Carlos Sanchez!

! Professor Gabrielsson! ! English 100! !

2 October 2013! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Essay questions part 2!

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First I would re-read my essay to see what are my strong's and weakness that

are composed within my essay. All grammar errors should be corrected as well but most importantly read my facts so that everything is accurate. Brainstorming all over again would be a big factor because it being my rst draft it wouldn't surprise me that it will look horrible. After knowing where I need to work on and getting down my ideas for the most concrete essay without aws I will start all over use what I think will benet me from my rst draft to help me compose a stronger second draft. Since it is a synthesize essay the connection within author to author is exceptional. Therefore my method in dealing with each author one-at-a-time will harm my essay from blossoming into the piece I will be content with. The association with the distinctive procedures/techniques is important, letting you have a better apprehension of the concept of a "Growth-Mindset" thinker. Overall using the feedback that was giving to me it will benet my essay making it a much more vigorous essay that will make me as a writer proud of what I have develop. Making my literacy skills expand and providing me with the fundamental tools that are needed to succeed as a writer.