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Instruction Manuals, Peer Review

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Instruction Manual Peer Review Sheet*

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0% 2o the instructions have a clear, appropriate title. )% 2oes the introduction to the instructions o State the purpose of the tas$. o 2escri!e safet( easures or other concerns that rea#ers shoul# un#erstan#. o List necessar( tools an# aterials. 3% 6re the step-by-step instructions o 4u !ere#. o E7presse# w8 active, i perative ver!s. o Si ple, clear, an# #irect. o Eas( to follow9coul# (ou #o this proce#ure using this gui#e. o 6cco panie# !( appropriate citations. 1% 6re the graphics o 6ppropriate an# clear. o Locate# near their correspon#ing te7t. o 6cco panie# !( #escriptive captions. o 6cco panie# !( appropriate citations.

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*6ssess ent Sheet, a#apte# fro Mar$el=s page :>1

Assessment Overview (hint: start with a positivewhats wor ing here!": #i e cover page$ #i e images$ #i e page layout$ %uggest larger &ont &or step te't$ %ome things are are unclear: terms ((I)-I*"+ needle preparation+ minimum age to administer shot+ precautions at intro , what i& they have egg allergies! %ome wordiness %ome grammar could be improved