How To Write A Composition For weaker pupils or GALUS

A Write in 3 paragraphs Introduction, Content , Closure INTRODUCTION ( 1st picture )

holidays stayed grandfathers farm rears chickens - ducks

Write about the character ( girl, boy, man, woman) Ask a few questions about the character - Who ? my cousin, neighbour or best friend - What ? how old, race - Where? he lives in - What ? give an adjective or two that are suitable to the story Example Ali is my best friend. He is 12 years old.He lives in Kampung Setia. He is kind and helpful.His grandfather has some chickens and ducks.

11 B CONTENT ( 2 picture )
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helped work early picked - fed 1. 2. Underline the words that you know. Try to write using the sentence table ( Subject / Verb / Agreement) Example: SUBJECT WHO? Ali He He He His grandfather 3.
4.

VERB WHAT? went helped picked fed took

OBJECT+PLACE+TIME WHAT? WHERE? WHEN? to the farm last holidays his grandfather in the farm the eggs the chickens and ducks the eggs to the shop

Join up the sentences to form a paragraph. Try using as many words as possible.

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Closure ( 3 picture )

rd

afternoon eggs van shops learnt - business

1. Give an ending to the story 2. Show your feelings. ( happy, sad, excited ) 3. Tell your experience e.g.: I had a happy time at my grandfathers village.

SUBJECT WHO? Ali He He

VERB WHAT? sold went was

OBJECT+PLACE+TIME WHAT? WHERE? WHEN? the eggs in the afternoon to the shops by van very happy

13 Sample answer
Look at the pictures. You may use the words given to write about a visit to a farm. You are advised to spend about 35 minutes on this questions.

holidays stayed grandfathers farm rears chickens - ducks

helped work early picked - fed

afternoon eggs van shops learnt - business

Ali is my best friend. He is 12 years old.He lives in Kampung Setia. He is kind and helpful. Last holidays, Ali went to his grandfathers farm in Terengganu. His grandfather has many chickens and ducks. Ali helped his grandfather in the farm. He picked the eggs and fed the chickens and ducks.

Ali sold the eggs in the afternoon. He went to the shops by van. Ali was happy. 14