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McKayla Wheeler REH 101-04 M.

Weaver 18 October 2013 Cover Letter: Rational Dear Reader, I had some difficulty with this paper. I found it difficult to elaborate and include detail. I felt like I was essentially repeating my last paper. Please take note of any areas where you feel I need more elaboration or the connection between my old text and new is unclear. As always, please also help me with proof reading for grammatical errors and clarity. I realize that some words such as Internet and library along with purpose and audience are repeated. If you have any recommendations for substitutions please let me know. I feel that that I did a good job with keeping wordiness to a minimum and making connections to my old text. I feel ok about the conclusion of this paper but I still feel that overall conclusions and introductions are my biggest challenge. Thank you for taking the time to read my paper and for your feedback. McKayla Wheeler

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