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Genre Recreation Rationale Cover Letter
Genre Recreation Rationale Cover Letter
coherent statement of my original text has stayed true through the transformation of the genre into a collage. What changed is that the subject in the collage is clearer, the purpose is more difficult to discern, and the audience is a much larger group of people than in the original text which was song lyrics. I think that the weaknesses of my paper are the very beginning and the conclusion. I feel that I could have a stronger hook at the beginning and an overall broad statement at the end of my conclusion. The strengths of my paper are the body paragraphs where I break down the evolution of the rhetorical elements. I would like you to focus on the weaknesses I stated previously in order to give me advice on what I could add to the opening and closing paragraphs.