Doris Cabrera

Dr. Griffin
English 12
8 May 2014

Comparing Research paper from the beginning to the end of the year.
In September we started a research paper without having a clue on how to write one. I did
everything really wrong in September. Wrongs I did in September:
1) No MLA style
2) No double space
3) No question
4) No work cited page
5) Did not know how to find Owl for all kinds of MLA style
6) Did not write the date right
7) No quote
8) No thesis
9) No explanation to quotes
10) No transition
11) No Interpretive lead
12) No Summarize


In May I learned a lot because it was clearly explained to me. I knew what I was doing I
wrote everything in MLA style and the paragraphs were way better then September.