Sara Doster English 1103-036 Susan Ingram Cover Letter (Draft 2, 3-sided) 17 October 2012

I revised my draft by doing a lot of clarifying and fixing some of my MLA in-text citations. Some of my view points had become a little lost or non-existent when I began to write my assignment and really get into the research. When my group had gone over my paper, they told me that the question I thought was asking, was really different from what my research said, which I thought was strange. Ive finally discovered my new topic of How Can Society Better Help ADHD Victims Function in Life. According to my group, the only real changes I needed to make were for clarification, and I feel I went back and accomplished that. I do feel my piece accomplished the goals of the overall assignment. I shared the opinions of both sides equally and adequately I feel and that I did a thorough job. For my visual, Im still not sure. I have some ideas, but Im not sure if it is really going to accomplish its purpose or not. Im having a lot of difficulty when thinking of ideas that pertain to my topic, but I know I should be able to push through it.