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    Brittany Mcintosh: Assignment 2 Commented Draft PDF

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    Commented Draft

    by Brittany McIntosh - Wednesday, 19 March 2014, 10:29 AM



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    Re: Commented Draft
    by Yunlong Liu - Wednesday, 19 March 2014, 10:37 AM

    I think you did a great job on assignment two. You explore the benefits of fitness and try to make
    more people to join in this activity. the only problem you have is the papare is a litttle bit short if
    you add more details in our papaer, it will be better.

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