saw a football game. It all happened at the game. Then we wondered where she was going. We saw she was walking towards a cat. It didnt do anything cause it was 3 legged. So Jenny started feeding it. The cat started to lick Amandas cheeks. Capital letters for the start of sentences and for Pronouns Word tense is wrong here. Incorrect spelling. Full stop at the end of a sentence. Apostrophes are used for shortened words. Apostrophe of ownership. Good effort Jenny! Jennys Assignment - Original amanda was walk down the streat. she sore a foot ball game. It all hapened at the game Than Wewondered were she is going. We seen she was walk towards a a cat. It didnt do anything cause it was 3 legged. So Jenny start feeding it. the cat start lick amanda cheaks.