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    "Prevention" was moved to put more emphasis on the dysfunction. "Are strong" was edited to "can be severe" since symptoms may not be so strong in some patients vs. In others.

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    "Prevention" was moved to put more emphasis on the dysfunction. "Are strong" was edited to "can be severe" since symptoms may not be so strong in some patients vs. In others.

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    ISHIMITSU Remarks

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    "Prevention" was moved to put more emphasis on the dysfunction. "Are strong" was edited to "can be severe" since symptoms may not be so strong in some patients vs. In others.

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    Remarks 1. Prevention was moved to put more emphasis on the dysfunction. 2. It seemed somewhat unclear in the original wording what the structured date collection referred to. Editing correct that you are referring to data collection using the MA version of OSA? 3. Change to plural (nurses) correct? 4. Is the location of the company needed? 5. Editing was done for clarity; please review carefully. 6. are strong was edited to can be severe since symptoms may not be so strong in some patients vs in others: OK?

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