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college Lo make more money College graduaLes can
demand and recelve hlgher salarles because Lhey have
more educaLlon and Lralnlng lor example my cousln
1lffany ls a Leacher and makes much more money Lhan l
do worklng as a Leacher's alde because she has Lhe
educaLlon and knowledge requlred Lo Leach chlldren
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careers WlLhouL a college degree people ofLen have Lo
seLLle for whaLever wlll pay Lhe bllls raLher Lhan belng able
Lo focus on whaL Lhey really llke dolng lf you have a
college degree ln a fleld you flnd lnLeresLlng you can flnd
a [ob LhaL you flnd engaglng and fulfllllng llnally many
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young relaLlves wlLh a poslLlve role model lL ls flne Lo Lell
a chlld whaL Lo do buL lL ls much more effecLlve Lo
acLually show Lhem a poslLlve paLh yourself ln concluslon
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nearly all people LhaL aLLend college are dolng so Lo have a
beLLer llfe ln many ways
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go Lo college MosL people go Lo college Lo beLLer
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many people go Lo college Lo make more money
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salarles because Lhey have more educaLlon and
Lralnlng lor example my cousln 1lffany ls a Leacher
and makes much more money Lhan l do worklng as
a Leacher's alde because she has Lhe educaLlon and
knowledge requlred Lo Leach chlldren Second
people ofLen go Lo college Lo have more fulfllllng
careers WlLhouL a college degree people ofLen
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whaL Lo do buL lL ls much more effecLlve Lo acLually
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please Lhelr parenLs and oLhers are [usL Lrylng Lo delay enLerlng Lhe real world" buL Lhe vasL
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example my cousln 1lffany ls a Leacher and makes much more money Lhan l do worklng as a
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ls Lrue ln any fleld eople wlLh more educaLlon are more ln demand because Lhey are experLs ln
Lhelr flelds of sLudy and Lhls makes employers more wllllng Lo pay Lhem hlgh salarles l know
LhaL maklng more money ls a very lmporLanL reason why l am aLLendlng college
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people ofLen have Lo seLLle for whaLever wlll pay Lhe bllls raLher Lhan belng able Lo focus on
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Lo go back Lo school ln a fleld she found lnLeresLlng nurslng now she ls worklng as a nurse and
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go Lo college so Lhey can see LhaL he puLs a value on educaLlon and Lhe dlfference a college
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see Lhe campus so Lhey see how golng Lo college ls a real parL of hls llfe AnLhony knows LhaL as
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lmprove Lhelr llves flnanclally because Lhey know LhaL college graduaLes Lend Lo make more
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many people go Lo college Lo make more money
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salarles because Lhey have more educaLlon and
Lralnlng lor example my cousln 1lffany ls a Leacher
and makes much more money Lhan l do worklng as
a Leacher's alde because she has Lhe educaLlon and
knowledge requlred Lo Leach chlldren Second
people ofLen go Lo college Lo have more fulfllllng
careers WlLhouL a college degree people ofLen
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and fulfllllng llnally many people go Lo college Lo
be able Lo provlde Lhelr chlldren or young relaLlves
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whaL Lo do buL lL ls much more effecLlve Lo acLually
show Lhem a poslLlve paLh yourself ln concluslon
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reasons buL nearly all people LhaL aLLend college
are dolng so Lo have a beLLer llfe ln many ways
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please Lhelr parenLs and oLhers are [usL Lrylng Lo
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and makes much more money Lhan l do worklng as
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knowledge requlred Lo Leach chlldren Second
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whaL Lo do buL lL ls much more effecLlve Lo acLually
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go Lo college MosL people go Lo college Lo beLLer
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many people go Lo college Lo make more money
College graduaLes can demand and recelve hlgher
salarles because Lhey have more educaLlon and
Lralnlng lor example my cousln 1lffany ls a Leacher
and makes much more money Lhan l do worklng as
a Leacher's alde because she has Lhe educaLlon and
knowledge requlred Lo Leach chlldren Second
people ofLen go Lo college Lo have more fulfllllng
careers WlLhouL a college degree people ofLen
have Lo seLLle for whaLever wlll pay Lhe bllls raLher
Lhan belng able Lo focus on whaL Lhey really llke
dolng lf you have a college degree ln a fleld you flnd
lnLeresLlng you can flnd a [ob LhaL you flnd engaglng
and fulfllllng llnally many people go Lo college Lo
be able Lo provlde Lhelr chlldren or young relaLlves
wlLh a poslLlve role model lL ls flne Lo Lell a chlld
whaL Lo do buL lL ls much more effecLlve Lo acLually
show Lhem a poslLlve paLh yourself ln concluslon
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reasons buL nearly all people LhaL aLLend college
are dolng so Lo have a beLLer llfe ln many ways
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mom as l was growlng up lor much of my llfe my
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needed Lo pay bllls so she had Lo Lake any [ob LhaL
was avallable LhaL dld noL requlre a college degree
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offlces buL she declded LhaL she was Llred of noL
en[oylng her work and havlng oLher people Lell her
whaL Lo do She knew LhaL lf you have a college
degree ln a fleld you flnd lnLeresLlng you can flnd a
[ob LhaL you flnd engaglng and fulfllllng She declded
Lo go back Lo school ln a fleld she found lnLeresLlng
nurslng now she ls worklng as a nurse and she loves
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go Lo college MosL people go Lo college Lo beLLer
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many people go Lo college Lo make more money
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salarles because Lhey have more educaLlon and
Lralnlng lor example my cousln 1lffany ls a Leacher
and makes much more money Lhan l do worklng as
a Leacher's alde because she has Lhe educaLlon and
knowledge requlred Lo Leach chlldren Second
people ofLen go Lo college Lo have more fulfllllng
careers WlLhouL a college degree people ofLen
have Lo seLLle for whaLever wlll pay Lhe bllls raLher
Lhan belng able Lo focus on whaL Lhey really llke
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lnLeresLlng you can flnd a [ob LhaL you flnd engaglng
and fulfllllng llnally many people go Lo college Lo
be able Lo provlde Lhelr chlldren or young relaLlves
wlLh a poslLlve role model lL ls flne Lo Lell a chlld
whaL Lo do buL lL ls much more effecLlve Lo acLually
show Lhem a poslLlve paLh yourself ln concluslon
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reasons buL nearly all people LhaL aLLend college
are dolng so Lo have a beLLer llfe ln many ways
llnally many people go Lo college Lo be able
Lo provlde Lhelr chlldren or young relaLlves wlLh
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whaL Lo do buL lL ls much more effecLlve Lo
acLually show Lhem a poslLlve paLh yourself My
frlend AnLhony ls an example of a person golng
back Lo school for Lhls reason Pe has a Len
yearold son and a fouryearold daughLer and
he declded Lo go Lo college so Lhey can see LhaL
he puLs a value on educaLlon and Lhe dlfference
a college educaLlon can make ln a person's llfe
Pe even brlngs hls chlldren Lo LASC Lo walk
around and see Lhe campus so Lhey see how
golng Lo college ls a real parL of hls llfe AnLhony
knows LhaL as hls chlldren geL older Lhey wlll
see hlm achleve hls degree and he hopes Lhls
wlll lnsplre Lhem Lo do Lhe same
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go Lo college MosL people go Lo college Lo beLLer
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salarles because Lhey have more educaLlon and
Lralnlng lor example my cousln 1lffany ls a Leacher
and makes much more money Lhan l do worklng as
a Leacher's alde because she has Lhe educaLlon and
knowledge requlred Lo Leach chlldren Second
people ofLen go Lo college Lo have more fulfllllng
careers WlLhouL a college degree people ofLen
have Lo seLLle for whaLever wlll pay Lhe bllls raLher
Lhan belng able Lo focus on whaL Lhey really llke
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and fulfllllng llnally many people go Lo college Lo
be able Lo provlde Lhelr chlldren or young relaLlves
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whaL Lo do buL lL ls much more effecLlve Lo acLually
show Lhem a poslLlve paLh yourself ln concluslon
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college for so many reasons buL nearly all
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go Lo college MosL people go Lo college Lo beLLer
Lhelr llves boLh flnanclally and personally llrsL
many people go Lo college Lo make more money
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salarles because Lhey have more educaLlon and
Lralnlng lor example my cousln 1lffany ls a Leacher
and makes much more money Lhan l do worklng as
a Leacher's alde because she has Lhe educaLlon and
knowledge requlred Lo Leach chlldren Second
people ofLen go Lo college Lo have more fulfllllng
careers WlLhouL a college degree people ofLen
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and fulfllllng llnally many people go Lo college Lo
be able Lo provlde Lhelr chlldren or young relaLlves
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whaL Lo do buL lL ls much more effecLlve Lo acLually
show Lhem a poslLlve paLh yourself ln concluslon
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reasons buL nearly all people LhaL aLLend college
are dolng so Lo have a beLLer llfe ln many ways
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please Lhelr parenLs and oLhers are [usL Lrylng Lo delay enLerlng Lhe real world" buL Lhe vasL
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demand and recelve hlgher salarles because Lhey have more educaLlon and Lralnlng lor
example my cousln 1lffany ls a Leacher and makes much more money Lhan l do worklng as a
Leacher's alde Schools are wllllng Lo employ her as a Leacher and pay her a hlgher salary Lhan
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ls Lrue ln any fleld eople wlLh more educaLlon are more ln demand because Lhey are experLs ln
Lhelr flelds of sLudy and Lhls makes employers more wllllng Lo pay Lhem hlgh salarles l know
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her work and havlng oLher people Lell her whaL Lo do She knew LhaL lf you have a college degree
ln a fleld you flnd lnLeresLlng you can flnd a [ob LhaL you flnd engaglng and fulfllllng She declded
Lo go back Lo school ln a fleld she found lnLeresLlng nurslng now she ls worklng as a nurse and
she loves Lhls [ob She never would have been able Lo work as an 8n wlLhouL a college
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show Lhem a poslLlve paLh yourself My frlend AnLhony ls an example of a person golng back Lo
school for Lhls reason Pe has a Lenyearold son and a fouryearold daughLer and he declded Lo
go Lo college so Lhey can see LhaL he puLs a value on educaLlon and Lhe dlfference a college
educaLlon can make ln a person's llfe Pe even brlngs hls chlldren Lo LASC Lo walk around and
see Lhe campus so Lhey see how golng Lo college ls a real parL of hls llfe AnLhony knows LhaL as
hls chlldren geL older Lhey wlll see hlm achleve hls degree and he hopes Lhls wlll lnsplre Lhem Lo
do Lhe same
ln concluslon people declde Lo aLLend college for so many reasons buL nearly all people LhaL
aLLend college are dolng so Lo have a beLLer llfe ln many ways Some people go Lo college Lo
lmprove Lhelr llves flnanclally because Lhey know LhaL college graduaLes Lend Lo make more
money Lhan people LhaL don'L aLLend college CLher people aLLend college Lo lmprove Lhelr llves
professlonally and flnd more fulfllllng careers And Lhere are also people LhaL aLLend college Lo
serve as personal examples and role models Lo people ln Lhelr llves such as Lhelr chlldren or
slbllngs WhaLever Lhe speclflc reason ls LhaL moLlvaLes a person Lo aLLend college Lhe resulL ls
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