Task 1

Process
• write an introduction which describes the process in your own words
and mentions
• how many stages there are:
• write two paragraphs in the main body, dividing the process into two
clear parts:
• use mostly present simple and present simple passive;
• use a range of linking words to join the stages together:
• write a minimum of 150 words.
• In the exam, you will have 20 minutes for this.
• Man-made OR natural process? Linear OR Circle??

Para 1: 1-2 өгүүлбэрт багтаан тайлбарыг өөрийн үгээр бичнэ.

Para 2: Графикийг ажиглаад нийт хэдэн алхам байгааг хэлээд логикоор нь 2

хуваана. (үйлдвэрлэлтийн үе шат, хэрэглэгчийн гар дээр очих үе шат гэх мэт)

Para 3: Эхний хэсгээ дэлгэрэнгүй тайлбарлаж бичнэ.

Para 4: Дараагийн хэсгээ дэлгэрэнгүй тайлбарлаж бичнэ.

Model essay on p. 107

Paragraph 1 (Introduction)
• The pictures show
• The graph reveals
• The diagram indicates
• The process diagram explains

• These pictures illustrate how tea is produced, and how a cup of tea is
made.
 Paragraph 2 (Overview)
• Overall, what stands out • There are 18 stages in the diagram, from …
from the diagram is to….
that…
• The first 5 stages indicate how tea is
produced and the last 6 stages reveal how
tea is delivered to its customers.
Paragraph 3 Paragraph 4
• If we look at the production • In terms of the delivery, …
stages, the t
• Man-made diagram – Passive tenses
• Natural diagram – Active tenses
• Sequencers
Man-made diagram/ linear – Passive tenses

• object + to be + past participle: • The cows are milked by a milking

• This is used to describe a machine twice a day.
process where the person is not • The milk is put into refrigeration
important, also the passive is storage.
used for the stages of production. • The milk is delivered by tanker to
the dairy.
• Cream, cheese and butter are
produced from the milk. The items
are packed into boxes
• The tea leaves are picked.
 Man-made diagram/ linear – Present Perfect Passive.

• object + to be + • Once the milk has been transferred to a tanker, it

past participle: is then delivered to the dairy.
• We can use
once and when • When the milk has been delivered to the dairy, it is
+ present subsequently put through a pasteurization process...
perfect passive
to join two • As soon as the milk and dairy products have been
processes processed and packaged, they are then sent out to
together. supermarkets where they are then stacked onto
shelves ready for purchase.
Natural diagram – Active tenses

• Present Simple Active. • Cows graze in the fields.

• object+verb: • Cows eat grass every day.
• The active is used to describe • The sun shines.
natural processes. • Flowers grow.
• Tea grows in India.
• The moon rises in the evening.
 Sequencers
• First of all • In the first four stages, cows graze in
• To begin with the fields.
• at this point After that, the cows are put into a
• then milking machine twice a day.
• after that • Following this, the milk is put into
• following this refrigeration storage, after which it is
• after which transferred to a tanker.
• the next step is
• subsequently
• Subsequently, it is pasteurized,
• Finally
processed and made into cheese
• The last step is... • The last step is that the milk and dairy
products are sent out to supermarkets.
The diagram below shows the production and processing of
milk and dairy products for commercial sale.
• The diagram illustrates the way milk is produced and processed into cheese,
cream and butter and packaged for sale to consumers.
• Overall, there are eight stages in the process, starting with cows grazing on the
grass to the sale of dairy products in supermarkets and shops. The first four
stages are about original form of the milk while the next four stages are about the
processed milk.
• In the first four stages, cows graze in the fields, after which they are taken to a
milking machine to be milked twice a day. Following this, the milk is put into
refrigeration storage. In the next step, the milk is put into a tanker where it is
then ready to be delivered to the dairy on a daily basis.
• In the last four stages, once the milk is delivered to the dairy, it is subsequently
put through a pasteurisation process. It is also turned into various dairy products
such as cheese, cream and butter. Finally, as soon as the milk and dairy products
have been processed and packaged, they are then sent out to supermarkets and
shops where they are displayed and ready for purchase by consumers.
• Once the tea has been packed into the boxes, the tea was then
loaded into the lorry.
Firstly, the tea was packed into the boxes. And then the tea was loaded
into the lorry.