Focus group feedback:

They also said I should make all the bits of writing below the co!er lines in one bo" instead of ha!ing two like some of them to make it easier on the eye. They also said that I could mo!e the poster and barcode around but I did decide against that because you generally look to the left hand side first when you look at a magazine for the first time.

They also thought I should make Sophie Bradshaw bigger and bolder as this is the person on the front of the co!er. They thought I could also make all the other co!er lines smaller to make the main co!er line stand out more.

My focus group told me to change the colour of these words to make them stand out more possibly in a yellow colour as it just blends in and that could be the thing that makes them buy the magazine.