Races Impact on Athletes Accused of a Crime Reflection This essay I did was in my composition two class I did last

semester at OSU. After this paper I had to drop this class because I got a 38% on this paper. The only thing I really noticed that is wrong with the first paragraph is that I could have used a better work selection. In the second paragraph I believe I did a good job introducing the quotes and explaining what they said after the quotes. I could have done a little better in the transition of paragraphs but I think I did ok with it. over the next couple of paragraphs the only think that I believe is wrong is a few grammar issues but I think that is it. The conclusion paragraph for once is longer than three sentences for once. I say this is an improvement. The only reason I picked this essay is because it makes me super mad because the only reason see gave me 38% is because she hated my topic.