The diagram in question provides the comparison of the two recent music websites in terms of

views. The data was collected during the first half of an unknown calendar month and is presented in
thousands of visits. From an overall perspective, both websites received significant increase number
of visitors at the end of the study.
The most striking feature is that Pop Parade always seems to be more attractive than its competitor.
The starting point was 120.000 views at the beginning of the month. The number then reduced
dramatically to only 40.000 eight days later. The remaining period of the month witnessed wild
fluctuations of visits before it reached the highest peak of approximately 170.000 on the last day.
Turning to the second website Music choice, which received merely 40.000 views on the first day,
accounting for only 30%of the other websites viewit is obvious that the number of visitors varied
moderately during the period from the second day of the month to the eleventh dayranging from
20.000 to 60.000 views.However, there was a sudden surge occurred rapidly between day 11 and
day 12, bringing the number of views up to roughly 120.000which is equivalent to the initial mark
of Pop Parade. Finally, the statistics gradually dropped to just below80.000views on the15
th
day.
Optional: In short, the line graph evidently illustrates the variation of visits of the two music websites
both of which climbed up overtime, with one being lower than the other most of the time.
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