Mike on Marquis -Make sure to reference the 2 articles that are mandatory for this assignment.

-Maybe add captions of the questions you are asking the person whom you are interviewing, because it seems he is mumbling them when he reads them. -You could add other short clips or images of other moves too. This would help show more of a variety. -If its not too distracting, keep that theme music in the background during the interviews as well. It has a very catching tune to it. -You could also include a third video interview, to get yet another perspective of why someone likes to get involved in this activity. -The step by step process into the practice is a nice touch. - How you have labeled each different dance move does help the viewer understand what is going on. -The theme music in the background appealed to the video concept quite well. -It was a very easy transition from one scene to the next. Makes it easy to follow. -The fading images during the different dance moves made the images for enhanced as well.

Rosio on Marquis: -Good visuals and effects with the video -Good way to add captions to explain the moves -Like how you incorporated the interview - I like the music that you added to show the moves. - Also good step-by-step explanation and showing how to begin. - Good transitions throughout the video -Also you could also talk about literacy practices how do you learn/ how is it taught -If you introduce the topic of the project at the beginning it would allow viewer to know what is being showed and talked about, not just that they are going to learn dance steps. -Introduce your figured world and the restrictions and expected behavior. -Show artifacts/ explain how they relate.

-Also you could show an actor ex. Who is the leader or who show initiative to start.

Aishah on Marquis: - You have a great introduction - I like the music and the way you combine text and image - Good effects and transitions between each step - I like how you explain each step and gave some definition for some specific steps - Over all you did great job on your video - How about include some sort of artifacts to your video - You could type your interview questions and interviewing more people. - You could add self-taken photographs - Talk more your figured world and why you choose it - How about some good ending for your entire video