Revision Strategy for Conan Doyle Essay Introduction Add an interesting hook Condense summary of my text and add

details that are relevant to my genre convention Revise thesis so it states why my convention is important to how people read the story and experience the mystery genre (go beyond the obvious) Include what stage the genre convention is on (classical) Define mystery genre and name several conventions, then specify one for analysis

Body Paragraphs Create/revise a topic sentence to center around an idea of the thesis Choose between summarizing, paraphrasing, or quoting (introduce context) Analyze that passage to answer the topic sentence (break down parts of the passage and group them) ***Make sure to not summarize, but explain importance (analyze)*** Create/ revise a wrap up sentence in a creative, non-repetitive way

Conclusion Include the stage of the genre convention in modern day (revisionist)

Prioritize 1. Revise thesis so it states why my convention is important to how people read the story and experience the mystery genre (go beyond the obvious) 2. Condense summary of my text and add details that are relevant to my genre convention 3. Define mystery genre and name several conventions, then specify one for analysis 4. Include what stage the genre convention is on (classical) 5. Create/ revise a topic sentence to center around an idea of the thesis 6. Choose between summarizing, paraphrasing, or quoting (introduce context) 7. Analyze that passage to answer the topic sentence (break down parts of the passage and group them) ***Make sure to not summarize, but explain importance (analyze)*** 8. Create a wrap up sentence in a creative, non-repetitive way 9. Include the stage of the genre convention in modern day (revisionist) 10. Add an interesting hook