You had a good central topic and I understood where you were trying to go with things.

Ti seemed to jump around just slightly so maybe if you try to organize it out a little bit it would be a little more clear. Overall it was a really good topic and I liked your aneodote. One thing you might want to add is the terms we talked about in class since it is a good amount of our grade. If you do some of these it will also help to lengthen it a little. Also maybe you can try to relate what happened on that walk with how your literature is now. Overall you had a really good video. by ichael Taraboulous

I enjoed that you talk about how you dont really know where you learned how to read and write. I can kind of relate to that in a way. !chool was more of guikelines and going with the flow was usualy what some people did. memories are also more faint when youre younger oaybe you should try to incorporate brandt and the terms that we talked about in class "literacy sponsor# Institutional sponsors$ to relate it vack to your parents reading to you and school. I like that you had like a %&' degree change on reading books after the incident with the ditch. !hows connection to today and your progress through literacy. by (anella )ual