Week 3 Workshop Polishing your writing

Draft 1) When people think in the idea of build a hospital have to consider many variables 2) A hospital will be able to help in specific cases or situations. Then can a hospital be a problem? Knowing that it I a place to help people 3) The most important point is that a hospital near to your house could be a good idea. 4) I take issue with the construction of the hospital in my community, mainly because of the possibility to get there sooner. 5) Its commonly held that if you dont have good health you wouldnt interest the security 6) In any case, having a hospital near to our house isnt neither good nor bad because the decision of build the hospital come for the local authorities 7) If we talk about these topics, we need to talk in terms of prevention on health. Polished version