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Descriptive writing

20/11/2013 00:39:00

Leaves crunching beneath her feet, branches stinging her bare legs like angry bees, she sprinted, blonde hair glinting in the wind as she fought through the dark, dense forest. It was as if the thought of death itself was chasing her as a wild animal would chase its prey.

^^ simile ^^ additional phrase to make the text more linked to its theme ^^ original phrase ^^ sense of human

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