Class code:223_71ENG50053_29
Student’s name: Cao Nguyễn Anh Tú
Peer editor’s name: Lưu Hoàng Phương Anh
Date:19/5/2023
WRITING ASSIGNMENT – LESSON _3_
Unit:
Topic: 2
The graph below shows the number of cars manufactured in four different countries
from 2020 to 2035.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make
comparisons where relevant.
1st draft
The chart shows that the estimated number of cars to be produced between 2020
and 2035 is in the hundreds of thousands in China, the UK, Japan and USA.
In general, China shows a change in auto production, which will increase gradually
throughout 2020-2035, while Japan, the UK and the US make predictions that the
number of cars produced will decrease sharply at the end of this period.
Japan, which presents itself as the top automaker in 2020 with 350,000 cars, will see
a slight increase in production in 2025, but then a marked decrease as output is
expected to fall about 100,000 cars left. Similarly, car production in the US is expected
to drop significantly from 300,000 to just over a few tens of thousands of units
produced by 2035. The UK is also expected to follow this trend and show numbers The
number of cars produced will be significantly reduced.
On the other hand, China is expected to increase auto production during this period.
They said that it is estimated that production will reach 100,000 vehicles in 2020 and
by 2035 will surpass the other three countries, reaching about 150,000 vehicles in year
2035.
Self-assessment (checklist) The essay was not completed on time, it took me about 2
hours to finished it
Peer assessment (checklist) fully presented, full of meaning, there are transitional
expressions used correctly,
should be use “increase gradually” or “gradually increase”?
Content Y/N Feedback
Task Achievement
Does the report contain at least 150 words? Y
Has the author paraphrased the topic in the
Y
introduction?
Has the overview presented the most significant
feature of the line chart(s) (e.g. the trend, the N
highest/ lowest range of data, etc.)?
Has the report covered the most significant features
(e.g. the trend, the highest/ lowest range of data, Y
etc.)
Coherence & Cohesion
Has the information been grouped into paragraphs
Y
clearly?
Is the information presented in a logical order? Y
Are there at least 3 transitional expressions used
Y
correctly (e.g. First, Besides, Overall, etc.)?
Lexical Resource
Are there any spelling errors? N
Does the author repeat the vocabulary? N
Does the text contain vocabulary specific to line
Y
graphs?
Grammatical Range and Accuracy
should be use “increase gradually”
Are the sentences grammatically correct? Y or “gradually increase”?
Does the writer use punctuation correctly? Y
Does the writer check verb tenses and subject-verb
y
agreement?
Timing
Was the task completed within 20 minutes? N About 2 hours
Final version
The chart shows that the estimated number of cars to be produced between 2020
and 2035 is in the hundreds of thousands in China, the UK, Japan and USA.
In general, China shows a change in auto production, which will increase gradually
throughout 2020-2035, while Japan, the UK and the US make predictions that the
number of cars produced will decrease sharply at the end of this period.
Japan, which presents itself as the top automaker in 2020 with 350,000 cars, will see
a slight increase in production in 2025, but then a marked decrease as output is
expected to fall about 100,000 cars left. Similarly, car production in the US is expected
to drop significantly from 300,000 to just over a few tens of thousands of units
produced by 2035. The UK is also expected to follow this trend and show numbers The
number of cars produced will be significantly reduced.
On the other hand, China is expected to increase auto production during this period.
They said that it is estimated that production will reach 100,000 vehicles in 2020 and
by 2035 will surpass the other three countries, reaching about 150,000 vehicles in year
2035.
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