stolt077112
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Overall very informative. I also agree that you need to go through and add some sections, letter of transmittal, background methodology, and recommendations.
Some design things: I'm assuming the blue on page two is a blue print, just scale down, it will still be noticeable, and possibly stronger on a smaller scale. The headings on the to of the pages are a little big, reduce font size. Also on the Table of Contents, I don't think you need to underline it, it just seems a little much. The headings for you sections are in dark gray, sometimes when colors are off by just a little, it looks more like a mistake than on purpose; my recommendation as far as color is concerned is to make the headings the blue color of the blue print, and also use that blue on the page numbers in the right corners. Also if you tried to enter for paragraph separation rather than indent, it might give the eye a little rest, your report is rather lengthy and my eyes sometimes get lost.
On page 4: you say "home is right for you or if renting is your best route. The chart below ......maybe reword these a little.
Page 5: second paragraph: what are my needs and what are my wants = what my needs and wants are..
Page 6: "following questions below" - redundant
Page 9: "wow, that quite" - very casual sentence, reword to make more professional.
Overall those are minor things; you have a lot of very good content, mostly it's just how you organize it.
