Kyminis Vialet English 1102-041 Elizabeth Caruso April 15, 2013 Response to Feedback on CAP Project

Overall your comments on my project were useful. I was able to see where my own personal opinion should be inputted and also were to include more details. Certain comments such as COMMENT 3 were added because of peer review and paraphrasing. I attempted to paraphrase what was said in order to emphasize the issue that was occurring in insurance companies and in doctors offices. Your comments basically allowed me to see that I need to expanded and delve into my personal opinion and a solution more. I need not talk strictly about the problem and that something needs to be done but rather what exactly can be done. I also need to look into more sources in order to include more details about the health insurance system and health insurance premiums in America.