"KISS, KISS, BANG, BANG"
(2005)
You'll Never Die In This Town Again
by
Shane Black
NOVEMBER Revisions
November 21, 2003I stood upon a high place
And I saw, below, many devils
Running, leaping,
And cavorting in sin.
One looked up, grinning,
and said, “Comrade! Brother!"
-- Stephen Crane
The entrance to the Denton Towers was
clegged with police cars and curiosity
seekers.
“Wonder what’s wrong there?” Liddell
asked.
The cabby grunted. “Some dame probably
gave herself the deep six. The joint’s
full of kepties and every so often they
come out of those windows like leaves in
a rainstorm.”
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Frank Kane, BARE TRAP, 1952FADE IN:
ECU of PAPER; you can see the pulp texture.
Pause... Another shape appears, bright RED and huge.
A THUMBNAIL. CAMERA begins, slowly, to pull back...
A PEN POINT. It begins WRITING gracefully:
NO ONE WILL UNDERSTAND WHAT I'M
GOING TO DO TONIGHT. THAT'S OKAY.
Pulling back. Feminine HANDS now, in view.
MY DECISION, HOWEVER, IS A RATIONAL,
COGNATIVE ONE. I CAN NO LONGER
Stops. Finger taps the page thoughtfully. Reaches off --
re-enters with a DICTIONARY. Flips through it.
COG-NI-TIVE, adj.
She scratches out the word COGNATIVE. COGNITIVE in its
place. Sets aside the dictionary. Continues:
I CAN NO LONGER PERSERVERE. IT MAY
COMFORT MY FATHER TO KNOW THAT MY SUICIDE
Grabs the dictionary. Flips through... PERSEVERE, v.
PERSERVERE wrong; PERSEVERE, that's got it...
‘TO KNOW THAT MY SUICIDE IS DUE
ONLY PARTIALLY TO HIM.
A pause, then, as an afterthought:
YOU THINK I'M STUPID, DADDY BUT I'M NOT
BLACK SCREEN. Pause... then we SUPER:
DAY ONE - TROUBLE IS MY BUSINESS
EXT. HOLLYWOOD HILLS ~ NIGHT
‘The CAMERA roams the canyons west. Starts high in the
night air. DIPS toward the road, free-falling...
Whooooosh..! Falls into line, alongside fast-moving
CARS, all rushing uphill... To an opulent HOUSE. .
LIMOS rolling in, as we HEAR: