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A night at the brothel (adaptation) Mela: whats up friends Im going to tell you a story about my busyness..

Roge: hello friend how are you? Jack: Im fine thanks and you? Roge: Im fine too, what are you gong to drink jack? Jack: whiskey is good Roge: yeah sounds good, but Im going to drink a cognac Jack: and you Joe, what do you prefer to drink? Joe: a beer its ok. Roge: hey miss Mela! , can we have a drink of whiskey, cognac and one beer please? Mela: yes sir, one second please. Roge: friends, I been thinking in one girl of this place Joe: which one? Jack: yeah man which one? Tell us Roge: that girl! , the chestnut hair down, I think her name is Britney. Joe: yeah man she is so beautiful. Jack: yeah but the other girls are not bad! Mela: here are your drinks. All: thank you Mela! Joe: do you want to meet her? Joe: yeah, I want to meet her

Joe: Britney come here please! Britney: hi Joe what do you want? Joe: i want to introduce you some friends Britney: hi guys how are you? (All): fine thanks Joe: Britney this is my friend Roge, he want to meet you. Roge: hi Britney, nice to meet you Britney: nice to meet you too Roge: and, you want to drink something? Britney: sure! Roge: friends, Ill see you later. Joe: see you, and good luck. Jack: see you man, and take care about her. Britney: ha ha bye guys. _____________________________________ (dance and love scene)

Mela: after some drinks, the new couple had a great night. They want to know more.. Roge: I want to know you better, can I? Britney: why not, you are so cute. Roge: what do you think if i invite you to eat? Britney: sure Ill wait for you.

Mela: the next day, Britney told her friends this adventure with Roge. Britney: girls, yesterday I met the man of my life. Liza Mey: tell us, what is his name? Britney: his name is Roge. Lindsay Lohala: and is cute? Britney: of course, and millionaire. Lindsay Lohala: perfect Britney, i think with Roge's money we can get out of this hole. Britney: yeah Lindsay Lohala, but I love him. Lindsay Lohala: oh yes , that is the most important thing, you love him, right Liza Mey? Liza Mey: yeah but, I hate this work, I want to leave this life. Lindsay: ok girls, but for now we have to work. It is too late. Liza Mey: yes, hurry up!

Mela: Then in another site.Roge and his wife discussed

Roge: honey!! Jenny: (angry) mmm.. hello Roge: are you angry? Jenny: what do you think? Roge: I dont know you tell me Jenny: (screaming) where have you been these last days? Tell me where the hell you spent the night? Roge: I have a lot of work, Im a business man. Jenny: Im your wife, you have to respect me. Roge: I do, trust me. Jenny: and what about this text from Britney? Roge: is a woman with whom I have business Jenny: (slap, hit him) dont lie! Roge: I dont, Im leaving you. Jenny: are you coming to dinner? Roge: I dont think so (Roge has gone) Jenny: (sad cry) why?? Jack: Jenny what happened, why are you crying? Jenny: I have some problems. Jack: can I help you in anything?

Jenny: I dont know... Just hold me Jack: sure (hug) Jenny: is good to have you (kiss) Jack: stop jenny, this is not ok, Roge is my best friend. Jenny: I know you love me Jack: yeah but... Jenny: Ill ask about divorce, just kiss me! __________________________________________ (love scene)

Jenny: when I see you again? Jack: maybe tomorrow. Joe: Jack, Jenny what are you doing here? Jenny: this is not what it seems Joe: Im not a fool Im going to tell Roge. Jack: Hold on! Joe: what? Jenny: I propose you a deal, money is not missing you! Joe: I hear you. Jenny: is not something you haven't already done Jack: what are you thinking? Jenny: I'll give you a check for the amount you want Joe: what is the job? Jenny: just kill Roge.

Jack and Joe: what!?? Jenny: just need shoot him Joe: think about what you say, there's no turning back Jenny: I'm talking seriously Joe: well Ill do Jack: how to keep you? I dont have work. Jenny: as the wife of Roge Ill inherit all his money. Joe: its fine see you at funeral hahaha. Roge: hello Britney, I missed you. Britney: I missed you too honey, I have something important to tell you Roge: tell me Britney: Im just a dancer buy Im respected. Roge: yes I know. Britney: You're the only man I've been in the bed Roge: I believe you I was thinking you mustnt work here. Britney: Im pregnant. Roge: really? Britney: yes, I did blood tests. Roge: great news! I need to divorce. Britney: are you sure? Roge: yes and I will tell the notary to change my testament. Britney: I go with you. Roge: no, you should rest. I love you

Britney: ok bye, I love you too. _______________________________ (next day at the brothel..)

Roge: Joe, how are you? Joe: Im fine, we need to talk. Roge: what happen? Joe: from today I wont work for you. Roge: why? Joe: I have to do something bad Rogue: what? Joe: this (he shoots Roge). Lindsay Lohala & Liza Mey: oh my god!! (Joe has gone) Lindsay Lohala: Liza we have to tell Britney about this!! Liza Mey: we have to tell her, Roge has been killed.

____________________________________ (ten months after death) Mela: after the death of Roger. Joe ends up in jail. Britney inherited a large fortune to his son, with that money bought her freedom and also bought Lindsay Lohala and Lizas freedom. I had to sell my brothel to pay my retirement. I never heard about jenny and jack. I guess they escaped to another country.

Mela: Ana Pava. Roge: Ral Argelles Pizarro. Joe: Pablo Lpez Gamboa. Jack: Alejandro Campuzano Lozoya. Britney: Yarumi Contreras. Lindsay Lohala: Bryanda Bryant. Liza Mey: Paola Corona.

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