What are the strengths of the proposal?

The twist on the story is very original and will make people want to read it due to the fact that everybody knows the original story, but now they will want to read this as a follow on of the book.

What are the weaknesses of the proposal? One thing which could be improved on is that you could go in to more detail about what product you are going to make, you could specify how many frames would be on each page.

What are the strengths of the generation of ideas? You have gone in to detail about which characters will appear in the novel, saying what age they will be. You have also expanded on the methods which could/will be used.

What are the weaknesses of the generation of ideas? The mind map lacks in the aspect of alternative ideas. This could be improved by showing some other concepts of the wolf, such as the wolf wearing clothes.