thomaswingfield

as somebody who trains parkour, I can really identify with this, well done, i find it hard to express the philosophy behind it in written word, but you've captured it well!

juanmanuelcoria792457

Great. all martial artists should keep that in mind, no mater the style of martial art.

Nomad X

Very nice. I like your poem's fluency, it's elegant and graceful (With just a touch of deadliness...?)