NAME: Ben TASK

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The giffs work well the portraits do give a sense of disorder, to improve you could try taking the images closer up focusing more on the models facial expressions. Where is this response

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The items that you have taken apart are interesting but TI would have liked to have seen more items photographed, electrical objects work well because they are made up of many small parts. The phones have potential but they would have been more effective if photographed close up. You could maybe start to look at the contents of peoples pockets look at the blog of Hype Beast. The stills are excellent but I would like to see you use a Tfew of these images to create a gif of traffic moving

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