTS. BUT IF IT DOESN'T MAKE HULK LAUGH, THEN IT'S JUST GARBAGE FOR WASTING HULK'S TIME... WHICH MEANS SOME READER MIGHT THROW IT IN THE GARBAGE TO BOOT. THOSE ARE THE STAKES. BE WARNED.
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STORYTELLING. THERE ARE OF COURSE, A TON OF EXAMPLES OF GREAT VOICE OVER. ALL THE MALICK FILMS EMPLOY THE DEVICE TO STUNNING AFFECT. BUT HECK, THE DUDE IS BASICALLY WRITING POETRY WHICH GOES ALONG WITH THE STUNNING BEAUTY OF HIS IMAGERY. AND REALLY, HE'S ONE OF A KIND. ANOTHER EXAMPLE IS IN THE INFORMANT! WHERE THE SERIOUSNESS OF THE PLOT IS INTENTIONALLY UNDERCUT BY GOING INTO THE HEAD OF MATT DAMON'S RIDICULOUS MAIN CHARACTER, WHERE HE'LL SUDDENLY START RUMINATING ON PANTIES IN JAPANESE VENDING MACHINES. THERE IS NO INFORMATION OR EXPOSITION, BUT PURE CHARACTERIZATION AND HILARITY. THIS DOESN'T MAKE IT NARRATIVE NONSENSE THOUGH AS IT SERVES TWO OBVIOUS FUNCTIONS: IT HELPS BALANCE THE COMEDIC TONE WITH THE SERIOUSNESS OF THE STORY, AND IT HELPS EXPLAIN JUST WHAT KIND OF BATSHIT GUY WOULD GO DOWN THIS SILLY, EXTREME PATH. HULK THINKS IT'S GREAT. AND THEN THERE'S THE VOICE OVER IN THE COEN'S RAISING ARIZONA, WHICH DOES THE EXACT OPPOSITE. H.I. MCDUNNOUGH, WHO ON THE SURFACE A COMPLETE HICK CRIMINAL, HAS THIS LOFTY, BEAUTIFUL, POETIC NARRATION THAT ACTUALLY COUNTERS THE HILARITY OF THE WORLD OF THE FILM, BY GIVING IT THIS DEEP POETIC RESONANCE AND MAKES THE WHOLE THING A KIND LOFTY, WEIRD, WONDERFUL FAIRY TALE. THERE'S ALWAYS A WAY TO USE A DEVICE WELL. JUST DON'T BE LAZY ABOUT IT. VOICE OVER CAN LEND A NICE FEELING OF ATMOSPHERE, CHARACTERIZATION, AND TONE, BUT BE CAREFUL WITH HOW IT AFFECTS YOUR UNIVERSE. IF YOU REALLY NEED IT AND DON'T WANT TO FUCK WITH YOUR UNIVERSE, THEN TRY A FEW SIMPLE TRICKS TO USE IT MORE ORGANICALLY. LIKE HAVE ONE CHARACTER LITERALLY TELLING A STORY THAT CAN OVERLAP INTO THE NEXT SCENE AND EFFECTIVELY BE USED LIKE VOICE-OVER. THIS WAY YOU GET THE TONAL AND INFORMATION EFFECT YOU WANT WITHOUT GETTING THE TONAL EFFECT YOU DON'T WANT. BUT AGAIN YOU HAVE TO BE CONSISTENT ABOUT IT. BUT REALLY, ALWAYS TRY NOT USING IT FIRST... YOU'D BE SURPRISED HOW WELL PLAIN OLD NARRATIVE WORKS.
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TO TIME THEIR UMS, LIKES, AND YOU KNOWS TO YOUR EXACT SPECIFICATIONS AND CADENCE, THEN YOU ARE GOING TO GET THE MOST HOLLOW SOUNDING FAKE NONSENSE EVER. IT IS IMPOSSIBLE TO MAKE THESE KIND OF NATURAL PAUSES SEEM UNFORCED. SO TAKE EM OUT. PLUS THEY'RE NOT NECESSARY ANYWAY AND WILL COMPLETELY STALL THE READER JUST TRYING TO GET THE MEANING OF YOUR WORDS. REALLY MAKE THEM GO BYE BYE. B) YOU WANT YOUR CHARACTER'S DIALOGUE TO BE MORE CLEAR AND ON POINT THAN YOU'D ASSUME. DON'T LAYER THE DIALOGUE IN A LOT OF QUALIFYING AND ANTICIPATION. NANCY MEYERS MOVIES TEND TO DO THAT HORRIBLY. STUFF LIKE "WELL, I WAS GOING TO SAY...." AND "I THINK i REALLY JUST NEED TO COME OUT, AND LET YOU KNOW THAT." UGHHHHHHHH. HAVE YOU EVER SEEN THE HOLIDAY? IT'S LIKE 2 HOURS OF CHARACTERS SPUTTERING OUT STUFF BEFORE THE CHARACTERS TALK AND HAVE OPINIONS. IT DOESN'T COME OFF LIKE "ORGANIC SPEECH," IT COMES OFF LIKE HULK'S ASS. ADDING THESE KIND OF QUALIFIERS JUST SLOWS DOWN THE ENTIRE RHYTHM AND IMPORT. IT PREVENTS THE AUDIENCE FROM FOLLOWING ALONG AND ENGAGING AND RESPONDING BECAUSE THEY'RE MILES AHEAD OF THE CHARACTER'S THEMSELVES. SO JUST SAY WHAT YOU FREAKIN' MEAN. BE TERSE AND TO THE POINT. YOU MAY WORRY THAT DOING SO WILL MAKE YOUR CHARACTERS SOUND TERSE AND TO THE POINT, BUT IT WON'T. MOVIES FORGIVE A LOT OF BREVITY. IT WILL BE ORGANIC BECAUSE IT WON'T SOUND LIKE REAL LIFE. IT WILL MAKE THEM SOUND LIKE THEY'RE IN A DAMN MOVIE. WHICH THEY ARE. THERE'S A REASON CHARACTERS TALK LIKE THAT IN FILMS AND IT'S BECAUSE THAT'S HOW THE AUDIENCE NEEDS THEM TO BE. C) YOUR CHARACTERS CAN'T ALL TALK THE SAME WAY. YOU SHOULD BE ABLE TO HEAR ONE PERSON IN A SCENE AND KNOW WHO THEY ARE JUST BY THE DIALOGUE. ACHIEVING THIS CAN BE REALLY DIFFICULT, BUT IT'S TRUE. YOU CAN'T JUST RELY ON THE ACTORS TO DO IT FOR YOU. WHEN HULK READS COMEDIES 1/4 OF THEM HAVE ALL THEIR CHARACTERS IN THE GENERIC FUNNY PITHY VOICE, AND 1/4 OF THE OTHERS HAVE THEIR CHARACTERS ALL TALK LIKE THE AUTHOR. IT SUCKS (FYI, THE OTHER 1/4 OF COMEDY SCRIPTS ARE REALLY FUNNY , AND THE LAST 1/4 ARE NOT FUNNY WHATSOEVER). SO CONCENTRATE ON HAVING YOUR CHARACTERS HAVE DIFFERENT VOICES. IF THIS IS A BIG PROBLEM FOR YOU, HULK HAVE A FEW PRACTICAL SOLUTIONS. IF IT HELPS, THINK OF A BUNCH OF DIFFERENT ACTORS IN YOUR HEAD, ALL WITH UNIQUE CADENCES. THROW IN STEVE BUSCEMI, WITH... UM... DENNIS LEARY AND, LIKE, CAROL KING OR SOMETHING. OR WHOEVER! HULK KNOWS THIS SOUND STUPID, BUT IT WILL HONESTLY HELP YOU DIFFERENTIATE THEM IN YOUR HEAD. WHEN WHATEVER ACTOR COMES IN TO PLAY THEM THEY WILL BRING THE CHARACTER A MORE ORGANIC CENTER, THAN THE EXTREMES YOU USED IN YOUR HEAD. IT'S JUST A WAY OF MAKING THEIR VOICES SEPARATE. A MERE MEANS TO AN END. BUT HONESTLY, THERE'S A SURE FIRE WAY OF FIXING MOST OF THESE DIALOGUE PROBLEMS...
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45. FINAL + BESTEST ADVICE EVER: READ YOUR ENTIRE SCREENPLAY OUT LOUD... MANY TIMES.
THIS WILL SOLVE A LOT OF THE PROBLEMS MENTIONED NOT JUST IN THE LAST POINT ABOUT DIALOGUE, BUT ALL THE 45 POINTS MENTIONED SO FAR. YOU'LL HEAR YOUR SCRIPT OUT LOUD AND BE LIKE "OH THAT SOUNDS LIKE CRAP" OR "OH THAT'S A WEIRD THING TO SAY" OR "OH THAT TOTALLY WASN'T NECESSARY." YOU'LL GET A SENSE OF HOW YOUR SCENES ARE PACED AND IF ANY OF THE SCENES DON'T MAKE SENSE NEAR EACH OTHER. HAVE A COUPLE FRIENDS READ IT WITH YOU AND TALK ABOUT IT. HULK REALLY CAN'T TELL YOU ENOUGH HOW MUCH YOU NEED TO DO THIS. JUST BY GETTING THE DAMn THING OUTSIDE YOUR HEAD, IT SOLVES SO MANY PROBLEMS INHERENTLY. YOU'LL KNOW EXACTLY WHAT TO DO WITH IT ONCE IT'S "REAL." LIKE WITH THE ACTION LINES THAT GO ON AND ON? GUESS WHAT? IF YOU GET BORED READING THEM, THE THE PERSON READING YOUR SCRIPT WILL GET BORED READING THEM. SO YOU'LL KNOW EXACTLY WHAT TO CUT. READING A SCREENPLAY OUT LOUD SHOULD INFORM YOU. IT SHOULD SPEAK TO THE EXACT KIND OF MOVIE YOU WANT TO WRITE. TO THE ANECDOTE! AND NOW, HULK WILL SPEAK TO THE POWER OF WHAT READING A SCREENPLAY OUT LOUD CAN DO FOR YOU. WE CAN ALL AGREE THAT THE SOCIAL NETWORK WAS PRETTY MUCH GREAT, RIGHT? IT HAS SUCH A WONDERFUL USE OF DIALOGUE, SMART COMMENTARY, INSIGHTFUL DETAILS, RESONANT THEMES, AND A PROPULSIVE SENSE OF STORYTELLING... HEY... WAIT A MINUTE! ISN'T THAT JUST ALL THE THINGS HULK MENTIONED BACK IN PART 1 OF THIS ESSAY!?!? WHEN HULK TALKED ABOUT WHAT MAKES A GOOD NARRATIVE??? HULK IS BRINGING IT FULL CIRCLE ON Y'ALL! SO ON TO THE ACTUAL ANECDOTE. HULK JUST DID A PODCAST WITH WILL FROM THE SILVERTONGUE ONLINE U.K. (HULK WILL LINK SOON!) AND HE TOLD A STORY THAT HULK HAD NEVER HEARD BEFORE. DURING PREPRODUCTION ON THE FILM, DAVID FINCHER APPARENTLY HAD AARON SORKIN SIT DOWN FOR HIM, AND IN ONE SITTING HE HAD SORKIN READ THE SCRIPT OUT LOUD. HE WANTED TO KNOW THE PACE, INFLECTION, AND SENSE OF RHYTHM THAT BELONGED IN THE SCRIPT. SO AARON SAT THERE, READ THE ENTIRE MOVIE OUT LOUD, JUST AS HE HAD PICTURED IT. IT TOOK HIM 2 HOURS AND 1 MINUTE TO READ THE WHOLE THING. THE FINAL RUNNING TIME OF THE FILM? 2 HOURS 1 MINUTE. THE LESSON IS CLEAR FOLKS: READ YOUR SCRIPT OUT LOUD AND HULK WILL GUARANTEE YOU WILL WIN AN OSCAR. ... OKAY, IT WON'T DO THAT BUT WILL MAKE YOUR SCRIPT WAY, WAY BETTER IN EVERY SENSE.
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BUT WHAT ABOUT WHEN YOU'RE HANDED A RE-WRITE JOB AND THE THING STARTS SHOOTING IN A WEEK? WHAT ABOUT THE FACT THAT IT'S THE END OF THE SEASON AND YOU HAVE TO WRITE AN ENTIRE EPISODE IN TWO STRAIGHT ALL NIGHT SESSIONS? THAT'S JUST AS MUCH PART OF BEING A WRITER AS ANYTHING ELSE IN THIS BUSINESS. BUT EVEN THEN. EVEN IF YOU'RE A WRITER WHO SOMEHOW HAS ALL THE TIME IN THE WORLD. CHANCES ARE IF YOU CAN'T WRITE ORGANICALLY, THEN YOUR WORK WON'T BE ORGANIC EITHER. SO IT HAS TO BE INGRAINED. ... BUT HOW THE HELL DO YOU DO THAT? HULK HAS REGULARLY CITED MALCOLM GLADWELL'S THEORY FROM "OUTLIERS" THAT IT TAKES 10,000 HOURS TO BECOME TRULY GOOD AT ANYTHING. IT TAKES PRACTICE. FOCUS. REPETITION. THE SAME WAY A BASEBALL PLAYER PRACTICES HITTING A BALL OVER AND OVER AGAIN UNTIL EACH REACTION BECOMES SIMPLE MUSCLE MEMORY. A WRITER MUST DO THE SAME. IDENTIFYING SCRIPT PROBLEMS, SEEING NARRATIVE SHIFTS, RECOGNIZING FALSE-SOUNDING DIALOGUE. THESE ARE ALL THINGS THAT MUST BE INGRAINED AND EASILY RECOGNIZED THOUGH THE SAME KIND OF MUSCLE MEMORY PUT ON DISPLAY BY A GREAT BASEBALL PLAYER. AND TO GET TO THAT POINT TAKES 10,000 HOURS OF WRITING. 10,000 HOURS OF SOLVING YOUR OWN SCRIPT PROBLEMS. 10,000 HOURS OF THINKING ABOUT THINGS LIKE CHARACTER MOTIVE, STORY STRUCTURE, AND THE ART OF CINEMA. AND IF YOU WRITE EVERY DAY, THEN 10,000 HOURS USUALLY TAKES ABOUT... 10 YEARS. HULK CANNOT HELP IF THIS REALITY SCARES YOU. SO OFTEN HULK TALKS TO PEOPLE WHO HAVE DREAMS OF WRITING SCRIPTS AND SO OFTEN THEY ARE NOT EVEN CLOSE TO THAT FIGURE. SOME OF YOU ARE STILL YOUNG AND IN SCHOOL AND IN THE PERFECT PLACE TO START. SOME OF YOU ARE... A BIT BEHIND. BUT IF YOU REALLY WANT IT, THEN YOU CANNOT LET THAT REALITY STOP YOU. YOU HAVE TO BE READY TO PUT IN YOUR 10 YEARS. AND HULK CAN REALLY SPEAK TO THE TRUTH OF THAT 10,000 HOUR FIGURE. IT WASN'T UNTIL 10 YEARS IN THAT HULK'S WRITING BECAME EVEN REMOTELY PASSABLE. AND SUDDENLY, IT FELT LIKE HULK WOKE UP ONE DAY AND IT ALL CLICKED. YES, THE PROCESS WAS ACTUALLY RATHER GRADUAL, BUT ALL THESE THINGS HULK "KNEW" HAD BECOME SOMETHING HULK ACTUALLY "UNDERSTOOD."GOING BACK TO POINT #24 HULK MENTIONED THAT IT TOOK THE SOUTH PARK GUYS ABOUT 10 YEARS TO REALLY UNDERSTAND STORYTELLING AND HOW TO APPROACH THEIR SHOW... THAT WASN'T AN ACCIDENT. THINGS TAKE TIME. THINGS TAKE WORK. SO FOR ALL THESE PAGES AND PAGES OF PRACTICAL ADVICE, ADVICE THAT HULK REALLY, TRULY BELIEVES IN, IN CASE THAT'S NOT OBVIOUS, THERE IS STILL NO QUICK FIX. YOU HAVE TO LEARN TO INCORPORATE THOSE IDEAS INTO YOUR DEEPEST ESSENCE AS A WRITER. YOU HAVE TO PRACTICE WITH THEM LIKE A BASEBALL PLAYER WOULD. AND LIKE A BASEBALL PLAYER, YOU'LL FIND YOUR OWN STRENGTHS OVER TIME. YOU'LL FIND YOU ALREADY HAVE A LOT OF THE SKILLS AND TRAINING YOU NEED TO BE GOOD AT STRUCTURE. OR PERHAPS YOU'VE BEEN TRAINING AS A GOOD LISTENER SO YOU HAVE AN EAR FOR DIALOGUE. MAYBE YOU HAVE THE SKILLS TO BE ECONOMICAL. BUT NO MATTER WHAT YOUR SKILLS BECOME AND HOW THEY MANIFEST THEMSELVES IT WILL TAKE
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UNBELIEVABLE AMOUNTS OF WORK. THIS IS SCARY. AND YOU HAVE TWO POSSIBLE REACTIONS: 1) DAMN... I... DON'T THINK I CAN DO THAT. I DON'T THINK I HAVE TIME, AND I MEAN... THAT'S SO MUCH. I WANT TO, I REALLY WANT TO BE A WRITER, BUT I JUST DON'T THINK I CAN DO IT. 2) OKAY, FINE. WHATEVER. THAT'S NOT GOING TO STOP ME. IF YOU ANSWERED LIKE #1 THEN YOU LIKE THE IDEA OF WRITING. YOU LIKE THE THINGS IT MAKES YOU FEEL, OR PERHAPS THE LIFESTYLE OR ACCLAIM YOU THINK IT WILL AFFORD YOU. AND IF YOU ANSWERED LIKE #2, THEN YOU ARE A WRITER. SO IT IS TIME TO START WRITING. GO DO YOUR FIRST SCREENPLAY. JUST WRITE THE DAMN THING. DO IT. AND ONCE YOU FINISH IT, YES IT'S GOING TO BE TERRIBLE. BUT THAT'S TOTALLY OKAY. SIT DOWN. WRITE ANOTHER ONE. DO IT BETTER. THEN DO IT AGAIN. AND AGAIN. DON'T LOOK AT THEM AS YOUR BE ALL END ALL, BUT ANOTHER STEP IN THE PROCESS. LEARN HOW TO CRAFT STORIES. THEN WRITE ANOTHER. AND ANOTHER. GET BETTER. DON'T WORRY YOU'RE "WASTING GOOD IDEAS" BECAUSE THE VALUE OF THE IDEA AND THE INSPIRATION NEVER GOES AWAY EVEN IF THE SCRIPT IS CRAP.YOU CAN ALWAYS COME BACK AND RE-DO THE IDEA ONCE YOU'RE BETTER AT WRITING. HULK'S DONE THAT ALL THE TIME. JUST KEEP WRITING THEM. HULK WROTE OVER 70 SCREENPLAYS BEFORE EVEN ONE WORKING PROFESSIONAL, SAID "HEY THIS IS PRETTY GOOD!" AND FROM THERE, GETTING SOMETHING ACTUALLY MADE IS EVEN HARDER. YES, IT TAKES LUCK TO GET THE RIGHT OPPORTUNITY, BUT YOU GOTTA BE SURE YOU CAN DELIVER WHEN THE OPPORTUNITY COMES. JUST REMEMBER, IT IS SCARY AS ALL HELL. BUT YOU ARE NOT ALONE. YOU HAVE THOUSANDS OF OTHER WRITERS WITH YOU... AND YOU HAVE HULK. HULK KNOWS THAT SOUNDS CHEESY AS ALL HELL, BUT HULK MEAN IT: YOU HAVE A HULK ON YOUR SIDE. HULK WANTS YOU TO WIN. HULK EVEN HATES THAT THIS OH-SONECESSARY 10,000 HOUR MESSAGE IS DOMINATING THE LAST SECTION OF THIS ARTICLE. YES, HULK NEEDS TO WARN YOU, BUT HULK WOULD RATHER INSPIRE YOU. SO IN THAT SPIRIT, HULK JUST WANTS TO FINISH THIS SUCKER WITH A LITTLE EXPLANATION OF ONE OF HULK'S HEROES. THE MAN IN THE LEAD IMAGE OF THIS PART SEVEN IS A GUY NAMED PADDY CHAYEFSKY. HE IS ONE OF THE GREATEST SCREENWRITERS OF ALL TIME. CHAYEFSKY'S SUCCESS WAS DUE IN LARGE PART TO THE FACT THAT HE WAS, FIRST AND FOREMOST, A WRITER IN GENERAL. HE WROTE PLAYS, NOVELS, TELEVISION, AND EVEN CRITICISM (HULK LIKES CRITICISM TOO IN CASE YOU HAVEN'T NOTICED). PADDY CHAYEFSKY APPROACHED HIS CRAFT WITH REMARKABLE SENSE UNDERSTANDING. HIS STYLE ALWAYS SEEMED TO VARY. YOU COULD ALWAYS RECOGNIZE HIS FOCUS AND INTELLIGENCE, BUT NEVER AN OVERPOWERING "STYLE" THAT DOMINATED HIS WORK. HIS VOICE COULD MUTATE AT A MOMENT'S NOTICE. HE COULD TRANSCEND GENRE, TONE, COMEDY, DRAMA, MEDIUM, FORM, AND EVEN LANGUAGE. HE COULD EXPLORE THE SIMPLEST STORIES ABOUT DECENT HUMAN BEINGS AND ETHOS (MARTY), THE GROWING
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STATE OF THE NYC SOCIAL SCENE LONG BEFORE CAPOTE EVEN THOUGHT OF BREAKFAST AT TIFFANY'S (THE BACHELOR PARTY), THE INCREDIBLE THEMATIC REALITIES OF BUREAUCRACY AND PERSONAL WILL (THE HOSPITAL), THE HARDCORE SCI-FI AND HORROR CONCEPTS OF TRIPPY GENETICS (ALTERED STATES), THE AHEAD-OF-ITS-TIME VIEWS OF SEXUALITY AND BECOME A FORERUNNER TO LATE 60'S CINEMA (THE AMERICANIZATION OF EMILY), AND IN HIS MAGNUM OPUS, HE MANAGED TO PENETRATE THE DEEPEST LAYERS OF SATIRE TO THE POINT WHERE HE BASICALLY FORETOLD THE FUTURE OF TELEVISION AND AMERICAN CULTURE AT LARGE (NETWORK). IF YOU NEED A COMPARISON THEN CHAYEFSKY WAS SORT OF A PORTO-CHARLIE KAUFMAN AND CERTAINLY EVERY BIT AS MUCH OF A GENIUS. BUT CHAYEFSKY DIDN'T JUST WORK ON THESE LAUDED PROJECTS, WHICH EARNED HIM THE MOST LONE SCREENWRITING OSCARS OF ANYONE IN HISTORY; HE SPENT MOST OF HIS CAREER AS A "WORKING WRITER" DURING THE GOLDEN AGE OF TELEVISION. BACK IN COLLEGE HULK HUNTED DOWN MOST OF HIS LESSER-SEEN STUFF AND THE ONE THING THAT ALWAYS BECOMES SO AMAZINGLY CLEAR ABOUT HIS WORK IS THAT EVEN WITH HIS THIS UTILITARIAN TV WORK, HE SO COMPLETELY UNDERSTOOD WHAT HE NEEDS TO DO AND EXPLORE WITH THE STORY. WHILE HE FAMOUSLY HATED THE WAY HOLLYWOOD ENCROACHED ON STORYTELLING AND THE AUTHOR'S DUTY CALLING IT "DEMOCRACY AT ITS UGLIEST," HE STILL NEVER, EVER LET THAT IMPACT THE QUALITY, NOR THE EFFORT THAT WENT INTO HIS WORK. HE KNEW HOW TO WRITE BIG AND SMALL, BROAD AND NUANCED, WHEN TO FOLLOW RULES AND WHEN TO ABSOLUTELY SHATTER THEM. THE RANGE, TOTALITY, UNDERSTANDING, AND HUMANITY OF PADDY CHAYEFSKY INSPIRES HULK EVERY SINGLE DAY. HE IS EVERYTHING WE SHOULD EVER WANT TO BE IN A SCREENWRITER. HE INSPIRES HULK TO WRITE SOMETHING LIKE THIS COLUMN. THE WRITING OF THIS COLUMN WAS A BIT OF A STRANGE JOURNEY FOR HULK. FOR ONE, IT'S NOT REALLY A COLUMN AND MORE LIKE A BOOK. HULK'S BEEN WORKING ON IT FOR ABOUT 4 MONTHS. A WEEK AGO, HULK WAS CLOSE ENOUGH THAT HULK THOUGHT IT WOULD EASILY BE DONE BY LAST SUNDAY. WELL... HULK DECIDED TO INCLUDE A FEW MORE POINTS AND SUDDENLY IT SPIRALED. HATING THE FACT IT WAS COMING AFTER PROMISED, HULK'S SPENT THE LAST 4 NIGHTS GETTING ABOUT AN HOUR OF SLEEP. THE DELAY WAS THE RIGHT DECISION HOWEVER. HULK SINCERELY HOPES YOU AGREE. BUT WHY WOULD YOU WRITE SOMETHING LIKE THIS HULK? WHAT IS THE PURPOSE? ON ONE LEVEL, HULK WAS EXCITED ABOUT THE IDEA OF TRYING TO CONVEY THE SUM TOTAL OF ALMOST ALL OF HULK'S KNOWLEDGE ABOUT STORYTELLING AND SCREENWRITING. OF TRYING TO MAKE IT A SINGULAR COMPLETE THOUGHT. A STORY OF WRITING WITH A THROUGH-LINE THAT WOULD MAYBE SPEAK TO YOU. BAND ON SOME SMALL LEVEL, THIS COLUMN FEELS COMPLETE, AND YET... HULK STILL FEEL LIKE BARELY SCRATCHING THE SURFACE. AS CRAZY AS IT SOUNDS, HULK LOOKS OVER WHAT IS WRITTEN AND STILLS SEES SO MUCH MORE THAT CAN BE SAID. WHICH MEANS, THE NEXT STEP FALLS TO YOU.
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THIS COLUMN IS ONLY BUT THE FIRST STEP IN A LONGER CONVERSATION. HAVING FINALLY WRITTEN THIS BEHEMOTH, HULK FINALLY FEELS FREE TO GO ON AND TALK ABOUT FEW SCRIPTS SPECIFICALLY OR DELVE INTO MORE NUANCED IDEAS. GOING FORWARD, THIS COLUMN BECOMES THE RESOURCE TO LOOK BACK ON FOR HULK, A STEPPING-STONE ONTO OTHER DISCUSSIONS AND EVEN BETTER INSIGHTS. AND HULK WANTS TO TALK ABOUT ALL OF THOSE IDEAS WITH YOU. HULK WANTS US TO FLESH THEM OUT AND MAKE THEM FEEL REAL AND UNDERSTOOD. HULK HOPES THAT MAYBE YOU CAN HELP HULK EVEN REFINE THOSE IDEAS TOO. TO TEACH THE HULK THE MANY THINGS THAT HULK HAS YET TO UNDERSTAND ABOUT A SUBJECT THAT CAN ONLY BE TAMED, BUT NEVER MASTERED. HULK WROTE THIS SO WE COULD BOTH BECOME BETTER WRITERS. AND IF WE REALLY WANT TO MAKE IT HAPPEN, THEN WE CAN ALL BE SOMETHING OF A SOUNDING BOARD FOR ONE ANOTHER. HULK SAYS THIS WITHOUT A HINT OF CYNICISM OR DISINTEREST. THE INTERNET IS FULL OF YELLING AND CONTENTION AND UGLINESS AND HULK WANTS TO CREATE A PLACE WHERE WE CAN DO WAY BETTER THAN THAT. BECAUSE SECRETLY WE ARE WAY BETTER THAN THAT. HULK GENUINELY WANTS TO CHANGE HOW WE REGARD THE INTERNET. HULK KNOW THAT SOUNDS FREAKIN' INSANE, BUT IT'S TRUE. HULK BASICALLY JUST WROTE A BOOK AND HERE IT IS. IT'S FOR YOU. IT'S FREE. SO WRITE IN THE COMMENTS BELOW AS HULK PROMISE TO RETURN TO THIS COLUMN AGAIN AND AGAIN OVER TIME. DISAGREE WITH ONE OF HULK'S DEFINITIONS? NEEDS HELP BREAKING A STORY? CAN'T FIGURE OUT A CHARACTER'S PATH? WRITE. ASK. HELP. AND FEEL FREE TO DROP HULK A LINE ANY TIME AT FILMCRITHULK@GMAIL.COM. IT CAN GET A LITTLE BACKED UP AT TIMES, BUT HULK READS EVERY SINGLE THING HULK IS SENT AND WILL ALWAYS TRY TO GET TO EVERY SINGLE PERSON. RIGHT NOW HULK ABOUT 60 HULKMAILS BEHIND (SOME GOING BACK TO OCTOBER) , SO PLEASE BE PATIENT BECAUSE HULK FULLY RESPOND TO EACH ONE. BUT REALLY, WHY DO ALL THIS, HULK? THE SAME REASON HULK EXPLAINED AT THE BEGINNING. BECAUSE HULK KNOWS THE STRUGGLE. IT IS ENDLESS WAR WITH ONE'S ONE BRAIN. IT IS LONESOME. DIFFICULT. AND OFTEN INFURIATING. ... SO WHO WOULD WANT TO GO THROUGH THAT ALONE? <3 HULK
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*THIS PICTURE WAS GENEROUSLY GIVEN TO BY HULK-READER YANICK BELZIL. SO PLEASE REPAY THAT GENEROSITY OUT SOME MORE OF HIS GREAT STUFF HERE, HERE AND FOLLOW HERE.