The folk tale about an annoying lawyer who only looks at things through a microscope -by Kezia

Once upon a time there are a annoying lawyer named Oba,he has a wife named Jenie,and he has kids named barac.Oba is a smart lawyer but there are one things stick in his mind that is annoying.One days Oba is late for him work because he watch Mr.Bean movie,and that is not the first times he late for work this is the 16 times.He watch the Mr.Bean movie because Oba want to be like him/want to be stupid and be a jokers.One day he has a job that the problem is DRUNK.But Oba not believe because he not see in the microscope,then he make a joke in the council.He saidThis problem is not to important,he just drink a soda.Then he leave the room.Then he go home,then all the people in the council is very angry.In the next day he been called with president.You know the next he F.I.R.E.D.

Oba sayOk,bye-bye.He always make a joke when there are sometings important.Day by Day he looks very lonely.Then he go to the law court,He not see anyone.He then go to the toilet he say to him self I am handsome,why they fired me.Then he go out from toilet and go to the car then go back home.Then he arrive to him home with sad face,his wife ask Why are you??.I not want to be annoying anymore,are you feel a I am annoying?Oba said.She saidLittle.Then he change to be kind.He looking for a jobs,then he got that job that are a bussnise man.he never want annoying anymore because he know people not want annoying guy.

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