Example of Changes in the Drafts In the Violet I revised my thesis in the final draft to include more elements about

t the rhetorical analysis of World War Z. In my final I changed the thesis to mention the types of initial responses, in comparison of just mentioning the interviews that will be talked about further along in the body paragraphs. In the Green I highlighted the first body paragraph and the 4th body paragraph in the draft because I ended up combining the two paragraphs, since they provided a stronger argument combining the two ideas.