Feedback from Facebook for First Draft

These are the comments I have gained through using facebook and using twitter to direct audience members to view the video on facebook. Some of them were really useful and has allowed me to see the strengths and weaknesses of my video and what to improve on. I have put them into

bullet points for easier reading.

-I really like the different locations used, I think they make it look really colourful and interesting. -Reece is a really good actor -I really like some of the dancers clothing! -I like the simple story but I think it could be made stronger, there is something missing -Flashes at the beginning were good I think there should be more of them to make it look more realistic - ^^ I dont agree I think the flashes make the video look slightly unprofessional and student like. -I like the paintings and art thats shown in the video -The dancers really bring the video to life, I like how they have the same camera time as the artist. -The continuity could be improved, maybe by using more flashes, and then it will look more purposeful. -I think it looks jumpy and doesnt flow that well, other than that I like the concept and the urban theme in it, I think it shows really well what you are trying to portray.

-Some shots at the beginning didnt look like they belong in the video, too
normal. -I really like the different settings; they really bring a sense of identity to the theme and genre.

-Cool dancers -I love example and I love your representation of the video, it really shows his identity of being laid back yet hard working.