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Academic Writing Sample Task 1 (Don Gian-Ok)
Academic Writing Sample Task 1 (Don Gian-Ok)
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
ou should write at least !"# words. ou should spend about $# minutes on this task.
model answer: The graph shows how age and gender influence the frequency of heart attacks in the US. Less than 6% of all heart attacks occur in the 29- only #$$$ per year% co!pared to &2#%$$$ !en. age group. The nu!"er of wo!en who suffer heart attacks in this group is negligi"le
'owe(er the proportion of !en and wo!en with heart attacks rises dra!atically "etween ) and 6 % with o(er half a !illion per year. *(er 2$%$$$ !en a year in this age group ha(e heart attacks. The incidence a!ongst wo!en increases - wo!en ha(e one heart attack for e(ery three !en in this age group. *(er the age of 6)% the nu!"er of !en suffering heart attacks only increases slightly. 'owe(er there is a huge increase in the nu!"er of wo!en with heart attacks - they co!prise o(er $% of all (icti!s. +n conclusion% !en are !ore likely to "e the (icti!s of heart attacks at all ages% "ut wo!en are increasingly likely o(er the age of 6)