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Andy Todd: As you can see, I made a few changes to the document.

These changes were made to follow consistency that you started along with making sure all steps were numbered. The majority of the editing done pertained to the changing of numbering and making sure all Tips were set in the same style. As far as grammar and punctuation, there were not too many errors. Personally, I do not feel that any words should have single quotations or any quotations at all unless the statement is being copied from another source. Overall, the document cover the necessary information, just a consistent structure would help the audience in the document flow. Thank you, Megan Whitney

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