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Post conference reflection 1 After my conference with you I realized that I need to work on my introduction and come up with

topics that I would be more interested in. If I had topics I was interested in I would have a lot more details and would be able to make my paragraphs flow better. The last thing I need to do is state my opinion better and make it more clear to the reader. I am going to Focus on mental health and physical fitness and how the two correlate. I am trying to argue that having poor physical health can greatly affect someones mental health in a number of ways and how people that exercise tend to be more healthy mentally.

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