Journal 9 Tim Overby Ms. Hollingsworth Senior Project 15 Nov.

2012 Try, Try Again When I first began my research paper for Senior Project, I became very excited knowing I am almost finished with Senior Project. After all the long hours of work, my Senior Project was finally coming to an end. I hoped someone could use my paper in the future to learn more about joining the military and its perks and shortcomings. I can improve my paper by giving more specifics in an easy-to-understand form for those that were like me when I first started gathering information about the military. Because I job shadowed a military recruiter, my research paper discussed three problems and possible solutions for each. After completion of my researcher paper, I came to realize a few points I could have discussed differently. I am sure some of my sentences could be more specific. I hope not to confuse my readers, so I plan on going back and revising every sentence that needs to have more specific details. I want to make sure that my paper can answer a persons questions on the welfare and status of a present day soldier. Even though my paper will not answer every question, I hope to structure in it to help those who wonder about the life of a soldier. I hope to make my paper more informative and structured an easy to understand format. I hope to create a successful paper that will give readers the key points and problems of the military that they did not know.